Yandere: My Daily Life of Cultivation

Guigui, let's not talk about the female protagonist in this book (because I haven't read that much and haven't started writing about the female protagonist yet). The character design of the single male protagonist can be said to be very good. His handling of emotions is not dull or rigid; his behavior pattern is in line with the author's description: he has been a human being for two lives, and he lived in the social stage in his previous life, so he is not immature in dealing with people, and does not have the unique worries and hesitations of teenagers; his sexual function is normal, and he went on stage in the third chapter. 🤣If the heroine is well written and the emotional line is deep, this book will be very good. I hope you can think about the grammar, don't write too many long sentences, and add more commas and pauses. For sentences with a lot of attributives, you can use commas to separate the attributives from the main body of the sentence, which will make the reading smoother.

Just two, Master and Senior Sister, not too many

The early stage is a bit dull, I hope it won't disappoint people later, and don't be a pigeon 🥰

I really like this book

The car is going really fast, come on Can I have a harem? If it's really not possible, please accept Li Qingyi as well.

I feel like there's nothing wrong with five stars. Good luck, author. It's very interesting.

What kind of heroine is this? Single heroine or dual heroine? [What]

The world view is very good. When I saw the aerial port in the world of immortality, I really liked it. The most worthwhile part of the article is driving.

It can be good. I want to watch more of Master. I feel that Master and Senior Sister are enough for the heroines. Come on.

Not bad, very pretty [laughs crookedly]