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Hey hey hey, here I come. I also read the book "Flowers of the Floating World" later. I don't really make the connection between the two. It seems that although they have similarities, their specific characters are really different. Bibing mostly describes the background, and then family power, Ukiyohana mostly describes how charming the heroine is. I find it difficult to relate the two, however. What I can think of is that they are all very beautiful. The author's writing style is so great that I really fell in love with it and got down on one knee to propose. It's like being there. Believe it or not. Pie pie, please smash me to death with lots of updates.

[Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] It's very beautiful. It would be better if the heroine doesn't care about April. It feels like she is always dealing with troubles for her.

Very nice! The heroine's character completely matches the Slytherin heroine in my mind! Finally, he is no longer the Lion Heart of the Snake Garden! Come on!

It's really beautiful and the character creation won my heart! The plot is also very exciting, the characters are well-developed, and I don't think the characters are very OOC. The key is that the author is really attentive! ! ! He actually compiled an entire family tree, and it was completely connected to the history of the wizarding world. You really put so much thought into it! Moreover, it is a small sweet article with almost no knife. I love it! Moreover, the Auvergne has the feeling of an aristocratic lady, extremely elegant, and the interests and interactions between the aristocrats are written in a very reasonable way! And the setting of the Farley family really pokes me! ! ! "The Farley family always stood in the middle of the scale and added weights to both ends to maintain balance." "We need obedient people, not smart people" It's really exciting! What a smart and sober aristocratic family!

Damn it! It's really beautiful! I read Ukiyohana-sensei's book first but didn't finish it. Then I saw this one. After reading it, I said:? Ah? Are there any similarities? [Laughing awkwardly] The teacher's writing style touched my heart perfectly, it's really nb [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] Finally: open a harem! All agreed! [Sinister smile]

Give Drac more love and more drama, I love watching him. Draco, give Draco more love and more scenes, childhood sweetheart.

The author said very well that the writing style is superb. I came from a certain book and was instantly conquered by the big book. I think it is completely different from that book. The writing has its own style and the writing style is more delicate than that book. Moreover, I I have read the remarks of the author of that book before, and I thought she was maliciously guiding the readers, pretending to be innocent, and the whole work became more and more confusing towards the end, and finally ended in a hurry, without explaining anything clearly, and obviously without confidence. . I hope that this incident will not affect me. Nietzsche once said, "Whatever doesn't kill you will eventually make you stronger." I really love this book. I hope that I can smile and live toward the sun. Life is always full of ups and downs, and we will always grow and become stronger [Sending Hearts]

I am reading both books, although some settings, such as a huge family background, which I think are the best heroine settings in Otome HP fanfics, can gain the favor of the pure-blood family right from the start. Furthermore, the writing styles of the two authors are really different. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into this novel. In the end, I am very glad that Da Da did not have bad views due to family reasons. I also very much hope that Da Da can walk out of the shadow of the past with Auvergne and keep love to himself. [Love]

It's super beautiful. I like the heroine's setting very much. I feel that the author's writing is pretty good, but there are not many updates.

I haven't finished it yet, but I like everything I've seen so far, except that the original heroine was a bit annoying (I know she was slapped in the face, but she was still very annoying before). Also, the author's names in the first few chapters made me confused and confused. I read a few chapters later, and after memorizing the heroine's name, I slowly figured out who was who. (I knew there was that picture, but I was listening to the book in the background, and I found out after reading the book review that it didn't affect me at all, and the author also dealt with it.) The heroine has a noble and cool lady style (standard Slytherin), a bit like a Mary Sue, that kind of feeling that is made up of all the beautiful words. The background setting is also very awesome (I can't think of any other more suitable description), and the emotional line is also very easy to draw (both It's easy to laugh at, hahaha), but it doesn't look like ancient romances, where the emotional line is forced (such as a casual kiss). The heroine just wants to go back and inherit the family property (the goal is clear and she falls in love with her, a carnival of career success). It just makes me say, the heroine is so high-level! The addition of the system will not seem cumbersome, but just right (a bit cute) The above is my review of this book so far. I look forward to reading more in the future.

