I Have Become an Immortal, Where Is the Plug-In?

It's very good. It's like describing a portrait or writing about ordinary life, but it's just because it's too bland and boring. This should dissuade a lot of old bookworms. To sum up the whole book, you can practice at home, go to the sect to practice, you need to buy resources to grow grass, go to the ruins to improve your talents, and you will lose them when you return to the sect to practice. This time, the writing style is still good. I feel that the characters and events are a bit mediocre, and there are a few people who have impressions of the characters. The world feels a bit small, and the story unfolds in a closed space. There are more than a dozen characters in play. The above are all my own opinions, but it would be great if a novice author can write his own story, come on

The plot setting of this book is in line with my understanding of mortals. Without strong talents, they can only rely on their own practice step by step without being greedy for too much. Unlike other short books, which say that most mortals cultivate immortality, the elixir production rate and the quality of elixirs are at the upper level. The cultivation is faster than those with extraordinary talents, and the weapon refining and formations are also involved. The talent is not low. In comparison, this book is still worth reading. The shortcomings are too low, the number of viewers is not large, the author is slow to update, and may not be updated after writing.

So far, it looks very good. I couldn't sleep after watching it [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] The Decryption of Cultivation to Immortality, another star deducted [face covering] Why is everyone tutting. The author has brought his own catchphrase into it, right? The protagonist just tuts alone. Everyone is really speechless. The number of water words has to be like this to make it disgusting.. From what I read earlier, I think the score should be 9.5 Points. After the golden elixir, 5 points. There can't be any more [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Chapters 340-520 are boring and can be skipped. During the golden elixir phase, it feels like playing a legendary game. Download the game copy [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] No, the gap is too big. It's too boring after the golden elixir. Let's deduct one star for now and look at it later. The stinky and long golden elixir phase has already been skipped to chapter 506 [awkward laugh] After 650, I keep blaming him. Tsk, tsk, this mantra, this mantra is so ugly, it's so uncomfortable to hear. It's okay a few times at a time. This is just a mantra. One more star will be deducted.

Okay, okay, slow family story. I really like the slow pace. The main reason is that the content is large. You can skip it if you don't like it. Why don't you have children and inherit the Ye family? I'm speechless. You don't even have a seed. The descendants you are familiar with are basically dead. What's the point of helping the family?

I highly recommend it. In an era when the literature on cultivating immortals has been poorly written, the author has written his own characteristics. It is a very interesting novel on cultivating immortals. I hope it won't stop updating. Good luck to the author.

It's really good. I've read a lot of fairy tales, but they're all based on the same mold. This one is different, it's new. When you analyze it with your brain, it feels like this. It's natural, realistic, and unconventional.

This is a normal novel about cultivating immortals. With a little bit of luck and hard work, it's not like Long Aotian's plate is always there, and a woman falls in love with her when he meets her.

This is the most, most, most, most, most, most, most, most, most ordinary novel about immortality that I have ever read. Other ordinary novels about immortality are not half as ordinary as this one. And I also really like this kind of very, very ordinary ordinary people's immortality novels. Come on, the author must not stop updating, because I am a little disappointed that these few are not enjoyable enough to read.

The writing is very good. Ordinary people don't have any opportunities. It's a blessing to meet a noble person. There is actually no intrigue among small people in the company. This world is not as cruel as cultivating immortals. It is a bit like a microcosm of society. If you are more capable than others, corruption will occur. It is normal. Some seniors teach you that the company system is generally sophisticated and ordinary. This is also us. After reading it, I feel that it is very realistic. Without resources and background, wanting a system is actually just like buying a lottery ticket. It is a dream. It is very ordinary. Don't talk about accepting girls when you see them and then saving them when something happens. People with a strong will will not be unable to control the lower body. Don't look at people and help them. This is not the case with us. We don't help old people when they fall. It doesn't matter if it's none of your business. The progress of upgrading is very good. If you don't have money or ability, how can you upgrade? Ordinary people just learn skills and rely on craftsmanship to make a living. If they don't have the ability, they just grab it. However, in other people's territory, high monks can easily find out. Lan Lili is very good. A rich girl studies with a poor boy and then falls in love with her over time. Unlike Xingyue Ji, who actually has a good impression of the people she works with, and how to deal with her after she surpasses them. She is a bad wife. The writing is very good, I have been trying to add a little luck. Pretending to be cool is really rare in society, and reading cool articles is just for emotional value. This book is really ordinary.

As a bookworm for more than 10 years, I haven't seen such a good-looking book in a long time. The main focus is authenticity, nothing too outrageous. This is the way the world is. And the writing style is humorous and dangerous. And some of the modern words used are not inconsistent at all.

Great book! It's just so funny! Come on

The plot is quite interesting, growth-oriented, and I have the desire to watch it. Although the main character speaks a bit slutty, but generally speaking, he is still in the category of normal people. He should be more than 8:7, but he can also be 9. I don't know how he is only 8:7.

Very well written. Very true. Is this society too impetuous? It shouldn't be so silent. Forget to persist. Whatever I do now depends on accumulation.

It's very good. The content is in line with the title of the book. It has less wisdom and less poison. It's bitter first and then sweet. The more you read, the better. It doesn't force you to lose your wits. It doesn't force you to arrange passionate fights. The currency system doesn't collapse. You won't force yourself to be better than the protagonist in cultivating immortals and various arts. Everything is well-thought out. Of course, it's impossible not to have any poison at all. After all, the story line is so long.

