The New Jiazi Chronicle

The author's writing style and plot control are both good, but one thing is that he describes too much about the macro trend and too little about the micro level. It is suggested that the author consider adding character dialogue and plot. This helps with character development and increases reader immersion. In fact, the scene you wrote about the conversation between the protagonist and the British guy is very good. The most eye-catching thing is that the protagonist expresses his ambitions in poetry at the right time, which adds to the sense of historical depth and reality. If the author could reasonably quote ancient texts during the dialogues between the characters, then this book would really be awesome.

Can the author stop talking about things later? If you say it like this, readers will lose their expectations for this.

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The author's writing is good and the plot is very cracking. Recommended

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Writing is not easy, please support me.

Very good very good

Not bad, keep writing

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Not bad, worth reading!