[No cp] + [Half time travel? ＋Semi-Grown Stream＋ fan+Friendly Recommendation+ooc Apology+Interactive Apology
Lightning Protection Warning ❗ is not a typical cool novel, but the protagonist will come back with revenge later on
Original title: "After traveling through the Monkey King, I became a passerby"
I don't know how to make drama or tear-jerking, and my writing style is like that of a primary school student (please spray lightly)
If you have any other questions/typos, please leave a reminder in the comment area or under the chapter end comments.
This is the first work of a new author. It may not be perfect, and the writing style may be a bit immature in the early stages. Please be patient with me. Thank you QAQ
Will slightly revise previous chapters
Signed on 2024.7.23
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It's another day when the villain, righteous, and cannon fodder camps repeatedly jump between each other.
As for why the protagonist becomes the villain... Emm is just to add drama✌︎( ᐛ )✌︎
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Qing Mingzu is a social worker who lives a nine-to-five life every day. When he has free time, he usually watches anime. Until he died suddenly, his soul traveled through time and became an ordinary passerby, and then turned into a villain? ... And then became teammates fighting alongside Qi Xiaotian and the others? In the finale, he is no longer human again?
In the thrilling adventure with everyone, the secrets about Qing Mingzu's life experience are slowly revealed...
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The cp party enclosure is cute^3^
The upper limit of the protagonist's IQ is the upper limit of the author's IQ, please be gentle (kowtow)
The author is a "social animal" in the second year of junior high school. He is quite busy with his studies. I would like to ask everyone to stop scolding QAQ. Thank you Ni.
Reader comments
Post a long comment:
First of all, there are very few articles on Time Travel Enlightenment in Tomato, and the subject matter of this one is also relatively new.
The logic is relatively clear and the writing is good. It is recommended to give the protagonist more roles in the plot, which can be written by describing the protagonist's experience before time travel. This can also make up for the lack of swords in the protagonist's current character.
The use of emojis should be appropriately reduced, and the ensuing problem of expression description is recommended to learn more about the vocabulary related to them.
Finally, a very good time travel novel. If I have any ideas in the future, I will comment on it.
This is the best-written Monkey King fanfic I have seen so far. I think it will be popular [eating melon]
I have used two accounts in total to cheer you up. Do you dare to move?
Take a look at what I wrote~ The name paper is called Entering the Monkey King, but I'm mini (look at the emoticon I gave you!)
Give 4 stars to encourage yourself! [Eat melon]
Let me state the facts, it's really beautiful. The CP between the protagonist and Xiaotian is really super easy to get along with.
Big! Come back soon for updates! Why did it stop when I was writing about a wonderful moment? ? ? Ahhhhhhhhhhhh please come back and update soon! ! ! ! ! Woo woo woo
Good looking, but not enough
Give me an update! ! ! October 2023! Why not update it? ! [Petrochemical]
Although the writing style is young, it cannot be denied that the psychological description added by the author in the process is very interesting. It makes people feel emotional after watching it, which also makes up for the shortcomings in this aspect.
The creation of the original characters in Monkey King needs improvement.
For example, Sun Wukong was silent a lot in a novel segment. Well, I can't say whether it ruined the character or not.
Sun Wukong himself is a lively, enthusiastic and time-honored character, and his ADHD is also very obvious.
The main reason is that it is too unexpressive, and you will feel that you are not involved in the novel. If you feel that you do not need to write it here, you can also express the personal emotional fluctuations of the character Sun Wukong in behavior and psychology to supplement it.
And these minor flaws in writing can also be improved.
That's it for my comments.
The pen looks very comfortable, much more comfortable than some other pens ❤️🌚
The book is very good. Although I also want to write it, it is probably not comparable to this one. It is so good!!! [Highly recommended]
Give me one less point to prevent you from being too proud [Thinking]
Author! ! When will you update? ! [Face covering] Two accountants urged me hahahaha [laughing evilly] [laughing]
Personally I feel like it's a good fanfic, but it's a pity that the author keeps discontinuing updates.
The article is very nice (˘ ³˘)❤
Very pretty, I like it
Can his CP become Qi Xiaotian?
Author, remember, you have to write two more articles and take a rest [Like]
The structure is clear, there are not too many words, and I am also a fan of Wuxiao, but the author will add more updates! ! ! As long as you don't die, you have to add more to your death! ! ! !
Very good, just a little lacking [crying]
Ah, it looks so good, folks.
Super, super, super good-looking, but just a little lacking.
Post a long comment: First of all, there are very few articles on Time Travel Enlightenment in Tomato, and the subject matter of this one is also relatively new. The logic is relatively clear and the writing is good. It is recommended to give the protagonist more roles in the plot, which can be written by describing the protagonist's experience before time travel. This can also make up for the lack of swords in the protagonist's current character. The use of emojis should be appropriately reduced, and the ensuing problem of expression description is recommended to learn more about the vocabulary related to them. Finally, a very good time travel novel. If I have any ideas in the future, I will comment on it.
This is the best-written Monkey King fanfic I have seen so far. I think it will be popular [eating melon]
I have used two accounts in total to cheer you up. Do you dare to move? Take a look at what I wrote~ The name paper is called Entering the Monkey King, but I'm mini (look at the emoticon I gave you!)
Give 4 stars to encourage yourself! [Eat melon]
Let me state the facts, it's really beautiful. The CP between the protagonist and Xiaotian is really super easy to get along with.
Big! Come back soon for updates! Why did it stop when I was writing about a wonderful moment? ? ? Ahhhhhhhhhhhh please come back and update soon! ! ! ! ! Woo woo woo
Good looking, but not enough
Give me an update! ! ! October 2023! Why not update it? ! [Petrochemical]
Although the writing style is young, it cannot be denied that the psychological description added by the author in the process is very interesting. It makes people feel emotional after watching it, which also makes up for the shortcomings in this aspect. The creation of the original characters in Monkey King needs improvement. For example, Sun Wukong was silent a lot in a novel segment. Well, I can't say whether it ruined the character or not. Sun Wukong himself is a lively, enthusiastic and time-honored character, and his ADHD is also very obvious. The main reason is that it is too unexpressive, and you will feel that you are not involved in the novel. If you feel that you do not need to write it here, you can also express the personal emotional fluctuations of the character Sun Wukong in behavior and psychology to supplement it. And these minor flaws in writing can also be improved. That's it for my comments.
The pen looks very comfortable, much more comfortable than some other pens ❤️🌚
The book is very good. Although I also want to write it, it is probably not comparable to this one. It is so good!!! [Highly recommended]
Give me one less point to prevent you from being too proud [Thinking]
Author! ! When will you update? ! [Face covering] Two accountants urged me hahahaha [laughing evilly] [laughing]
Personally I feel like it's a good fanfic, but it's a pity that the author keeps discontinuing updates.
The article is very nice (˘ ³˘)❤
Very pretty, I like it
Can his CP become Qi Xiaotian?
Author, remember, you have to write two more articles and take a rest [Like]
The structure is clear, there are not too many words, and I am also a fan of Wuxiao, but the author will add more updates! ! ! As long as you don't die, you have to add more to your death! ! ! !
Very good, just a little lacking [crying]
Ah, it looks so good, folks.
Super, super, super good-looking, but just a little lacking.