From Now On************

The writing is generally light and pleasant, and Xiaozhi avoids some blood-pressure-inducing operations because of the guidance of the protagonist.

My evaluation is very good [admiration] This book just met my expectations. The other fanfics I read about Ash Ketchum were all about Ash Ketchum, which lost the original meaning of Pokémon. This is the first time I have seen such a systematic form, and the writing is very good! ! ! ! I highly recommend everyone to read it here. It gives the protagonist a CP, and it also fulfills Xiaozhi's dream and the regrets when reading it. Here I say that if you have regrets or don't want to read the kind of novel about Xiaozhi's soul, you must read this book! ! Finally, if the author sees it, please give it a like [Admiration] I wrote an essay for the author [laughs][laughs] In the end, I must give five stars [what] [admiration]

The author does understand Pokémon, much better than those authors who can't even understand the settings [I learned]

This is another good book after the author's previous book. It has a suitable pace, humor and no regrets. It is very decisive in beating the dog. Congratulations to the author, a great debut

When I was attracted by the introduction, I found it very interesting. This feeling of nurturing is really great. With the guidance of the protagonist, what I saw was a high-spirited Xiaozhi. Xiaozhi in movies and TV shows is like a roly-poly. He fell down and stood up immediately. He experienced too much blood and tears, joys and sorrows. In the end, he became the world champion, but there were too many ups and downs along the way. Just shy of the championship. The mythical beast fell, but another one came. I have been waiting for the Bi Diao for 25 years. Give it to someone else's partner. Too many. I hope that Xiaozhi will no longer have failures and regrets with his partners who failed but did not have a second chance. Under the guidance of the protagonist, he will hold the championship along the way and step onto the throne of the world.

From the beginning to the end, many parts are well written. The character design of Ash is the same as that of the anime. The difference is that there is a plug-in like Qingfeng Li to teach Ash. It is all a dream come true, so it is very exciting. I gave one less star because I personally watched the battle. I personally felt that the writing of the battle was very verbose, so I rarely watched the battle. Apart from this, everything else is very good.

This is a very good book, or the design of this book is very attractive, because the golden finger we often talk about is the system, but the author chose real players to be Xiaozhi's guide. This setting is a bit fresh, but the chapters of this book are a bit short, which is not enough to read.

The plot design is good. Every province in the province has to be added. Every Pokémon captured has a role. There is no so-called situation of being released after being collected. Some Pokémon also have outstanding personalities, especially Pokémon such as Giant Crab and Stinky Mud, which have almost no roles in other novels. I hope this aspect will be given separately in the plot. It can be strengthened a little more, such as writing a few separate daily chapters of Pokémon, and making each Pokémon's personality more specific. Overall, it is very good, but it is a pity that it is too little. I hope the author can stick to it. Generally, this kind of Pokémon novels end around Sinnoh. I hope the author can last longer.

The idea is very good, the plot and characters are not too bad, and it has only been updated to more than 100 chapters. It can be considered as a promising future, but the score is lower than expected. I think this plot is a dream come true🙏 I read the negative reviews in the book reviews because of the relationship between the protagonist and Xiaozhi, and there are people who are there. I don't understand it. (Did the author not warn you that you deserve to be beaten?) 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

All I can say is that it's great, the writing is good, it's not overpowering, it's the original Zhi Ye, I can't explain it in detail, but it's super great anyway! If this book doesn't get a 9.0 Rating, I'll just marry the author!

The author's writing is indeed very detailed, and secondly, he will meet the needs of readers and give handsome readers some good things [laughing evilly] Even a person who only watches and plays is very comfortable reading it (I don't play games very much)

About 6 to 8 points. But the author knows Pokémon very well, and this work is also written to fit the world view. For readers who like Pokémon, it must be a 9-point work. The story of Pokémon can easily make people feel positive emotions, and the author has grasped this feeling, but the language skills are insufficient. At the same time, due to the protagonist's perspective and the author's arrangement, the emotional atmosphere is not strong. Simply put, the author's writing style is not delicate enough. Extensive writing techniques can improve the efficiency of writing, but the author does not take it too far. This is due to the influence of the Pokémon story style, and the author cannot slow down the pace. The overall look and feel will not make people feel bad, and with the blessing of feelings (referring to the author's ranking), I think it should have a score of 9 or above.