Wow, the author's writing is really good and very literary. If I had read your novel when I was taking the Chinese language test in the high school entrance examination a few days ago, maybe my essay score would be a little higher than usual. I like your way of dealing with people very much. I also like the protagonist you describe very much. It is very consistent with the protagonist in my heart. Your theme guides everyone, and it is also a Harry Potter fanfic. It really poked at me, it really touched my heart. Also, I have a little doubt. The original heroine you described was good and bad, so is she good or bad? Anyway, I think this cousin is very annoying. (Also, I haven't finished reading the article you updated, I only read half of it. If the heroine stops playing with the cousin later, just pretend that I didn't ask this question [laughing])

This book is very well written, who wouldn't love it? Come on, the author, please update more, I love reading it. I love you so much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

There are many large and detailed descriptions in it, such as family background, great-grandfather's diary, past stories, etc. It is very enjoyable to read, and what I like very much is that it is interspersed with some educational and thought-provoking sentences from time to time, such as the attitude towards family cultivation and personal rewards, discussions of love and respect, etc. There are many times I want to excerpt hahaha. And you can feel that the author is rich in knowledge and benefited a lot. A small disadvantage for me is that I have poor patience, and I am not very familiar with HP's original work, so I don't know many details, so some chapters are tiring to read. I feel like "Wow, this is awesome", "Who is this person?", "I don't understand what it means", "Oh, it's so long and it's not over yet", "Oh, why am I watching this so long, it seems so far away from the main plot"... I jump around repeatedly, but I understand that in order to explain the plot or foreshadowing, I have to be patient and read. What I like most about the author is his patient responses. Basically, he has a response for every question. I hope the author can bring better works.

Well, how should I put it... The author's writing style is very good [but I am a little bit angry. I am a female protagonist and can't accept that the things the heroine owns can also be of equal value. Her mother even favors the original heroine! Obviously the original heroine was just a relative of the heroine's family! And the heroine's mother is still the kind of person who thinks it's fair but actually gives her preference to the original heroine (bushi)] But the author's writing is very delicate. The non-female protagonist controls it quickly! ! !

I love this book so much. The protagonist of many HP fanfics in the Snake Yard is Lionheart. This book really doesn't have that feeling at all. Although the heroine is not stupid and Baitian has a mission, she is not just trying to please. A very elegant and cute baby, but it's a pity that the author stopped updating it. I saw the author's explanation in chapter 57, and I also read what my wife mentioned, but when I searched for it, I was shocked because I had never thought that the two of them were related. The two books gave me completely different feelings. I read part of that one, but then stopped reading it for some reasons. But I didn't feel that there was a relationship between them. It wasn't until I read the explanation and book review that I discovered that the fanfic the author mentioned was written by... (I don't type out the name to avoid being popular). I was afraid that this book would be deleted because the rating was too high, but I still gave it five stars because it was really worth it. I was still quite naive. After seeing the author's explanation, I secretly compared the two of them. (My wife will not be happy if her rating is lower. The rating of this book may go up in the future, but when I read it now, it is 9.0.) I wrote this long to prove that I did not buy the review, but I thought it was good to read. I really don't want my wife to stop reading. I've read a lot of fanfics, whether it's because the new books haven't been rated, or they've been rated low, or they've been rated high. But I have a rather impatient temper, and I don't want to read anything that doesn't fit my needs. It's really rare to see fanfic that suits my taste. The author probably likes this novel very much, but he can no longer write it down. It's really sad (｡•́•̀｡) I may have said a little more, and most of it has nothing to do with the main text, because I think even if I did say it, many people would read it, but my wife probably wouldn't be able to read it (the reason why she wrote in the last chapter)

Ahhhh! Really nice. It's so in line with my taste, and the author is so educated. I really like Nienie's extreme pull [admiration]. But they are both in the same school, and there are rumors of scandals. Do they really not doubt each other and question Nienie? If the author really can't do it, just listen to me and just blow up the fish pond. I love watching it [laughing evilly] I have another question, if the fish pond is not blown up now, will it blow up in the future?

It's great. Some people post bad reviews on purpose. Please don't worry about it. This is a good book.

Especially beautiful. After seeing what happened to the author, I especially went to see Ukiyohana. I have finished reading the finished work Ukiyohana, but I can't compare with the author in terms of wording, language and plot. It feels like a nouveau riche saying to the world's richest man, "You stole my money." I still like the setting of the author's novel, and the plot is fascinating. It's a pity that the people who were bullied by the Internet were harmed. Can you tell me if there is a new posting platform? I want to go after the article. Really well written!

