[Super fast-paced cool writing + hilarious and passionate + invincible + awesome rewards]
Xiao Fan traveled through the fantasy world, married the protagonist's mother, and obtained the Invincible Dad's training system at the beginning!
Not only can you become stronger by breathing, you can get rewards by caring about your son, and you can also blossom infinitely!
Is your son a useless person in cultivation?
Xiao Fan: "This is a ring, and there is an old man inside who can help you learn!"
Was the fiancée coming to break off the engagement?
Xiao Fan: "Don't worry, as a father, I must earn face for you!"
What!
How many other major family patriarchs brag about how powerful their sons are every day?
Xiao Fan was furious!
Who would have thought that there is someone more pretentious than him in the same city?
I simply don't know how high the sky is and how high it is, and I don't take myself seriously at all!
On this day, Xiao Fan went out, Jiulong pulled the cart, and the ten evil men opened the way: "My son is in the shape of an emperor!"
In one sentence, the whole city was shocked!
What does it mean to be a genius?
It would be interesting to show off with the protagonist's son in front of the genius' mother!
A Taoist from a certain sect said: "Xiao Fan, don't be too arrogant. Believe it or not, I will kill your son!"
[Ding!
Identify the target!
The next day, Xiao Fan directly became the stepfather of this Daozi and said with a serious face: "My son, don't mess around!"
Mo Zi: "Xiao Fan, if you kowtow and kneel down, I will spare your life!"
"Crack!"
Demon Empress: "You're so outrageous, why don't you call him daddy!"
Reader comments
The best thing is for the protagonist to stay in one place and sit in charge, instead of joining this place and that place to run around. Does it make sense? What is the system used for? There is still a little chance. Where is the son you took in? If you don't go out to hang out, why would you go out and hang out on your own? This book can only be said to be almost interesting. I want to see the protagonist suppress an area by himself and become the boss behind his son. The protagonist sees that his son cannot be defeated or is in danger and goes out to show off his presence and then accepts a few women back to continue to sit in charge. Isn't it good?
I feel like my combat power is a bit low. There are several unreasonable places. There are a few places where it feels like it should be a little more arrogant. But he was a little timid at that time, especially when talking to the woman in the trading house,
Feel like a dog
Not exciting enough.
What is written
You wrote "invincible" wrong. Semi-invincible doesn't even count.
I've read several books of this kind of garbage, and they all write exactly the same thing.
The plot is so awkward. You feed the dog some elixirs and soak your feet with tea. Don't you think it's awkward to take a foot soak just to slap the public in the face?
The best thing is for the protagonist to stay in one place and sit in charge, instead of joining this place and that place to run around. Does it make sense? What is the system used for? There is still a little chance. Where is the son you took in? If you don't go out to hang out, why would you go out and hang out on your own? This book can only be said to be almost interesting. I want to see the protagonist suppress an area by himself and become the boss behind his son. The protagonist sees that his son cannot be defeated or is in danger and goes out to show off his presence and then accepts a few women back to continue to sit in charge. Isn't it good?
I feel like my combat power is a bit low. There are several unreasonable places. There are a few places where it feels like it should be a little more arrogant. But he was a little timid at that time, especially when talking to the woman in the trading house,
Feel like a dog
Not exciting enough.
What is written
You wrote "invincible" wrong. Semi-invincible doesn't even count.
I've read several books of this kind of garbage, and they all write exactly the same thing.
The plot is so awkward. You feed the dog some elixirs and soak your feet with tea. Don't you think it's awkward to take a foot soak just to slap the public in the face?
Not bad, come on [love]
OK, I think.
Okay, come on, author💪