Dragon Ball************

I'm tired of reading Dragon Ball too. Apart from fighting, it's all about fighting and accepting the heroine. This book makes me feel very happy and it touches my heart. Sometimes I want to write it but I don't have the intelligence. But this book is bound to my dream. The fighting scenes and the emotional aspects are all very well written. I hope you won't stop updating. Come on.

It's okay. Although there is no original plot, I didn't change some settings casually. It's still good. It's just that there was a bit of ink when I brewed Bados. It's just like reading a romance novel. Personally, there is nothing particularly unacceptable. It is said that if you resurrect some Saiyans and establish a Saiyan kingdom, this can increase the universe rating. The author should write about the Tournament of Power later, which will help more. In fact, at first I thought the author would take the power route, super four and then super five, but it seems that he is planning to take the realm route.

How can I put it this way? The pace is quite fast and the women in it are easy to conquer.

I wrote down all my fantasies about Dragon Ball [crying], it's such a great author

Come on, I haven't seen enough yet, I just hope the protagonist doesn't have too many girls.

Such a good book, much better than some 9.0-Point junk books. I really don't know what happened to Tomato. Bad books get high scores, but good books get low scores.

Very good, cheers for the author [Like]

Author, let me rescue your book.

You can write with your own ideas and not follow the trend. The current four-star guarantee is to see if you can be more innovative in the future. Add some AF, GT, Dragon Ball Heroes, Dragon Ball Super Smash Bros., Various theaters or games, etc. Or write a comprehensive comic. I hope the characters' combat power will not be too different, don't criticize them, and write based on the actual situation.

It's okay. I watched Dragon Ball when I was a kid. It reminds me of my childhood (laughs) [laughs evilly] I can't stand the long part of Chasing Time: Kaioshin. It's extremely poisonous. Is this damn dog-licking going to be finished?

It's really good. I'll finish it. Although it's a bit late to post a review now, I can avoid these problems if I write it later. The clones don't have to be conscious. If they do, it can only be caused by the protagonist's control. Also, the protagonist should have his own name.

Give it five stars. How can I put it? The plot is okay, but switching back and forth between bodies is too complicated.

It maintains the setting of the original work and has its own story line. It does not follow the original story line. It is not a boring novel where readers can know the content of dozens or hundreds of chapters after reading a certain chapter, and it makes people want to keep reading.

Yoxi, author, please update quickly. Author, you should also know an old Chinese saying called... Later, the ugly duckling time traveler will be in chaos. If you don't use some means to restrict the duck, you still cooperate directly. If the time traveler doesn't kill the time traveler, why leave a hidden danger? Once the identity of the protagonist is revealed, it is equivalent to handing over his life to others. When the duck arrives in the 12 universes, it threatens the protagonist's identity and exposes it to others. The king of the 12 universes and the king may be equivalent to a pseudo-omniscient and omnipotent existence. Maybe it will be exposed with just a few words. The more rational people mentioned above are more intelligent here. A lot of people will definitely not want to watch your plot as soon as you write it. The time traveler sees that the time traveler will not kill or save, but still cooperates with him to control it. Especially the duck has lived for tens of thousands of years. How can the character be so simple? Slip away.

The protagonist's harem is well developed. The only shortcoming of the author's writing is that he cannot have offspring. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist Ginyu did not see any offspring. It would be great if the protagonist could reproduce with female characters normally. I hope the author can make some changes.

The more I write, the more comfortable it becomes to watch. It creates a different Dragon Ball world, and the characters' IQs are online. The disadvantage is that the emotional scenes are a bit homogeneous and a bit awkward. Overall, the world view is very exciting!

Not bad, but when are you going to pick up the two Bulmas from the future time and space?

It's really well written, keep going. But it's not too much to include all the beautiful girls who have appeared in Dragon Ball [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Good, very good, five-star praise

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It's beautiful and the author is very polished

The author has never let me down [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Personally, this one is pretty good among Dragon Ball fanfics.

It's pretty good, logical and well written.

It's good-looking and fast-paced. It's suitable for people who like to read cool articles.

It's very interesting, various special abilities, various personalities, and the character's IQ are online

It's not bad, I don't see any big problems

Okay, not bad, I hope to check out other Dragon Ball fandoms Give me another thumbs up, this book is very expressive.

Why is it only 6.2 When it looks so good? ! What the hell are these two chapters? They are so messed up and incomprehensible.

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