Guarding the Frontier at the Beginning: I Copied My Talent

I read a lot of book reviews based on cool articles, but this book actually has a lot of cool points and is very logically connected, unlike many books on Tomato that are hard and illogical. I have to say that the author's literary talent is very good.

There are many novels about copying talent, but not many that can be written well. Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง, I hope to write a masterpiece worth reading again and again.

It's one of the many good stories I've seen on Tomato. The plot is very logical, the male protagonist is bold but not reckless in his killing spree, and the female protagonists interspersed with each other also have their own plot foreshadowing, which is more natural. I hope the following article will continue to fill in all kinds of holes. Make the book better and the plot clearer!

I think it's really good. Although I've read copycat novels in the past, I often gave up after reading them for a long time. But this one is really good. The score is a bit low. It's no worse than 9-point novels. It seems that someone hired a troll to maliciously lower the scores. They all gave low scores after only a few dozen minutes of reading time. To be fair, most people just stop reading in the upper left corner after reading for a while. If they don't like it, do they have the leisure to write book reviews?

The most classic harem protagonist novel, Son of Destiny, a model of cool writing, don't worry about whether it is vulgar or not. If you like watching this type of stuff, you'll naturally like it. If you don't like it, just watch something else. I happen to like it quite a bit, and I hope the author can finish telling the story.

I have finished following more than 80 chapters. It is very exciting, the golden finger is very powerful, and the protagonist's improvement is timely and just right. From these points of view, it meets all the elements of a normal cool novel. There is no artificially created poisonous points, and no deliberate suppression of the protagonist. The settings for physical training, Qi training, and spiritual training are very personal. If you continue to maintain them, it is worth continuing to update them.

It's a good book. It's a bit jerky at the beginning, but it gets better in the middle. It's rare for Tomato to listen to a book without being embarrassed. Newbies can leave if they don't understand. It's really a waste to be commented on randomly. Some of the comments on bad books are ridiculously high.

The plot is well written and the setting is also very good. I don't know if it has been criticized by others. It is a classic and refreshing novel that is not brainless. It looks very good! I can't be the only victim, just get good reviews and get good reviews!

Really nice to look at. There is a golden finger, but it is not as brainless as other novels, but full of wisdom. The protagonist gets along with his boss just like in the workplace now, every step is calculated

It's a very nice book. After reading it in one go, I can feel that the author's writing power is getting stronger and stronger. Many of the poem-reciting links in the early stage are awkward, but the insertion of poems in the later period is more natural. Currently, it is a bit difficult to allocate the emotional scenes of the protagonists into five equal parts. I feel that there is no need to add a heroine. Writing Yin Lie as a woman is a bit alien, and it would be better to write Old Man Jiang as the heroine [laughter]

I really like the characters of this book. I haven't read such a good book on Tomato for a long time. The text is very good. I like the character of the protagonist very much. It has a sense of family and country. I have seen too many conspiracies and intrigues. This book has positive energy and human brilliance, which is really great. I beg the author to update it as soon as possible. I love this novel so much, but I just can't get enough of it.

There is no one like him in the world who has courage, strategy, wine and boldness, literary talent to write down the world, martial arts to bring peace to the world, immortal wine to be drunk by everyone in the river, holding the sun and moon in his hand to pick stars. Killing the enemy, redressing the injustice, scolding the villain, welcoming the beautiful woman, there is the difference between yin and yang after riding a horse to swear revenge, there is the joy between two people after going through hardships, there is the oiran's song after winning the championship one night, there is the return of the night marquis after three captures and three escapes, there are people behind the four gates of the wine pavilion showing their holiness, the plot is compact, the plot is ups and downs, and the plot is exposed at every turn. It has the literary talent of a scholar and the chivalry of a warrior. It can be said to be a masterpiece. The author has great potential. I just can't read more. I can't get enough. I can't get enough [laughter]

