[It may be slow in the early stage] [Card Duel] [The protagonist is 99% indigenous] [This is a future world, a cyber world, and the atmosphere in the cyber world view may not be pleasant]
Qian Jin is now a card maker who has not yet started after studying for two and a half years.
Carrying fragments of past memories with him makes his life difficult.
In order to make a living, he had burned dirty films, and even in order to have a smooth career as a card maker, Qian Jin originally wanted to use Chinese Mythology. This was a bold idea. After all, [Dragon King of the East China Sea], [Hei Wuchang], [Monkey King], and [Daji], these ghost and god cards, looked really good.
However, the idea is good, but implementation is difficult. Making cards is not printing cards, and adapting is not making up random things. If you can't do it, you can't do it. He has no choice but to temporarily let [Monkey] hold a [Bazooka] and slowly move closer to the myth in his mind.
[Monkey] There will be, but it may not be the Monkey King you want. . .
Reader comments
It's wonderful. I read such a beautiful novel every night before going to bed. When I see the serious parts, I sigh: This author has the appearance of an emperor! ! !
As soon as he finished speaking, the author, who was living in the doghouse, felt something in his heart. He couldn't help feeling sad and looked up to the sky and shouted:
"Writing a book is heart-breaking. Where can I find a close friend in the world?"
As he finished speaking, a ray of golden light fell from the sky on the author. When the Tomato editor saw it in the distance, he rushed out of the door with a shocked look on his face and greeted him:
"The three-year period has come, and we sincerely welcome the return of Literary Sage!"
At this time, the author curled his lips and looked up to the sky and roared:
"Come on!"
There are currently 30+ chapters, all of which provide an in-depth and easy-to-understand depiction of the entire card world from the perspective of the protagonist. The history and current situation of the federation and the background of the human federation are also described bit by bit from the plot. It does not seem blunt and does not affect the plot, making the whole world more complete and real. Even the news on the subway is carefully depicted.
Of course, I am also looking forward to the card system settings, combat power division, and main card settings similar to Pokémon! ! !
So said. Could the author have a little more information?
It's good to read, and there's nothing poisonous about it for the time being. I've read more than thirty chapters so far. The latest chapter. Good luck, author.
After reading it for a while, it was really well written. The protagonist's character can also be free of poisonous points and can be easily trapped. It's just that there are too few chapters at present and it is slow to gain popularity in the early stage. Readers' enthusiasm for reading will soon wear off and the reading data will fluctuate up and down. However, as long as the author can maintain his enthusiasm and quality and update the data, it should gradually get better. I will occasionally save some gifts for you. Come on. [Sending Hearts]
To be honest, I rarely read science fiction novels, but this novel gave me a good feeling, and the theme is relatively novel. Writing science fiction with cards gives me a feeling that fantasy and science fiction coexist, and the character of the protagonist is not Long Aotian. He has grown up slowly from a small character. This type of novel is very attractive, but it is a bit short. I hope the author will update it faster, so I don't have to read it [laughter]
This book is a slow-burning book, and its advantages are that so far (86 chapters) the logic is smooth and the characters have obvious personalities. My guess is that the number of cool points is not large, and it is possible that the author is improving the quality of the cool bits. The disadvantage is that the "name" of the article has the sense of stitching together various "works". Although it improves the image, it brings the work down a notch.
Because this book was rated too low, I made up for it. The actual rating is 4 and a half stars.
Brother, write well, and put a lot of good-looking books on the bookshelf. I look forward to you. The two books I liked last time and the last time (The Versatile Mage, The Super God Pet Shop) are both popular. I look forward to your development.
The author writes very well, the writing style is excellent, the character writing is consistent with his own identity, the plot is relatively good, the logic is smooth and complete, and the outline is also very easy to understand. The main reason is that there are too many descriptions, but it is understandable. It has not yet reached 200 chapters. It is necessary to describe and express the outline structure, world view and character's ambition of the novel. Nowadays, there are very few Tomatoes of this type. There are few who write this quality. The key is persistence. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง[code]
When will the protagonist leave Aquamarine and go to the Human Federation? I will watch it again. If he doesn't go, I can only give three stars. He has the memory of the earth and still likes to be bullied. If he doesn't leave, just watch it.