It's very beautiful, the author must stick to it. Watching the protagonist become stronger little by little gives me a sense of achievement in the development system. What the author writes is so real, it's like watching a person's daily life of cultivating immortality. I hope it's enough to make people look forward to how far the protagonist can go. This is the only traditional male channel about cultivating immortality that I can watch [face covering] By the way, a small suggestion, the pace of changing dungeons must be fast. The Pachimon Land was interesting at first, but then it became uninteresting. It was just that the protagonist became stronger alone, and the golden finger was wide open. It was obviously inconsistent with the interesting rhythm of the original book. I haven't read about 150 chapters of this copy. It starts from Chapter 514, when the protagonist completes the mission and returns to Tianluo Continent. It doesn't affect subsequent reading at all, as long as the protagonist's magic weapon or skill is obtained from the dungeon.

Growth-type boring mortals have good luck. As a time-traveler, there is no one I don't want. There is a relaxed system. I think it is a normal person to desire it at first. Later, I realized the truth, and Impossible also started working hard to grow up. Changing the family and changing oneself all begin to grow step by step. The whole article is written about letting nature take its course and using luck to grow. There is no need to be afraid of small dangers. If big dangers are not fatal, there is a glimmer of hope. Some may find it too slow, but to me, slow reading is the true form of cultivating immortality. After all, if it is too fast, it always gives a sense of instantaneity, like a cool novel. I still hope that fellow Daoist Duan and the protagonist will be together later

To be honest, overall it's pretty good, and this novel doesn't have any bad points, nor is it too amazing. Overall, to be honest, it's pretty good overall, but overall it's just average. But there are reasons why it's four stars. The main reason is some small details. There are too many chapters and it's too wordy. Another reason is that it's too long and has no ups and downs. It's not interesting and I won't be able to read it for a long time. But the second reason is that it's ordinary. If I don't write it like this, it would be out of subject. So this is not a fault at all. It's just that it did become boring after a short time.

4 Stars. It's a masterpiece among the traditional family genres. It's suitable for those who like to watch traditional families slowly upgrade and grow. The protagonist's personality and IQ range from a junior high school student to a thief and a calculating thief. In the early stage, I thought it was a pitfall for ordinary people. I don't really like watching family genres where one person succeeds and chickens and dogs ascend to heaven.

The whole book is good to read and suits my taste. I feel that few people have read this book because the first few hundred chapters are very bland, the storyline is not rich, and the writing is poor. I almost gave up after reading the first three chapters. This is probably the author's first book, so I can't study the data in detail. But the later part is quite interesting, the world inside is also very interesting, and the writing style is also up to scratch. Sometimes the writing is quite humorous. Anyway, I am quite looking forward to the later story. I am almost finished reading it now, so I have to save a few hundred chapters, otherwise I won't be able to read it.

Yes, growing up a family is a very good subject, and the focus of the writing is on the protagonist. The other developments are acceptable, and the growth of the protagonist is not affected too much, which is very good.

At first I didn't feel that there were any highlights, but I just wanted to keep reading, and then it became more and more interesting. It's a very real social animal cultivating immortality style.

Very good, without those messy routines. It's also very real. The plot is relatively slow, but I personally think it's pretty good, just take your time. The worldview can be written in a larger size. You can consider writing a villain or something.

It's very interesting, not too many routines, and the pace is very good. I don't like other novels. It's a life-and-death battle from the beginning, killing people and grabbing treasures, beating the young ones to the old ones. Whatever the protagonist lacks, the enemies will give it to him. This novel is okay.

It's very good. I'm willing to give it five stars. The novel as a whole is not perfect, but I have to say that the author's starting point is innovative, that is, ordinary people's time travel and cultivation of immortality. If you read it slowly, you will find it very interesting and if you are interested in reading it, please come on, author, please write more, it's not enough.

It is true and objective. It is the most logical novel about cultivating immortals that I have read so far. I don't know why the rating is so low. It must be because it does not conform to the irritable pace of life of modern people!

I read Chapter 600 carefully, skipped through Chapter 400, and reached about Chapter 1000. I personally think this one is pretty good. Some people say it's good. The main reason is that the author doesn't write much about cultivation and writes a lot about other things. According to the mortal stream, the protagonist is very fast and has some talent. He came halfway through Goldfinger. There is also a fellow link, which is more reasonable. I didn't read the rest and the plot was too bland. Overall, I'm happy. End, mainly because the subject matter is relatively novel and attractive (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

A very beautiful book, which can be compared with Dream of Red Mansions. Of course, you don't need to watch it in middle school, it's only suitable for people with more mature ideas. It's just that in the later period, it started to have a trend of refreshing writing. I hope the author can maintain the original style and not develop into refreshing writing.

I have read more than 1,000 chapters on the computer. The advantage of this book is that the characters are well created. The protagonist himself basically has no poisonous points, and he is also relatively anti-routine, so it seems okay. The disadvantage is that there are too few battle descriptions, and it is difficult to see the back-and-forth battle scenes in the middle period.

I really like this kind of daily practice writing. It would be better not to have a female protagonist. I feel so embarrassed when there are emotional scenes.

It's good to read, and it's been updated [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]. I'm so touched. Among the few good-looking novels I've followed, this one is still being updated. [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute]