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Can you tell me what you like and what you don't like? For example, how many slaps in the face, how many daily emotional lines, single or multiple heroines. Or the rhythm is too slow or something like that, but I most likely won't change it. Lily + non-harem I hope everyone can give me a rating, because the rating system requires a certain number of comments before the rating will be displayed. [Working on draft]

Don't hide your identity, announce your new identity as soon as possible

That's great, Lily is the best~(￣▽￣~)~

Very nice! Very nice! I just think that the heroine should not be a substitute (personal opinion), she will be very unpopular.

It looks good, but it's a pity that the review doesn't give me any face.

Come on, come on, come on.

Emmmmm I want to see the pig's feet being fucked

It's still good. There are a few minor problems, but they're not major. At least the logic is fine. The plot is not too overwhelming either. Overall it's fine. I don't know how to write after my identity is revealed. Many books are difficult to write once my identity is revealed. The main character is the same as a woman, and the plot will be more life-oriented. The main plot will be slow and the rhythm is wrong. I don't know what will happen next. The success or failure of this book will be after the identity is revealed.

Everything else will do, but the chapter about the heroine's life experience made me feel uncomfortable, and I wanted to beat someone up.

Very good, very suitable to my taste

Come on duck, come on duck

It's a pity that there are still a few words

It's very interesting, but the number of words is too small. The author only updates it twice a day, so I want to keep it for a month.

Everyday, relaxed and happy, very good article

It's very beautiful, but it feels like it's too much trouble. Wouldn't it be better to write more emotional dramas and write some healthy ones? Let me be healthy and only children make choices. I want them all [laughing evilly]