As a goalkeeper, Chen Lei dreams of keeping every opponent from scoring. Tall and long-limbed, with lightning-fast reflexes, he starts out with a Chinese Super League team, catches the eye of European scouts, and embarks on his own path to goalkeeping greatness.
I just started watching it, here's my suggestion: But can you change the person pronoun? It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. The first person always gives me the feeling of being in a drama, but the third person gives me a sense of immersion.
Are you writing a narrative? There is not a single line of dialogue in the entire book, and the few lines of dialogue are not even punctuated.
Call me, well written.
I just started watching it, here's my suggestion: But can you change the person pronoun? It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. The first person always gives me the feeling of being in a drama, but the third person gives me a sense of immersion.
Are you writing a narrative? There is not a single line of dialogue in the entire book, and the few lines of dialogue are not even punctuated.
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