I Open a Medical Clinic in the Abyss World

It's very good, the setting is very novel, the rhythm is well grasped, and the emotions are quite delicate. But, since the little assistant has so many looks, everyone thinks she is the heroine. If it doesn't work, the landlord can do it. But in the end it was the dancer who won for the first time. The dancers appear too little, which makes it feel very outrageous and abrupt. What impressed me most about the dancer was that the male protagonist was crying when he died, and he did have feelings. The main thing is that the assistant has been with you for so long, and you are like a saint, killing the dancer first when she comes up. The system is very weak. Useful but not much. It's very subtle, and there's not much difference in the feeling of rewards. The skills that usually reward the main rewards are too few, too weak, and the probability is very low. Most of the medical practice relies on the memory and notes of the original person, as well as a little bit of veterinary experience. The skills rewarded by the system make people feel that they can be practiced more. But the original notes are much better than the system. There are prescriptions, surgical records, etc., Diaries and lover accounts. The Red Moon Organization should be the core plot, but it doesn't arouse much interest. Restart the world. Magic has been abolished, I don't know when it will recover, or will it be pure swordsmanship? Many times I feel so frustrated. I hope the better, I hope it will be helpful to the author.

It's really good. I hope the author writes better and better. The character descriptions are very good and the plot is well-paced. It doesn't develop too fast and the writing doesn't drag on. It would be better if the character descriptions could be fuller. I hope the author can keep writing. Now when it comes to diabetes, the writing is a bit bad. The description of the conflict between the tigress and the protagonist is not very three-dimensional. The thunder is loud and the raindrops are light. In fact, it is better not to write this paragraph. To integrate medicine and medicine, there are some things that need to be changed. For example, can insulin also be drunk? There is no need to inject it. Overall, the previous writing is very good. Now I am a little inconsistent in reading about diabetes. I really can't go on with the recruitment of disciples. Why don't I just bring people there with me? When I go there, I just tell them that they want to be doctors too, so that they can't step down. How can I tell my younger brothers and sisters that I don't want to be a doctor? I'm afraid they will be disappointed. It's outrageous. I don't tell them whether this doctor is good or not. It's just cheating. The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes.

One of my favorites among the articles I have read recently. However, I feel that some of the plots in this article are a bit like the author deliberately suppressing the development of the protagonist (the protagonist develops a magic potion aversion agent, which can obviously bring good profits, but the protagonist inexplicably has to pay off the debt of the judge, and then none of the money earned comes to him. When the protagonist reforges the broken sword, the weapon refiner in Red Moon also said that the judge also owes him money... If the author writes about the issue of owing money in the future, it will really disgust me. The intention of suppressing the growth of the protagonist is too obvious.) I hope that the author will write better and better in the future. For me, this book is just readable, but there are some minor flaws in the plot.

Damn, it's great. The author should update it more. It should be at least a masterpiece with a score of 9 or above. There is still a little bit of pharmaceutical research and development, and there are a little few patients. Can we find a few more apprentices and so on? It's just 2 people treating the doctor. Isn't it a little bit short?

It's very, very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. He is an old author from other websites. This book was bought by Tomato from another website. It is worth reading. If you don't read it, you will miss it [laughs][laughs]

The writing is great, the structure is reasonable, the story progresses at a good pace, and the characters are well drawn. There are few good books like this in Tomato. The story is very comfortable to read and not obtrusive. I seriously suspect that it is a boss's vest. The only regret is that I discovered this book too early and the number of words is too few. I will read it after I have fattened up. The author of a very good story must persevere.

Let me tell you my opinion. This book has a lot of daily content. I feel that the main plot advances very slowly, and there are not many emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. Or maybe I don't even know who the female protagonist is. There are two male protagonists recommended at the end, so I can guess by myself.

Some people may not really agree with the dark and realistic Cruise style, because the aesthetics are just different. The protagonist is resolute, decisive in killing, calm, and easily unmoved. Apart from being greedy for money and lust, he has no major faults, and his shortcomings make the character fuller. Every minor character in the article has a detailed description, including appearance, psychology, and actions. The author grasps the psychology very accurately and does not bother to use tricks such as digging holes. Look forward to a wonderful story that is written in a way that is different from previous novels.

I gave the author a big thumbs-up and gave it five stars to "Daddy's Gourmet". The writing is good, at least I like this kind of light novel.

Four stars. The author's writing skills are excellent. Both the character and image of the protagonist are very delicately depicted, including other supporting characters, who also describe their stories with great care. Disadvantages: It only focuses on the characters and basically ignores other aspects, including the environment and story background, which are only a simple outline. The most important point is the emotional line. I suspect that the author of this book just wrote whatever came to his mind, because the emotional line is really a mess, and sometimes it just works out of nowhere. Finally, this book should be a post-official version, so those who want to read a single female protagonist can cancel it.