I think that although the whole book has many shortcomings, it is still acceptable and to my liking. Next, I hope that the author can make some positive improvements for me based on the suggestions of some readers.
In short, I am the author, come on, write well💪
Life is very busy. If I were alone at home, maybe I would read it slowly, but my working time is very limited and I can't read it slowly. The pace is very slow, which is suitable for boredom when I have enough time to read it. The features are not obvious. The plug-in is not necessarily good, but my life is very uncomfortable. Come on, buddy. I would like to give you a small suggestion: cards are suitable for different worlds and campus styles, while cyberpunk cards are suitable for machines and scheming players.
Very good! If you like cards, you can check it out, but the plot is not very good. I hope it will be improved in the future.
Really nice to look at. Although the pace was slow in the early stage, it felt quite realistic. Although the male protagonist can be said to have traveled through time, it is a collision between the memories of his past life and this life. The fairness and equality of the past life seems impossible to achieve in this life. And the male protagonist's mother felt quite touched by all her hopes for the male protagonist.
I hope the author will continue to write and support 😁
Generally speaking, I haven't written it badly so far. Although the settings in some places are still not detailed enough, the story still has this idea. I think it's great. The future federal industrial city. And many small details are also very good. I hope the author will not give up and keep writing, and there will be results.
Okay, come on, author
Why is there only one chapter a day? [Angry][angry][angry]
Five stars, five stars must be five stars, it's very beautiful^ω^, Southwest's author can think of this and it's already very good. Five stars must be earned.
At present, I have a kind of moisturizing and silent feeling. After reading the whole article, I finished it without realizing it. However, the writing is quite good, and there is nothing bad about it so far.
The writing is delicate and the story is novel, but it's a bit short. But I believe that as the number of chapters increases, more people will read it [Like]
I think it's okay, it's pretty cool to watch, keep the rhythm
It's really good-looking, and the story background is well conceived. It's one of the few novels on Tomato that you can read with your brain.
Well written, keep it up! ! !
It's not bad, I just hide the name part and sometimes just call the protagonist's name.
It's quite good-looking, there are no poisonous points, and the logic is smooth. The book's lack of popularity may have something to do with the name. I just saw it from the recommendation list today because the title of the book came up several times before I clicked on it.
Persistence is victory
Keep writing, it's very good
Overall looks comfortable
Come on, work hard and persevere
Not bad, still ok
It was quite interesting. I watched it all night. I went to bed. Good night.
It's wonderful. I read such a beautiful novel every night before going to bed. When I see the serious parts, I sigh: This author has the appearance of an emperor! ! ! As soon as he finished speaking, the author, who was living in the doghouse, felt something in his heart. He couldn't help feeling sad and looked up to the sky and shouted: "Writing a book is heart-breaking. Where can I find a close friend in the world?" As he finished speaking, a ray of golden light fell from the sky on the author. When the Tomato editor saw it in the distance, he rushed out of the door with a shocked look on his face and greeted him: "The three-year period has come, and we sincerely welcome the return of Literary Sage!" At this time, the author curled his lips and looked up to the sky and roared: "Come on!"
There are currently 30+ chapters, all of which provide an in-depth and easy-to-understand depiction of the entire card world from the perspective of the protagonist. The history and current situation of the federation and the background of the human federation are also described bit by bit from the plot. It does not seem blunt and does not affect the plot, making the whole world more complete and real. Even the news on the subway is carefully depicted. Of course, I am also looking forward to the card system settings, combat power division, and main card settings similar to Pokémon! ! ! So said. Could the author have a little more information?
It's good to read, and there's nothing poisonous about it for the time being. I've read more than thirty chapters so far. The latest chapter. Good luck, author.