A systematic chivalrous novel, the early opening looks like many cool novels, but the layout is very clever. What seems to be the background of a refreshing novel is actually a foreshadowing. The clues of the full text begin to appear in the middle and late chapters, and there is a lot of mixture in the middle period. It has the feel of Jin Yong's martial arts novels and the general situation of a novel about cultivating immortals. Personally, I don't like system novels. The appearance of the system is inexplicable, but this novel is different and gives a reasonable explanation. Not only is there a precedent for time-travel, but the parallel universe view can make the system and time-travel not appear obtrusive. All in all, this is the best novel about time-traveling and cultivating immortality that I have ever read. The later stages are just right for tear-jerking, and there is not too much detail about the love between children. The novel is concise yet rich. Come on, author, the first part is very well written, I look forward to better works from you. [Eat melon]

Although there are multiple female protagonists, there are not many female protagonists, and the author has written equally on each heroine, and they have many roles. Each image is very vivid and three-dimensional. The author's skill in writing the relationship between the male and female protagonists is really superb, which makes me amazed. In this aspect, I think it is better than Ji Cha and Guan Guanzi. The plot of the article It can be polished a little more. The protagonist's way of breaking through the game is basically to use miracles or deus ex machina. In fact, some wisdom battles can be added appropriately to enrich the charm of the protagonist. It is definitely ranked among the best books in Tomato. I like it. This skill can be used to prove it at the starting point. I look forward to the progress of the author's new book.

It's good to watch, I like it so much, but I hope that Yu Yangluo and the male protagonist will get back together quickly so that the male protagonist can quickly regain his memory and be together. I hope it won't be abusing the story. It made me feel flustered and short of breath. Please I hope that Yu Yangluo will not be abused and the memory of the male protagonist can be restored quickly. Otherwise, seeing the female protagonist sad alone will make me feel suffocated and uncomfortable! ! Hurry up and fill this poisonous hole, don't have sadistic love later. No need. That's all. I hope the author can see it. If you insist on going your own way, it will be counterproductive.

This book may be the most appetizing fantasy novel I have read in the past three years. Most of the online articles nowadays are cool articles, and there are very few novels that depict a story with profound meaning as carefully as the author does. Just like the protagonist, some people may think he is stupid or idealistic. However, great things are often done by people with such firm ideals. I am very grateful to the author for being able to concentrate on writing this book despite the rampant use of cool writing. Many articles were cut in half while I was catching up on them. Although I understand, it is a pity. Especially in Tomato, it is even more difficult for novels that are not refreshing to improve. I hope that the author can maintain his original intention, write better and better articles, and also have stable income [Salute][Salute][Salute]

Read it, good book, highly recommended It took me three days to read it all. It is a rare good book. From the plot arrangement, characterization, to the writing power and emotional depth, everything is very satisfying. The author obviously has profound writing skills. He has poems, lyrics and poems at his fingertips, including emotional lines and plot lines. They are all arranged reasonably. It is quite natural to dig holes and leave clues in the text. A harem novel with multiple heroines, but not a stallion. Each heroine has a unique and rich emotional line; Golden Finger is reasonable, but not too strong to ensure the reasonable development of the protagonist; the background of the novel is not grand, but it is very comfortable to read. Each plot line is orderly and intertwined, and together they create a good book Recommended! Another important point is that the protagonist's three views, or the author's three views, are very positive. The core idea of ​​the entire novel expresses the people's supremacy point of view. From the protagonist's way of dealing with others to what he says and does, they all illustrate the various positive moral qualities in reality. Normal people in modern society with upright roots will feel fully immersed in reading.

It should have been rated above 9.5 Points. It is a rare good book with strong logic and good writing style!