I heard that the author did not stop at Tomato, and there is no more detailed evaluation of the entire work here, so I volunteered to say something without overestimating my ability. After reading this book, I still feel unfinished. Firstly, it is because the later stages are a little rushed and boring, and there is a bit of unfinished taste. There is actually a lot of room for expansion of the later chapters based on the author's level. This is a rare flaw that can be found in this book, which is regrettable. Secondly, the handling of many emotional details and the characterization of primary and secondary characters in the early and middle stages really won my heart. This is also one of my favorite features of this book. The characters and details hidden in many such novels will be forgotten in the subtlety of the design at the time of the subsequent rhythm and plot presentation. However, the continuation of this book has basically not left behind. It has perfectly absorbed the tempering power given to the writing, allowing people to follow the lines for the minor characters and the protagonist. Empathy makes people instantly recall the previously arranged nodes, and the coordination between many characters, language and scenes is very smooth. The interaction between daily life and the main line is very smooth. The words between the lines can easily drive my emotions, making me laugh with relief, and can be moved or heartbroken by it. It can be felt that the author's writing reserve and life experience are quite delicate and rich, which is enough to arouse the interest of reading and make people unable to put it down. Speaking of character, the male protagonist's way of life and interpersonal relationships are indeed Shuangwen's typical and excellent "protagonist" style, and there is nothing too disgusting about the professional behavior and concepts of the protagonist "doctor". Even a layman who is not involved in this field has a strong understanding of the professional behavior and concepts of the protagonist "doctor". The introduction of the working model of surgeons and the spirit of "medical ethics" gave me a further understanding away from one-sidedness, allowing me to express my small respect to all medical workers. This is my impression after reading it naively. There are many highlights that are limited by my level and cannot be mentioned one by one. I can only express my taste and preference for this book in my immature opinion. I hope that the author will get better and better, and I can admire higher-level works in the future.

Overall, this is a very good novel. The male protagonist is not a stallion, and the story is like an old script where he constantly improves his strength and then changes the map. The whole novel is centered around solving the problem of the red moon and constantly bringing modern medicine into the world. Although it is systematic, it is not particularly abrupt. But I personally think that the bad thing about this book is that first of all, there is the female protagonist who is related to the male protagonist. The succubus saint Ruth should have helped the male protagonist before the original protagonist traveled to this world, but since she went offline in the middle and came online near the end, her role seems to be slightly less. The elf saint Lois and the Light Chaser, who had obvious feelings for the male protagonist, were not told their whereabouts at the end. The vampire Nancy also never heard from the male protagonist after the transaction, and the mermaid Kaisha did not appear much in the end. It feels like these female protagonists are just tools in the story to promote the development of the story. I feel like the arrangement for the heroine is not good. The end of the book is also a little hasty, and the author in the later period has a feeling of speeding up the ending. The upgrades and development are not as detailed as in the early stage, and the explanations are not very clear. Overall, it's a very good novel.

The writing is good, the characters are well portrayed, and the plot is okay, but I don't quite agree with the worldview. The world is in a state of struggle with violent monsters, and injuries are commonplace. In terms of treatment fees, healing magic is the most expensive. They look down on potions and do not approve of the protagonist's so-called surgery. But judging from the effect, healing magic seems unable to treat lesions and remove toxins. After they are injured, they can only go to expensive hospitals, even if it is only some injuries that are not very serious. In a world where injuries are common and they don't even have spare potions on them, are hemostatic potions and cleaning potions rare? Potions are not expensive things! I don't quite understand.

1. The development of the plot is a little twisty and refreshing, but it is just right and not too abrupt; 2. The protagonist's personality is normal, not too cold-blooded, nor too virginal; 3. The protagonist has a certain amount of luck; 4. Although the system panel has some numerical values, the book does not specifically emphasize it and it is not too rigid. 5. The protagonist is in his prime, why is he still a eunuch? I don't know whether it is good or bad? There are few battle scenes, I wonder if the writer is not good enough [Thinking]

A very good book, one of the few on Tomato that can be completed and read from beginning to end. The main body of the story is relatively complete, but the ending is a bit rushed, such as Elizabeth's unusual promotion speed, the protagonist's system, and the protagonist's promotion. As for the heroine, Nancy was briefly mentioned in the end, but Lois, the elf saint, and Maria, the light chaser, actually had a crush on the protagonist in the article, but they were not explained in the end. I think the author can add two extra stories to fill in these few points, which can make readers feel more complete.

It's super pretty, show it all to me

The background of the story is set in the most chaotic abyss in the Aesop continent. The protagonist, as a doctor expelled from Kalva Medical College, opens a medical clinic in the abyss and faces various strange patients, such as mermaids, goblins, elves, etc. This unique setting is full of fantasy and attracts readers' interest in reading.

The characters are very three-dimensional, the plot is warm and interesting, I don't know how to describe it due to limited culture, but the writing is really good, good writing and good stories are rare in Tomato, I hope the author can stabilize it in the future [Like]

Very good, very good. He is an old author, but the plot progress is too slow. It took only 4 days for 100,000 words to pass, but the writing is very good. But I can't stand slow-paced books [facepalm], this book is a good book The book was moved from other places. It has been written for about half a year. I really suspect that the author has Alzheimer's disease and can't remember several important data in it. It is very uncomfortable to read. Moreover, the author keeps pushing the pig's feet, and I feel that I can skip reading without any problem [eating melon]

How should I put it? I think the early stage is very exciting. Although I have never written a novel, I have read novels for more than ten years. I can feel that the plot development in the later period has reached a bottleneck period. It is good to be able to end it like this, because in the future I will only write those kinds of novels. There are common routines in Internet articles, such as changing the world background, or developing like a matryoshka doll. It is said that the end of an Internet article is a good article, but when reading a good article, you always read the early part, and then change to another book after the early part is good. I think the author can stick to it until the end, and I can read the whole book, which is already very good. As for some holes that may not have been filled in, just regard it as a small regret. Nothing is perfect. Finally, I wish the author and all the readers good health, and may you be happy with the ending [laughing]

I have criticized countless books on this platform with good reason. This one is worth reading so far, and the settings added are also very clever. There is a system, there is a "group chat", and everything is written quite reasonably. So far, there is no logical confusion or contradiction. If there is a slight flaw, it is that "the pig's feet are not dared to be fucked". I wonder if it is because the author does not understand women or something else.

Overall, it's a book that can be read. Unfortunately, the author was in a hurry to finish the book, which resulted in a very rushed ending. There were a lot of holes left unfilled [rolls eyes]. I can still write another 100 chapters to get started.

It looks good, has a relatively rigorous structure, and is pretty good. The characters are also full-bodied, but I hope the author will use more meticulous brushwork and less word-count panels. I think the panels can be put into the author's remarks [making a face]

The writing is very good, the world view is very grand, and the characterization is also great. I read it after several days of reading, and now I am commenting on it. I feel inexplicably melancholy. There are actually many places in the article that I could continue to write. Maybe it is for the sake of the conclusion, or maybe the author forgot that he buried it. Those foreshadowings, so I didn't continue writing, but this does not affect the quality of the book here. Although it is a harem novel that can easily arouse readers' disgust, the author's writing is obviously more acceptable than other harem novels. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write more high-quality works! ! !

The book belongs to the upgraded stream from more than ten years ago. It is overall excellent and the logic is clear. It is fine-grained. The pace is slow and the protagonist's growth is also very slow. It is still weak in more than 150 chapters. The plug-ins are also cheap. It is not suitable for readers who are busy at work. Such readers want to read the ultimate refreshing article. Because of the pressure of life, those who want to read a quick book can take a detour. I gave it four stars because I didn't know it would end suddenly that day... Some authors will be delayed by trivial matters. There are too many such situations... No matter how little writing there is to enjoy the article, as long as it is exciting and makes readers happy, the emotional value is in place! Also worthy of five stars! Shuangwen can only be regarded as rough food......

It's okay, there aren't too many bad points, and the more you look at it, it's still okay. It's not a system-friendly novel that makes you invincible all of a sudden. It's okay. There are some hooks, but it doesn't make you invincible all at once. The character creation is okay. It's a Western fantasy type. Maybe I've read too many fairy tales, but it's still relatively new to read Western fantasy themes.

Looking forward to the extra chapter. After chasing it for so long, I feel a little reluctant to end it like this. I hope the author can write some follow-up "Daily Life at the Abyss Medical Clinic", even if it's just a few extra chapters! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

I really recommend it sincerely. I have probably read dozens of books in the cool-text genre, and there are only a few that I won't lose interest in halfway through. This book is really enjoyable to read from beginning to end [Love] [Love] Looking forward to the next new book

It's very interesting, one chapter has 5000 [likes] [likes] [likes] The pace in the early stage is very comfortable, but in the middle and late stages, the pace is too fast. It feels like the protagonist has to unlock all the secrets of the world in one day. If the pace is slower later, it will be my masterpiece [Thinking]

It's very interesting. In a writing style that favors daily life, many of them cannot grasp the proportion of adventure plots in it, and the plots that promote the plot are inconsistent. However, the author controls the rhythm very well, and it will not make people feel that daily life is boring. The advancement of the plot is very natural, and each described character is more three-dimensional. Of course, this is also a common feature of daily life. This book downplays the combat level, which is also one of the reasons why this book seems to be slow-paced. I am very much looking forward to the author's next plot direction. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