Mage's Notes

The writing is very good. I thought it would be a cliched counterattack story at the beginning, but I didn't expect that everyone wrote it with flesh and blood. The protagonist lives in a fallen empire, but still has a kind heart and has sincere feelings from his father and wife. External pressure has become the driving force for progress, and the protagonist has continued to grow and become more decisive. What makes me most happy is that the author introduces the improvement of the protagonist's strength through the story, which is like a breath of fresh air among the many refreshing articles about upgrading and adding points.

Not bad (≧∇≦*) I hope you don't kill me later Definitely a single heroine [Anna] I quite like the setting of the protagonist, the vampire bat. But some places are really not well written. I can only say that two-thirds of it is good and one-third is not good.

The early stage is okay, both the psychological description and the rendering of the atmosphere are excellent. However, the author's writing skills are lacking, and the changes in plot arrangements and character changes in the middle and later stages are not handled well, and the logic of many parts of the plot is also problematic. Especially for the emotional drama, there is too little foreshadowing and not enough rich vocabulary, and the author seems to like to stick the protagonists together. Although it is a highlight and some people will like it, on the contrary, it also hinders the development of the plot and makes it difficult for the plot to expand to a wider area. I think we can use multi-line narrative techniques, add third-person narrative techniques, or add memory plots to correspond to the title of the book. The plot could also be written more boldly, but IMHO the plot of this book is still too bland. I like the author's description very much, and I hope the author can write more fresh and unique articles.

At least I like it. I saw some people mentioned that some of the plots were not good and then quit, but I think overall it is okay. Those places can barely be explained in the past, which may be a bit far-fetched. Everyone has different favorite styles. I quite like the current rhythm and plot, but for the previous The story about saving the girl and losing her father is indeed not good enough, and it could have been this plot. However, I feel that finding a better reason or method to express it may be more effective, so that readers will not feel too uncomfortable watching it. Objectively speaking, 4 stars are still there, and 5 stars are my love and encouragement to the author. I believe that the subsequent plots will be better written.

Come and have some people watch. I'm afraid the book will be gone! ! ! ! !

So far, I think this book is pretty good. I have seen some works related to this genre, and I always feel that they are a bit frivolous. And this book made me feel a sense of weight and authenticity. In terms of characters, I think they are more of a growth-oriented protagonist. The characters and emotions of the protagonist and other characters appear more real and prominent. Of course there are some flaws, after all, no one is perfect. I think this is acceptable for plots such as the main character rescuing the residents of a foreign village, leading to the disappearance of his father.

Don't be misled by the rating, this book is still very good. The protagonist's life in the early and mid-term was bitter and sweet, and he was very abused, so it seemed a little bit sweeter and sweeter. Some of the descriptions during the period were not very in line with my preferences, which is normal. No novel is perfect. In the later stages, the description of the Lord of the Empire was acceptable. Ciel was still kind at heart, but he didn't expect that the Lord of the Empire was no longer a human being. Anyone who stood in my way would die. I am the only emperor. The final ending is still very good, happy end I read it in one go, and I was very pleased. Reality is already very painful, so there's no need for novels. Especially when I saw Ciel's determination at the end, Anna who belonged to him was dead, and there was no point in living in this world. Thousands of years of hard work, and the pain of karma, could finally end, and burn this body. But the twin mark is still too strong, allowing the two to perfectly reach the past, reach the most beautiful moment that belongs to them, and be able to create a better future\^O^/

This book is very beautiful, has high logic, the plot is very smooth, and the characters are well drawn. (Only personal opinion) [laughs]

A very good book. It tells a story very well. It is very coherent from top to bottom. The plot at the beginning is very attractive and compact. The content of the book has nothing to do with the title. I can't tell for sure. Maybe the author has a deep meaning behind it. You can tell by looking at my reading time. Comrades who like reading stories can just read it without thinking. The story is really exciting.

The name of this book must have dissuaded some people. In the past half month, I have seen the title of this book many times, but I have not clicked it. Today I clicked it, but the plot design is too idealistic. The plot needs to be conceived and the writing style needs to be improved. The author keeps working hard and hopes that the next book will have better results.

There is a feeling of a mixture of prose and epic

Not bad, I suggest the author think about magic-related settings.

I have only read Chapter 27 so far. To be honest, I feel a bit depressed, but I can clearly see that the protagonist is slowly growing up [almost crying] So what is the price [almost crying] [almost crying]

Who is giving the low score? It's really not that good in the front, but it's okay in the back, and there's nothing to criticize about it.

This book is pretty good. Is the score so low because of its style?

Come on, I believe that the next divine book will be born from your pen.

This should be a book with a big world view

The writing is pretty good and I am motivated to read on. Five stars encourage the author.

The plot is logical and the characters are detailed and attractive.

Wow wow wow, I feel like it's a really good book, but the protagonist's combat power and growth in the early stage are so fast, and the heroine's breath of life and death is too buggy if only she can use it. She just kills all the breathing creatures alone, but overall it's still very good, and the descriptions are all in place.

Beautiful, very good story, very reassuring

A rare domestically produced Western fantasy novel, it's really quite good.

Not bad, good cheers, author💪

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watched it all night long

Write quickly, don't stop

Teacher Yo is under my control. I bite

It was pretty good before Chapter 23. Come on later

A good book is a book that makes people interested in reading. Obviously this book caught my eye [Like]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good Damn good looking

It's okay. Although the writing style is a bit childish, it is this childish writing style that conveys a different kind of feeling [Blowing Kiss]