Swallow************

This book is really good, but it has been discontinued. It's such a pity [crying]

This novel is good. I hope the system will come over soon.

It's great to be here now, especially Morgana has such a sense of imagery [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I don't know how you are going to write Morgana next. Your book has that feeling. And didn't you say you'd keep updating? How come the roots are cut off? Now I can give you up to 4 pills You don't want to write about cultivating immortals later, it's better to write about the two earths first. Write the Swallowing Starry Sky as Huaxia, and the Super Seminary as Dragon Kingdom. Swallowing Starry Sky first clarified it: it is divided into four parts: "Earth Chapter, Genius Competition, Original Universe, and Different Universe Wars Outside the Original Universe." Super Seminary: It is divided into three parts: "Teaching students, Morgana died, and came back to resurrect her." "1. There is still something wrong with the chapter Swallowing the Earth. It's very contradictory. You say he is a top student. Top students will be very proud and indescribable. Why do you think he is timid and decisive? You want him to be free and easy. Otherwise, it will be difficult for you to write about the heroine later. The heroine just likes to be carefree and comfortable." 2 "For the genius competition, you can learn from the template in Swallowing Starry Sky and change it. Write your own ideas together, such as whether he can To hone the protagonist's strength to the same level as theirs." 3 "How does he improve his strength in the original universe to become the Lord of the Universe and then go back to resurrect Morgana?" 4 "How to make friends in various outer universes. "People, then wiped out the two holy places and then went to the original universe to rescue Yuan." Later you can write about cultivating immortals. Why does he want to cultivate immortals? Because he encounters a bottleneck and how to practice to break through. If you want to write about cultivating immortals, write about Emperor Huang Tian. Isn't there a word of more than 80-100 W? If it's not enough, add references from other novels and save the essence under their evolutionary compression. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Damn it, please update it quickly, it's very interesting, and there are very few star-devouring fan fictions in Tomato

Some hard work for the new college entrance examination

Author, please follow me

So far so good, no bad points

Good, good, good

Upgrading is like drinking water, awesome.

This book is okay, but the writing at the end is a bit weird (an indescribable feeling)

It's pretty good. I hope it can continue. Please don't join other worlds.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but a bit lacking.

Good, good, come on

Always enthusiastic, always happy, the life you want can only be given to yourself - Zhang Haochen The bitterness and sweetness of coffee depends entirely on the person who drinks it.

It's good-looking, much better than other fics, but it's a bit lacking.

Come on, I'm optimistic about you😊

It's super pretty, don't say much about it