Star Railway: When They Fall in Love with the Same Person

I gave you five stars, shouldn't you update more? [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

Author, please update more, tnnd, it doesn't seem like ten minutes to finish reading this

My brother is probably tired, and today's update is so perfunctory. If he has such an attitude, it would be better not to update at all. It seems like I am being unreasonable, that's all. My brother is usually so free and easy, but I have suffered a lot from my sister-in-law. One or two chapters a day should be enough, but it seems that my little sister and I are a little angry.

Not enough, not enough at all, too little! Come on author @

Author, you see, I've given you five stars, why don't you give me more [shy]

You see, the novels on my other account @ are not as popular, so write more!

It's very interesting. I remember that the author could dig deeper into the plot. Otherwise, the protagonist, who is semi-invincible, will become a running story if he doesn't dig into the plot. But don't touch some characters with relatively big backgrounds, such as Black Tower Sambo, Sambo, there are huge pitfalls related to happiness. The plot of the first planet has been completed, so you can feel free to write by hand. You can go to Miyoushe to check the information, or go to Danheng think tank, where you can find a lot of inspiration. If you haven't read some spoilers, don't click to expand. The emotional line with Xi'er is okay, but it's just a bit sketchy. After all, the emotional line is difficult to grasp. It's good to write it like this, but I think the author can write more, otherwise it will seem a bit abrupt. In addition, can some people please stop talking about Green Duck all the time? Not only have they not met her yet, but they have not gotten to know each other yet to the extent of liking her. They are not Sanbengzi, they are just similar flowers.

If the male protagonist goes to Xianzhou Luofu and meets the blade who is also a star core hunter, one is immortal and the other is at the pinnacle of swordsmanship, what kind of sparks will the two of them create? I really want to know [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Come on, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh? The yellow leaves rustle and the windows close. Meditate on the past and set the setting sun. Don't be frightened by the wine and fall asleep heavily in spring. Gambling on books will make you lose the fragrance of tea. At that time, it was just commonplace.

Here are some suggestions (containing very personal thoughts, please don't comment if you don't like them) 1. You can read more about various copywriting in think tanks. There are many foreshadowings and easter eggs that can be used. 2. It's okay to have a harem, but if you don't write any emotional lines at all, it will only make people feel very abrupt (you can also describe love at first sight) 3. Supplement the world view. Although the people who read this novel are basically players of Bengtie, you have to treat the readers as if they have never played this game. At present, the world view of this novel cannot be said to be nonexistent, but it can only be said to be nonexistent (spread hands) 4. Playing memes in an appropriate amount does not mean that you don't play them at all (I think the latest plot has no jokes at all). Playing memes in an appropriate amount can give the audience a good experience. 5. Come on [learned]

Not bad, not bad, very good-looking. I hope the heroine is Xi'er. I want a single heroine.

The content is good, but the author is too lazy. From the original four a day to the current two a day I'll give you some gifts for the author. How about you continue to update me? This guy has stopped and is better off. Brothers, do you think the author is missing? Brothers, I guess the author has forgotten this book. Let's forget it among the books that have been eradicated by humanity.

The author breaks the news, you have already made Xi'er, I only made it at 162, you must compensate me [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The writing is really good, and the relationship with Xi'er is not too abrupt, and the progression is very natural. The truth of Ai Kun's death really made me a little confused [facepalm]. As a Bengtie fan author, I really think your writing is very good. I hope you don't cut it in half. It's rare to find a Bengtie novel that I can calm down and read.

No matter how thick the book is There will always be a time when you turn to the last page An unforgettable story It will all end eventually A story ends It's also the beginning of another story As long as those names are not forgotten The story will also be continued Keep smiling till the last page next story I'll leave it to you to continue writing.

Although there are a little too many jokes at the beginning, the whole story is a story of a time traveler. There are intersections, but it does not just follow the plot. As the length of the story increases, the characters begin to become more fleshed out, and the protagonist's power is not directly given by the system. The system's presence is very weak and only provides a way for the protagonist's power to come from. Some readers have no brains to give power when they see the flow of the system. In fact, the power of the protagonist is very reasonable in my eyes. He has lived alone in the mountains for 10 years, only meeting the simplest physiological needs. He wields 100,000 swords with all his strength. Based on the standard of concentration of all the energy and spirit, he is also cold-conscious from time to time. His will has been tempered, his mentality has been tempered, and his control of power has also been tempered. So I don't find it strange that the system gives him power and he can control it. So from my personal perspective, I think it is a good book.

Queshi is fine, it would be nice if there was less content about Xiao Heizi

This book is the best Bengtie fanfic I have ever read. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I'm looking forward to Luofu's story.

[Wrongful] The author thinks this is the end. This should be the author's first book, right? The front is pretty good, I can only make up for it with my head. After all, the storyline of Iron Break is incomplete. You should be afraid of backstabbing. I understand [crying]

It's a very good book. Although it has some flaws, it's considered the best among the Beng Tie novels I've read. Moreover, this is the only Beng Tie novel I've read in which the main character is not Xinghe. It's very nice [smile][smile]

Bronya's cover, but the heroine doesn't have her, so disappointed

Let me put it bluntly, this book is not very good. I can help the author improve it, but I need to look at the archived manuscript to find problems. Do you understand the author? [Sinister smile]

The update is fast and the quality is decent. The protagonist is very cool but some knives cannot be avoided, like Naruto's Namikaze Minato. So what if the ninja world is so fast? It's not just a step slower every time. Generally speaking, the writing is okay.

I hope there will be a single heroine, but this kind of story probably won't be possible. Forget it, let's take a look at it first, and then quit after I'm sure it's not a single heroine.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

The ending of the dream is a bit confusing, but the previous plot line is okay. The first content alone can be said to be a good book, but it is really a pity that the later part is so bad. I hope there will be a continuation or a new plot to make up for the regrets of this book.

So pretty! Shura field! Shura field! Shura field!

Five stars are given to the author, keep up the good work I am currently in a wait-and-see mode about this book. If it is a harem novel, I will decisively quit.

Is it going to be multiple heroines or a single heroine?

We found a hint of fiction in a lot of memes