The world view is grand and the story is stronger than the upgrade system, which is very rare! The writing is also quite witty, and the supporting characters around the protagonist are portrayed interestingly; A rare good article in Tomato! Hope you can keep updating! Come on👏

The overall score is 70 or 80. There are too many sermons in the middle and late stages. It does not mean that it cannot be educational, but it is several chapters and the views expressed are similar. Anyone will get tired of watching it over and over again. This point will be deducted. The plot of fake death is too frustrating. Since the protagonist group was not deceived, there should be more comments about the villain's reaction. In the end, the villain mentioned it, and there was no new plot based on the "death" of the protagonist. This plot has no meaning. I directly deleted it and changed it to the protagonist without secretly hurting the natural cultivation and it did not affect the overall plot. This book is also a classic. The beginning is better than the later part. The frontier army stage is very well written. The plot is intricate, with twists and turns, foreshadowing, and good characters. The later part is not ugly. Anyway, it is not as interesting as the early part. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to seeing better works.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's considered pretty good in Tomato. The protagonist is very clear about worldly affairs and has a clear understanding of love and hate. Although the protagonist has a harem, it's not the protagonist's intention. I don't understand why those people in the comment area are so entangled in small issues? It is already very good for a novice author to write a book like this. I wonder who has just written a book that can compare to this? Some people might think I'm being paid to write a review, but that's not the case. I say from the bottom of my heart that this book is good. Anyway, it is better than most of Tomato's books.

The plot is well written and the setting is also very good. I wonder if it was It's received a lot of bad reviews, but it's a classic and refreshing piece of writing that looks pretty good. I can't be the only victim, get good reviews and get good reviews

This is actually the author's first book. I'm so shocked. The writing is incomparable, the characters are top-notch, everyone is vivid, the outline is perfect, there are no big holes in the worldview, and the ending fills in all the holes. I feel so happy after reading it, and the emotional line is perfect. Each heroine has a different story. Shura Field is also very well written. It is another excellent book that I couldn't help but stay up late to read. However, there are also disadvantages. After all, it is the first time to write a book. The author may not know what poison is. In the early stage, he wrote about a little girl who was very good at writing. Although the pit was filled in later, there are probably many people who abandoned the book. Then there must be no one to review it, and there are many typos. Looking forward to the author's next book

The ending is great. I have never read a novel with such a good ending on Tomato. Although I am still sorry, I still can't help crying. However, this ending is still good. The author's IQ is online throughout and his writing style is beautiful. I hope the next book will not be so disappointing.

The quality of this novel is one of the highest among all the novels I have read. The character portrayal is very good, and the foreshadowing is charming. Although it is a palace novel, it is indeed top-notch. If it maintains this level in the future, it should be a hit. So come on, author

It's very good. Unlike most books with gimmick names, this book has a fairly complete worldview, a lot of foreshadowing, and can be called a complete story. The protagonist does things very upright and can be considered a serious and decent protagonist. Nowadays, the system is in fashion, some people accept it, and some people don't like it, but it is undeniable that for a good book, the protagonist's ability should be above that of the system. This book does it. Worth recommending.

The most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least inked, the most painful, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straight to the point, The least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, The most refreshing, the most powerful, the most powerful, the most enjoyable, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the top, the most explosive, the toughest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, the driest, The cleanest, the neatest, the most domineering, the most hard-core, the fiercest, the wildest, the most straightforward, the roughest, the least pretentious, the least cliché, the least formal, the least fussy, the most practical, the most focused, the most results-oriented, and the most beautiful.

The author is suitable for writing romance. The emotional scenes are very exciting and detailed. The battles are average, but the overall plot writing and story development are quite smooth. There are also some small bugs and knives. The villain's IQ is not too high. The protagonist has the feeling of central air conditioning but is not a stallion. He may not be able to get out now. Since you are a novice, it is rated as B-level.

Very well written. Tomato is one of the few articles with a complete outline and serious writing. The plot is very continuous and there is no logic. The plot is complete and flawless. The ending is a bit tragic. If I had gotten up later, it would have been more perfect.

The world built in this book is quite attractive. The male and female protagonists are also very plump. The supporting characters are a little smaller and can be enriched. The oiran in the early stage and the old hunter have no role in the later stage. In other aspects, the author's ideas are quite good. I hope to continue working hard. This book should not be rated like this. Please give it more points. The most important thing is: don't be a eunuch! ! ! Even if you end it hastily to explain things clearly, explain what needs to be explained, even if it is just one sentence! I really can't stand some people's comments. If they don't go your way at all, I'll just give them one or two points. There are also some who haven't read for long and just give them one point. Where's your conscience? ?