After Becoming an Immortal, I Was Beaten Every Day

It's very good. It's written very realistically. It's an inspirational article with a single male protagonist. From the beginning, Lin Xiao refused to change despite repeated admonishment, to the gradual change, all due to the efforts of his master (a filial son emerges from under the stick) [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] It is really miserable to be beaten after two or three chapters, but sometimes I feel very cute, crying all the time, a little crybaby, sex The character description is very good, sometimes arrogant, sometimes naughty, the writing is very good, it reminds me of the time when I was often scolded by the teacher in elementary school. I hope that Xiao Linzi will become stronger and stronger under the guidance of his master, and it is good to get rid of his bad habits!

It's nice to watch. The plot is something I've never seen before. It's very novel.

I like this kind of writing very much! The writing is not bad. Unlike other novels, it makes me feel like I have passed it by. I love the author so much! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The clear rewards and punishments make you addicted as soon as you read it, and you want to read it to the end.

Very pretty! It looked so much like me and my enemy Chinese teacher [Grief] that I took it in hard. . .

Like it very much! I have never liked a book so much, and Lin Xiao's character has not changed from beginning to end.

It's too difficult to wait for updates. I hope there will be more updates. As a master, in addition to being strict, you should add a little more warmth. Being punished frequently, Lin Xiao should instinctively have fear in his heart. He should be more tender and give him an outlet to vent his emotions. Lin Xiao has lacked family ties since childhood, has a sensitive heart, and has a low sense of security. He has a different emotional attachment to his master. After being punished many times and begging for mercy to no avail, I feel that Lin Xiao may not beg for mercy in the end because he knows there is no hope and can only endure it silently. It is so pitiful. Can Lin Xiao be tough, take the punishment seriously, endure it till the end, and sincerely repent for once? This time I almost lost my life, so I deserve the punishment. Mr. Pei was also tired and got into big trouble without even looking at him.

Come on, it's very interesting. There are too few novels like this on Persimmon.

The author's writing is good, with humor, I really like it. Come on

Love this book! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Lin Xiao: She has a rich inner life and an extraordinary imagination. She likes to make a fuss when she has nothing to do, but she doesn't care about eating and not playing. She looks carefree but is actually a cute baby with a soft heart. Pei Sinan: A genius who has strong magic skills, high IQ and EQ, a sharp-tongued mouth, and a humorous, cold and distant appearance, but is actually a humane person on the inside who favors his disciples. Although Xiao Xiao was picked up and taught a lesson when nothing happened, I can feel that the author has carefully written the plot changes, whether it is Xiao Xiao's, Pei Sinan's, or the relationship between master and apprentice, and even various supporting characters, including the way the little guy is taught a lesson, so you will not get bored from beginning to end. Pei Sinan was Lin Xiao's salvation, and Xiao Xiao also learned from him little by little, becoming strong and brave, daring to pursue, becoming dependent on his master, becoming independent, and becoming like Pei Sinan, achieving two-way redemption. There's just a little more, and that little bit is the youthful, energetic and youthful spirit that Pei Sinan carefully protected for him, so he is more lively and cute. Anyway, I really like it. I write this just to thank the author for dedicating such a book to me (bow)

It's really beautiful. Can you give me a dozen novels like this? Still looks good 😋

Soon, super good-looking and like the simple master-disciple relationship

It's good to read, but the updates are a bit sparse. If the author adds updates every day, I will give him a gift. He just wants to ask you something, will Lin Xiao and Pei Sinan be together in the future? [Thinking] @

Very real and has a strong sense of immersion

It's so beautiful, keep going, it's so exciting 7 It's not enough. Can you post a few more chapters?

The relationship between Xiao Linzi and Mr. Pei is really interesting. Xiao Linzi's liveliness and Mr. Pei's rigorous and good deeds form a strong contrast. People can't help but sigh. Mr. Pei's doting on Xiao Linzi and Xiao Linzi's admiration and respect for Mr. Pei.

It's so beautiful, the teacher is strict and loving, the students are naughty and cute, it's really amazing, I love this book to death, the author's writing is so good [Adored]

Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people, it looks good! ! ! ! ! !

I love it so much. I swear this is one of the best books I have ever read.

Is it too sweet? Is it too sweet?，，，，，，，，！ ! ! ! Everyone is so pampered and my wife is so good at writing! That's great! I read it over and over again 20 times and I really can't get enough of it! His character is really three-dimensional and full, it doesn't have a facial makeup feel, it's just very plump. She is really good at creating characters, isn't it amazing? It's really good. The author is great. Can you make it faster? I can't help but read every day. How many chapters have been updated? Is there a love line? (›´ω`‹ )

Author, you don't know, I'm using my FamilyMart account to remind you of updates, it's really nice! ! What a sweet article [adoration][adoration]

Hahaha, help, it's funny and beautiful, but there are too few chapters [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

Love it! Pei Sinan's childhood was too miserable! [Crying] I really want to kill that third elder [Angry] Pei Sinan and Lin Xiao's mutual redemption, they are each other's most important people, it's so beautiful! ! I hope Nuomi will do well! [Blowing kiss] Lin Xiao's beating looks pretty good too [laughs evilly], suck it, I like it! ! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

One of my favorites! It's really beautiful! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Author Da Da, I follow your books every day, can you get me a die-hard fan [blowing kiss][thinking][shy], but the author Da Da's books are really good [admiration][admiration][admiration]

This book is so good, I hope the author can continue to read it! ! !

It's so good to read, I really like this type of novel, wow, I just can't get enough of it [Adoration]

[Crying][Crying] It's very beautiful, but there are too few updates and it's not enough to look at.

Invincible is super good to read. I have also read the author's other book "Your Highness, Don't Try to Die". These two books are really good to read and worth recommending. The writing is superb, the plot has twists and turns, and the characters are vivid. The author is very good at writing about the psychology of the characters! [Send heart][Send heart]

The relationship between Lin Zi and Mr. Pei is so loving. It's one of the best books I've ever read. I'm currently reading the author's new book "Your Highness, Don't Try to Die." The style is quite similar to this book (if I have to admit, the author's book is so good that one chapter a day is not enough).