Yandere******

Guigui, let's not talk about the female protagonist in this book (because I haven't read that much and haven't started writing about the female protagonist yet). The character design of the single male protagonist can be said to be very good. His handling of emotions is not dull or rigid; his behavior pattern is in line with the author's description: he has been a human being for two lives, and he lived in the social stage in his previous life, so he is not immature in dealing with people, and does not have the unique worries and hesitations of teenagers; his sexual function is normal, and he went on stage in the third chapter. 🤣If the heroine is well written and the emotional line is deep, this book will be very good. I hope you can think about the grammar, don't write too many long sentences, and add more commas and pauses. For sentences with a lot of attributives, you can use commas to separate the attributives from the main body of the sentence, which will make the reading smoother.

The early stage is a bit dull, I hope it won't disappoint people later, and don't be a pigeon [adoration]

Just two, Master and Senior Sister, not too many

I really like this book

I feel like there's nothing wrong with five stars. Good luck, author. It's very interesting.

The car is going really fast, come on Can I have a harem? If it's really not possible, please accept Li Qingyi as well.

It can be good. I want to watch more of Master. I feel that Master and Senior Sister are enough for the heroines. Come on.

The world view is very good. When I saw the aerial port in the world of immortality, I really liked it. The most worthwhile part of the article is driving.

What kind of heroine is this? Single heroine or dual heroine? [What]

Not bad, very pretty [laughs crookedly]

It's so beautiful. I hope I can keep writing.

I started writing it in May, why is it only chapter 34?

The author's writing is pretty good, and I quite like the characters, but I feel like the progress is a bit slow. Keep up the good work, author.

Very good, keep up the good work!

Longer, not too short. At least 500 chapters will be enough.

It's so beautiful that I love to watch it, and I'd be bored if I don't watch it for a whole day.

It looks good. I'm going to fatten up before watching it. I can't control it [eating melon]

Does it seem like the author has a side job? [Smile][snicker]

It's definitely healthy, but there are only two yanderes and they can't be seen in the early stages.

I like reading this book, it's very nutritious

It's good-looking. It's quite rare to see a daily version of cultivating immortality. It's just a new book

666. I can only say that 🍅 is not powerful.

Chapter 39 is particularly recommended, it is something that men understand.

Overall, okay

The emotional scenes are delicate and very satisfying.

Hey hey hey hey hey hey

Very nice, I like it very much

Still a yandere novel interesting

You don't need to be so detailed when writing about those things, it always takes too long to be reviewed. I quite like this book, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

It suits my taste really well