The Paranormal Has Arrived? My Underworld Card Deck Crushes Everything

Very novel, I like it very much. Come on keep it up

The writing is quite good, but you should write less live comments and more content. After all, everyone likes to read interesting articles. Writing too many live comments will affect the perception. I don't know what you are like. I always skip live comments anyway. I originally only wrote so many in one day. If I write too many comments, the content will be less, so the rating will be lower. It is best to write down the level systematically

The plot is very novel and interesting. But every time the fight scenes are so short and the fight ends with just one sentence, the blood boils at the beginning and then it's gone with one blow!!! The climax part is gone. I hope the author will update it every day.

Big cheers for the author! I would like to give you a small suggestion. You can reduce the number of comments from bystanders. Too many people will be a bit boring. There are still some places that are a bit long-winded, I hope to keep up the good work! It can be improved a little more! Overall, it's very good, with novel themes and foreshadowing, and a rich worldview [Chigua] I downgraded a bit. After reading a few chapters, it was really good and I was still shaking. It's boring if I get slapped in the face too much. The material selection is good, but the writing is not that good. I could use more practice.

Overall, it's well written. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. The eldest lady is so annoying. Please update it soon. I can't get enough of it [Chigua]

It's pretty good. It's different from other writings in the future and quite novel. That's why I have to be so stupid and come in at 182,000 words! I finished reading it in a few hours. When I saw the exciting part and saw the word "urge to update", I immediately felt unhappy. I wanted to cry, so I said why am I so mean? 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

The content is good and the plot is also pretty good. That's right... Actually, it would be good to delete some of the shock, disbelief, and inner drama. Half or two-thirds of a chapter is composed of these. Creating a card and dividing it into several chapters is basically impossible, unbelievable, impossible to do again, and delusional... If you remove the keyboard warriors' speeches during the live broadcast, you can continue watching without any sense of violation. The participants also had quite a lot of inner drama, and the psychological activities were so detailed that it was quite shocking... Although the word count may be a bit off, the writing is still good. The plot is still compact.

This book is still very novel. The profession of the card master is combined with the game created by the male protagonist. When I started reading it, I felt that it was very interesting. Because the background said that Kyushu has no gods, so for the male protagonist, all modern legendary figures can be created at his fingertips. The first half of the book was very exciting. Existences that can still shine in an era of heroes will be so shocking and great in the Godless Kyushu. So when the male protagonist created them, I was shocked and moved. Because the male protagonist is cursed, he can only create dark cards, so the characters he creates are basically related to the underworld. Every time he successfully creates a card, the visions of heaven and earth that come down can also improve people's qualifications and repair dark damage. The effect is very good. I have been looking forward to the male protagonist creating new cards to bring down golden rain. The ending is rather rushed. After completing the underworld deck, the weirdness of the abyss was completely suppressed. Only a few characters from other series were created. The male protagonist went to that sea of ten thousand stars and then the ending was a bit rushed.

It's good-looking. The author writes about the coming of gods. The card maker makes magic cards as a carrier to introduce influential figures and countless gods in China. The protagonist grows step by step, his mentality gradually matures, and he recognizes the world. The card making is also progressing step by step in a hierarchical manner. It is not brainless, there is logic and hierarchy, and it makes your blood boil when you watch it. Our soldiers guard the town! In the bloody battlefield, for the lights of thousands of families behind me, I work with the army, kill strange people, protect our homeland, and guard the mountains and rivers. I will fight the road with you all. The protagonist's character is patriotic and sensible online. He currently has no CP and is engaged in career.

It's pretty good. It's in the upper-middle range among the novels I've read. I hope it won't be too bad later on. I've read several books. The first ones were good, but the later ones were bad. I hope this book won't be like those. Just a little bit, what should I say? The pace is a bit slow. It takes several chapters to create a character, and there are too many descriptions of other characters. However, in this case, the descriptions of other characters are quite detailed, and the characters are more full-bodied. There are also those barrages that are long and long, which feel not very good. I feel that the writing is good in a refreshing way. I feel that there is a little problem with the logic. Overall, it is quite good. I hope it will not crash.