It's really good to watch. I thought it was a multi-male protagonist at first, but when I saw the mermaid prince I was a little afraid that it would be a single male protagonist. But I just saw the author's reply. Maybe it's a multi-male protagonist, so I'd be relieved (≧∇≦)

It's really super pretty! ! ! ! There are very few books that I can keep reading. I am a person who likes to read directly from the beginning to the end, but the author's writing is super exciting. I savor every chapter carefully. I just read the author's statement (Chapter 57). Before reading this chapter, the author's bright words gave me the impression that he is a sunny and cheerful author. I can't imagine how many injustices the author has experienced. I also came across this book by chance. I like "Harry Potter" very much, but there are too many meanings in it, so I like to read this kind of fan fiction. The author's writing style is really good (●'◡'●) People's words are scary, but every word you create is like a seed hidden under the soil. It will eventually break out and bloom into gorgeous flowers. Every sincerity and affection planted in the words is worthy of being understood and cherished. In the face of malice and misunderstanding, silence is not the only answer. Brave responses and true self are the most powerful counterattacks. Don't get caught up in the noise. Like a rock, wait for the rainbow after the storm. The sky will clear and the mountains will cheer for you.

I feel that the author has read a lot of books, especially the chapter about the statement. I like it very much. Every word is very exquisite, and the article is also very beautiful. The author is really great. Don't give up because of a blooming white lotus or a fragrant green tea. (If the author has evidence that the flower abetted her and was exposed online by readers, a case can be filed and reported.)

Nice! I hope the author can maintain stable updates and don't give up [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][delusional author replies to himself]

Come on, the writing is really good😭Although I read the other one first, the writing in that one was getting weaker and weaker, and now I have no desire to read it anymore. I hope you won't stop updating😭😭😭😭I will always support you, I really love watching it! ! I absolutely love Filch! ! I totally cried watching it😭😭 so much! Really, really well written! ! ! If I were asked to choose, I would definitely choose your book! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is very good, and it is clear that the heroine (currently) is a standard aristocrat, but the others are too OOC compared to the original work. The author may try to write original works and it will probably be good. Many OOC characters are my favorites, so I feel uncomfortable watching it. It is suitable for Yunha. It's really OOC. After thinking about it carefully, I still think it's uncomfortable. There are many settings in the original work that didn't become popular due to the fandom, and it also smeared the original characters. ε=(´ο｀*))) Well, if it hadn't been for these, if I hadn't watched the original work and the movie first, this fanfic would indeed be considered a relatively high-quality work in the HP circle, which is a pity.

It's a very good novel. The ambiguous plot is very natural. The writing style is better than many novels. Most of the ambiguity or characters and plots in HP are just to facilitate the heroine's fishing🎣It feels semi-forced and makes me uncomfortable watching it😣. This novel is very close to my heart [laughs] Big cheers for the author!

My mom, this writing style is definitely not written by ordinary people. The timeline and development history are all explained very clearly. There are no obtrusive plots or characters. Everyone explains it well. This is not the kind of pure Mary Sue. The heroine is kind but not overly kind. She is polite, shrewd and has the elegance of an aristocrat engraved in her bones. I feel that the author is also a very enjoyable person. Being influenced by life, I had the idea of listening to books out of boredom at first, but when I saw the inheritance of the heroine's family, I found that something was wrong with this book, and the author also felt something wrong with me. I started to read more and more, and liked it more and more. The author should publish more books. I feel that you are very responsible in any book you write. There is no inexplicable plot or inexplicable beginning.

Don't miss it because of the name, it's a treasure. After a long time, I read this article. There are many kinds of imaginary worlds of HP, but few of them pay attention to describing the small characters. Everyone has their own story, and the descriptions are very detailed. Even the sad stories are actually a bit heartwarming. A very lovely author, a very delicate author, able to write interesting stories. I don't know where to start the article, but you must be happy

I have been collecting this book for a long time and finally started reading it. To be honest, I was not attracted to it at first because the writing was a bit immature, but the novel plot attracted me. The further I read, the more amazed I became. The writing became more mature and the plot became more and more exciting. Then I saw that the author was being bullied online. To be honest, I didn't feel that there was any so-called plagiarism. After all, fan fiction is based on the original work. The main subjects are Harry Potter, and there are several novels now that are not similar. When I read the ending, I felt the author's exhaustion and powerlessness. It's really hard to be bullied online just for love. Finally, I wish the teacher a happy life.

I have been reading for several hours. This is a book that I have never thought about skipping. The author's writing is super good. Even when he replies to those fans who are irrational, he explains everything in an orderly manner. I really like it.

Super, super good-looking. Through my role as the heroine, I sometimes feel that I have learned a lot, how to deal with others, how to keep myself from being passive, and the aristocratic, elegant and reserved tone really conveys that feeling.