A Bewitching Beauty, Beloved by All: The Handsome Harem's Affection Is Too Much to Bear

This book has many beautiful men and many Shura fields, and it won my heart.

Give me some encouragement points. As a novel, the plot of the first chapter is inexplicable from the beginning, and I didn't start it right, but I thought that the identity and background might be explained later, but it took more than ten chapters to tell the protagonist's background story in a few sentences, so it was a bit confusing when I didn't know the background. The dialogue and logic between the characters are sometimes strange and inconsistent, maybe because they are not very proficient. Instead, the key points that should be written carefully were briefly mentioned in a few strokes (perhaps the author is not good at describing big scenes with words), and the wording in some places is not consistent. The relationship between several characters is also inexplicable. It can be said that each of them fell in love at first sight. It is a bit confusing for no reason, as if they are ashamed for the sake of shame... But as a somewhat shy article... It's a bit unreadable. There's only one or two pages of descriptions of kisses and hugs, and then it's brushed off in one stroke. So more than half of the entire book is about kissing in similar terms... Summary: I don't know where the author's book is positioned. It's not up to par in any aspect, but if it's your first time writing a book, it's still okay and there's a lot of room for improvement. I'm sorry if what I said didn't sound nice.

This book is good. 😘 The style of the whole book is okay. As for the content written in the front and back, I don't think it is particularly good. That is, I hope to add some more special plots to the subsequent content, which will make people's eyes brighter 😎, and then read It will look better if it comes [Thinking about it] As for the characters, I actually think Pei Yu is pretty good. I beg the author to let the heroine give him some love [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] and then look forward to the author's follow-up content [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

So can the guy named Gu Qingchi be killed? Really, it's fucking annoying to me to look at him. There is also the one named Yan. Sometimes I really wonder why so many female videos like to torture the female protagonist instead of abusing the male protagonist. The male videos make the female protagonist very small, while the female videos make the male protagonist very noble. The heroine is very humble and abuses her violently. What is the point of doing this?

Does the heroine have any strength? Always being invaded

It's okay, but the heroine's character is too contradictory. [What] was the character written in the beginning to be cold and cold, and then she became that kind of gentle and cute? [What] The beginning was not very good, I didn't understand it very well🤔The rest was okay, but the heroine was too easily kissed, right? She seems so weak, and she also has the illusion of wanting to retaliate🥺I feel like the author still has room for improvement👍

The writing is getting better and better, and many beauties like it so much!

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Very beautiful, very beautiful😄