Conan: Ke Xue Picks up the Soul

Multiple heroines are acceptable, but not a harem. Come on, author...

Except for the first few chapters, which are a bit messy, everything else is pretty good, except that I don't know if you're going to be a solo heroine, Sonoko, or a harem.

It's not bad, but looking at the description, I think it's better to have two female protagonists, Mariko and Xiao Ai. If you want to have only one heroine, Mariko, your description of Xiao Ai should be less teasing by a sister [face cover] If we continue like this, even if Xiao Ai is the younger sister, I feel that she has to be a girl who is affectionate and a man has no intention. Although this is okay [face cover] In summary, the author can take control of it. We listen to the opinions of our book friends, and they may not all be good [face cover]

So far, it seems okay and not too toxic. Personally, I think the protagonist doesn't have to worry about whether he can kill or not. He can accept some killing tasks appropriately with his elder brother (Gin) [laughing] Not to mention there is a Shinigami primary school student by your side. You can just target the victim to kill [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Not bad, I have the desire to read more

Not bad, let's take care of it for a few decades first

It's okay, author, come on, I hope the author writes better and better!

Multiple heroines or single heroine?

It's pretty good, but there are just a few people [laughing and crying] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The plot is still good, but it ends too hastily, many things have not been written clearly, and the ending is too early.

In fact, the harder you work, the better your luck will be

It would be perfect if I could continue writing it.