Traveling Through *********

The author's ideas are clever and creative, but his logic is weak and his choice of words and sentences are even more terrifying. For example, he went home directly even though he knew someone was trying to trick him in his hometown. Paradoxes arise from the logic of space and the real world, and time. The pig's feet always move [fast]. Can't you quickly, quickly, immediately, immediately...? When breeding and farming, it is always "this land, that land". You can't think about it: for example, those who grow food are called "field", those who grow vegetables are called "land", those who plant trees are called "forest"; raising pigs and sheep is called "pen", "shed" or "pen". What the hell is a "leaky fish"? ! The choice of words and sentences is basically the level of [junior elementary school] composition, but it won't be like this for anyone who graduates from elementary school and is admitted to junior high school...

Well written, keep up the hard work, that's it for kindergarten compositions

Not bad, pretty good

I'll go. Now that there is no threshold for writing, there will be more "junk files"

The author is either a woman or a bitch. The subject matter and plot of the book are good, but the writing style is too slow.

So-so book

Girls' stories, girls' stories, girls' stories, important things are said three times [crying]