Uh... I just realized that there is no rating. This book is super nice~ The author's writing style is also super good~ It won't be a loss if you invest in it~ It won't be a loss if you try again~ [Learned] I promise with my innocence~ This book is super nice~

I haven't seen this type of movie for a long time, and I think it's quite novel. There are basically no peeing spots, or there are no peeing spots throughout the whole process. As far as I read it, I feel that the protagonist is mainly helping Xiaozhi to avoid some pitfalls (five stars to the author, please hurry up and be more oily! [Send heart]

It's good. All the regrets on the journey have been made up for. Xiaozhi has grown up very well. The problem with the two male protagonists is that Li Qingxin is positioned as a grandfather, but the role of the grandfather is very confusing. He is high and disappears. When he is high, Xiaozhi seems to be his puppet, with no opinion at all. When he is low, his presence or absence does not affect the plot. The author's control over this was a bit poor at first, but it got better later on. And then it's, well, what should I say? Seeing Ash saying "f*ck" and some other characters inexplicably saying "f*ck", I felt that this Pokémon world had not been severely beaten by Chinese netizens.

It's pretty good. The author interacts more with readers and can accept a lot of opinions. The author himself is also a very capable Pokémon player. The plot is reasonable, does not overly repeat the content of the original work, can well write the differences, and also satisfies everyone's regrets very well.

It's great to watch, but it's a pity that there are too few opportunities for villains to show off. Also, because Team Rocket is the first-generation villain team, the lineup is completely inferior to the new villains that came later. The bosses of the Star Team who are not in school feel more difficult to beat than Sakaki.

The first point: the subject matter is very novel. Second point: The author is an old author and his writing style is also good. The third point: It seems that there are no poisonous points for the time being, and I hope there will be no poisonous points in the future. The fourth point: I hope the author will update it soon. It's not enough to read, not enough to read at all. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I think the overall look and feel of this book is pretty good. I've read it first and read a lot of fanfics. If possible, I'll take a look at the title and what the general content is, but I'll still read it carefully. Come on, I wish you success [eating melons] [asking for updates] [top post]

This novel is good overall. The plot is exciting, the context is clear, the plot is twisty but smooth, the foreshadowing and suspense are cleverly set up, the reading experience is excellent, the characters are described delicately, and it is not a direct and mindless novel, and it is not a plot to win over Xiaozhi. Personally, I feel that this novel is still very good, and it is worth reading [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] At the same time, at this special time, I wish everyone who saw this comment that the Year of the Snake has arrived. May your life be always warm, and your days always gentle and sparkling. In the new year, may your wallet be bulging, your life be worry-free, your days be prosperous, your career be successful all the way, good luck always be by your side, be surrounded by happiness every moment, and be successful in everything every year. Happy New Year🎉(≧ω≦*)♪Happy New Year's Eve

A hundred faints! I feel that Xiaozhi is indeed different from before. He is very stable. He has also recovered many new Pokémon and made up for many regrets, such as Pidgeot, Yokilas and Latias. Making up for regrets is the best! [Blowing kiss]

It's a pretty good novel. It's outstanding in leading Xiaozhi to grow up again. However, other than Xiaozhi, the other supporting characters (except Qingfeng Li) have less roles. I would rather know about the plot of each character.

It's very beautiful. I think it's very interesting. The protagonist helps Xiaozhi grow up in a way similar to rings and grandfather plug-ins. It is recommended that Xiaozhi conquer one or two mythical beasts in the later stage.

Dear author, I give you a five-star review. I hope you will listen to my advice: you have already done CP for the protagonist Li Qingfeng. You can also give Xiaozhi a CP. I think Zhiguang is good. I have been knocking on these CPs recently. I want to see Ash comb Hikari's hair or give encouragement or a hug. [Admiration] [Blowing kiss] [Shy] I have a small opinion, I hope you can adopt it. I have to say that this book is really good. The author keeps up the good work. I haven't watched it for a long time recently, and I think the more I watch it, the more excited I am. What will the next plot be like? Their fight was exciting. I also enjoyed their interactions. I hope the author can keep at it. [Eating melon][laughing]

The update frequency is enough, the writing style is enough, and the author is active enough The relationship between Xiaozhi and the protagonist is a bit like Xiaobiao and Wang Rang

It's beautiful, the subject matter is good, and it's very attractive

It feels very good, the plot has been changed appropriately, and it's very interesting. I want to watch more interesting content.

The author is quite amazing, his writing style is so good in freshman year. I'm also a freshman, and I can't do anything right now, but I'm the first to do it. Moreover, the writing of the battle is quite attractive. Come on, the author, I support you! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Let me express my opinion. I have read 60 articles. To be honest, the author's writing is really good. In terms of plot, the protagonist does not have much role, but the protagonist is Xiaozhi's guide and is trained from a young eagle to a wild goose in his own right. Also, don't write too reductively, as it is easy to be KO'd. Looking forward to Carlos Ninja

It's very well written. It's a rare good Pokémon fanfic. It's not very OOC. The main character is Goldfinger. It's going to be great if Xiaozhi keeps writing like this.