After reading it for a while, it was really well written. The protagonist's character can also be free of poisonous points and can be easily trapped. It's just that there are too few chapters at present and it is slow to gain popularity in the early stage. Readers' enthusiasm for reading will soon wear off and the reading data will fluctuate up and down. However, as long as the author can maintain his enthusiasm and quality and update the data, it should gradually get better. I will occasionally save some gifts for you. Come on. [Sending Hearts]
To be honest, I rarely read science fiction novels, but this novel gave me a good feeling, and the theme is relatively novel. Writing science fiction with cards gives me a feeling that fantasy and science fiction coexist, and the character of the protagonist is not Long Aotian. He has grown up slowly from a small character. This type of novel is very attractive, but it is a bit short. I hope the author will update it faster, so I don't have to read it [laughter]
This book is a slow-burning book, and its advantages are that so far (86 chapters) the logic is smooth and the characters have obvious personalities. My guess is that the number of cool points is not large, and it is possible that the author is improving the quality of the cool bits. The disadvantage is that the "name" of the article has the sense of stitching together various "works". Although it improves the image, it brings the work down a notch. Because this book was rated too low, I made up for it. The actual rating is 4 and a half stars.
Brother, write well, and put a lot of good-looking books on the bookshelf. I look forward to you. The two books I liked last time and the last time (The Versatile Mage, The Super God Pet Shop) are both popular. I look forward to your development.
The author writes very well, the writing style is excellent, the character writing is consistent with his own identity, the plot is relatively good, the logic is smooth and complete, and the outline is also very easy to understand. The main reason is that there are too many descriptions, but it is understandable. It has not yet reached 200 chapters. It is necessary to describe and express the outline structure, world view and character's ambition of the novel. Nowadays, there are very few Tomatoes of this type. There are few who write this quality. The key is persistence. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง[code]
When will the protagonist leave Aquamarine and go to the Human Federation? I will watch it again. If he doesn't go, I can only give three stars. He has the memory of the earth and still likes to be bullied. If he doesn't leave, just watch it.
I think that although the whole book has many shortcomings, it is still acceptable and to my liking. Next, I hope that the author can make some positive improvements for me based on the suggestions of some readers. In short, I am the author, come on, write well💪
Life is very busy. If I were alone at home, maybe I would read it slowly, but my working time is very limited and I can't read it slowly. The pace is very slow, which is suitable for boredom when I have enough time to read it. The features are not obvious. The plug-in is not necessarily good, but my life is very uncomfortable. Come on, buddy. I would like to give you a small suggestion: cards are suitable for different worlds and campus styles, while cyberpunk cards are suitable for machines and scheming players.
Very good! If you like cards, you can check it out, but the plot is not very good. I hope it will be improved in the future.
Really nice to look at. Although the pace was slow in the early stage, it felt quite realistic. Although the male protagonist can be said to have traveled through time, it is a collision between the memories of his past life and this life. The fairness and equality of the past life seems impossible to achieve in this life. And the male protagonist's mother felt quite touched by all her hopes for the male protagonist. I hope the author will continue to write and support 😁
Generally speaking, I haven't written it badly so far. Although the settings in some places are still not detailed enough, the story still has this idea. I think it's great. The future federal industrial city. And many small details are also very good. I hope the author will not give up and keep writing, and there will be results.
Okay, come on, author
Why is there only one chapter a day? [Angry][angry][angry]
Five stars, five stars must be five stars, it's very beautiful^ω^, Southwest's author can think of this and it's already very good. Five stars must be earned.
At present, I have a kind of moisturizing and silent feeling. After reading the whole article, I finished it without realizing it. However, the writing is quite good, and there is nothing bad about it so far.
The writing is delicate and the story is novel, but it's a bit short. But I believe that as the number of chapters increases, more people will read it [Like]
I think it's okay, it's pretty cool to watch, keep the rhythm
It's really good-looking, and the story background is well conceived. It's one of the few novels on Tomato that you can read with your brain.
Well written, keep it up! ! !
It's not bad, I just hide the name part and sometimes just call the protagonist's name.
It's quite good-looking, there are no poisonous points, and the logic is smooth. The book's lack of popularity may have something to do with the name. I just saw it from the recommendation list today because the title of the book came up several times before I clicked on it.
Persistence is victory
Keep writing, it's very good
Overall looks comfortable
Come on, work hard and persevere
Not bad, still ok
It was quite interesting. I watched it all night. I went to bed. Good night.