Become**********

Dear book friends, please give me a five-star review. If you don't like the new book, don't criticize it.

I've been following along and I think it's okay. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot of Sister Gangzhi. It's just updated once a day. Can you set a time? I really don't know what Xiaogangzhi is doing when he doesn't code all day long.

It's still pretty good, but there are still relatively few words now. Let's try to have more [laughing]

Personally I think it looks great, cheers for the author

Great author, come on!

Urgent update! ! ! It's pretty good, cheers to the author! ! ! Looking forward to the follow-up plot

It looks pretty good from the front, let's talk about the back later

I hope you can write better and better

It just feels like a little bit less

It's good to watch, but the process of cultivating immortality in the early stage is relatively slow. For the time being, the plot is mainly foreshadowing. [Thinking] The protagonist's character is sometimes careless, and sometimes misses the feelings of home and country. He has a bold side and a weak side. He has the heroic qualities of men and the sensibility of women. I just don't know what will happen next. I prefer the single plot foreshadowing in the early stage, and the heroine's plot line is slowly unfolded in the middle and late stages. The plot foreshadowing can make my eyes light up, which makes it more perfect. I suggest the author to write a poem about the emotional line first and then skip it for the time being as a preliminary emotional foreshadowing. Now the rhythm of the emotional line is a little faster, so it can be slowed down a little, so that the protagonist and the heroine can have various past events in the subsequent training process, try their best to endure life and death hardships, various experiences, and slowly warm up the relationship. In the early stage, the focus is on improving one's own strength and cultivating immortality.

It's okay, but it looks a bit troublesome. It would be better if it could be divided into sections.

I support it and must give it a five-star rating.

I feel like this book changed the theme to martial arts and it has the feel of a young singer. I particularly like the character of the protagonist.

Just don't kill me in the end [smile][smile][smile]

As long as it looks good, who cares?

Hahaha, this subject matter is really super interesting, very funny and beautiful!

Highly recommended! Truly a treasure novel!

Come on, come on [Love] It's really good to read, but I just haven't gotten enough of it after just a few chapters.