网游：我的宠物能进化成美少女

A good book, the author is complex, but very easy to understand... The most important thing is that the author is very skilled and has a lot of bushi pictures... Ahem, it is a good book anyway, I followed it [laughing evilly]

[Adore][Adore] It's very beautiful. The author's car is a bit fast, but I like it very much. The article is delicate and the author's writing is good. But the author's pictures are a little lacking. I hope the author will pay attention to it. [Adore][Adore][Adore]@author, like [like]

I haven't seen such a favorite book in a long, long time. So far, the novel is well conceived, very innovative, and the content is rigorous. It can be seen that the follow-up world view is also large enough. I hope the author will update it soon so that it doesn't end unfinished. I would like to make some small comments. Regarding various data such as skill attributes, the frequency can be appropriately reduced, or the key points that have been changed can be written down. For example, if the "Destiny Talent" reaches level 10 and unlocks new attributes, you can just write the new attributes directly. You don't need to list the entire talent. Then, you can list the complete list every few times to give readers a deeper impression. Of course, this frequency still has to be determined by the author himself. This is what online game novels are like. If the attributes are too simple, it will give people the impression that they are not rigorous and their combat power is unclear. Writing too much and too rigorously will make people feel cumbersome and affect the reading experience, so it is not easy to grasp this scale. Of course, if the author feels that he is not very sure, then I personally recommend writing the data in detail. After all, being detailed is definitely better than being confused. Finally, cheers to the author! Update soon!

This book is the only online game I've read recently that didn't make me feel uncomfortable or bored. It can be said that this book is of top quality and can be placed anywhere.

The author provides a lot of benefits (not to mention what benefits), and the plot is reasonable, the routines are not too old, and there are not enemies everywhere you go. Apart from a little bit of venom (really small, easily overlooked in the past) the rest of it is pretty funny.

The Mountain Ointment Soldier, the Angry Bear, the Yellow Leaf Thief, the Yellow Leaf Thief Leader, the Iron-armored Flying Insect, the Shallow Sea Crab, the Shallow Sea Turtle, the Patrol Scout, the Shark Clothes City Guard, the Nanhai Youyong, Li Qi, the Iron-clawed Bear Monster, the Phantom Blood Lizard, the Snowy Stone Monster, the Evil Ghost, the Drunk Giant Leader, the Long Right Samurai, the Green Villager, and the Green Leader. These can be added to the list. Great author, come on!

It looks very comfortable now. The author is very strict in controlling the game values. There should be an outline. Well, the completion is guaranteed. I would like to remind the author to eat meat if he has it, and not to be a eunuch [code] Complex ingredients [face covering]

Super beautiful, light-hearted and funny, a magical book in online games, good luck to the author.

The overall effect is very good, and the author benefits are very good

This is my first time to comment on Tomato's novel. This novel is considered to be a top-quality and enjoyable article [only my personal opinion] 1. With Pokémon elements [basically the protagonist himself] 2. In the later stage, there are places to operate the city [a little less, but very good, I hope I can describe it more later, I feel it is good to have some farming elements] 3. The supporting characters and opponents are not exaggerated in terms of general and intelligence [I still praise the author here, at least the author is writing in a reasonable way, rather than writing based on personal feelings] 4. In terms of plot advancement, I feel that there are very few novels written after the game is released into the world. Even in the market, the early game articles are okay, but in the later stages they will become more data-based. Just looking at a bunch of data, I feel that the author is confused, and we are also confused. The plot currently being handled by the author is okay [everything that needs to be explained so far has been written down], so I still look forward to the author's writing and plot advancement in the future. 5. Don't whisper~(⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)

Really interesting setting. Although I don't write novels, sometimes I fantasize about similar settings. The occupations and skills in this novel are pretty much what I imagined so far. So maybe I look a little cooler. And in my own imagination. There should be some special effects in the future, such as cards that can stay in place after attacking. After that, it can be recycled to cause treatment, real damage or imprisonment. What happened after that caused all kinds of mixed injuries [face covering] [face covering]

Tentatively give it a four-star rating, and I'll wait for the author's follow-up. The harem is high, so be decisive when choosing a daughter (´இωஇ｀) (Don't keep inserting it at the edge and it won't go in) ヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ" Take action when it's time to take action ୧( ⁼̴̶̤̀ω⁼̴̶̤́ )૭ I hope the author can control the rhythm of the main plot well, with less description of the real world and more content of the game world (*^@^*) The most important thing is not to end up unfinished, not to enter the palace, not to be thrown into the sea (`･ω･´)ゞ I would be very grateful if Ji Ji could see it (Ji Ji) ٩(๑′0`๑)۶ Jimen ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ

This novel is very beautiful and every chapter exceeded my expectations.

I think it's quite good-looking and to my liking. The author should continue writing. Don't give up.

This book is so interesting and the author is great! Who doesn't like an old driver who is slapped in the face by the wheel? The plot development is also very good. I made my aunt laugh throughout the whole process. It's an excellent work. It's a direct five stars. Whoever watches it will love it [Thoughts]

The author's writing skills are very good, there are many jokes, and the ingredients are very complex, the plot length is moderate, and the details are also in place. It really touched my heart (the key is to have good pictures [smile])

Personally, I think it is quite interesting, and the plot is quite exciting. I think this book is quite interesting (the ingredients are complex), and the interaction between the author and the readers is okay. I think it deserves five stars, so I give it a five-star rating as a token of encouragement.

Yes, yes, I really don't want to kick you [smile] [smile] [smile] I really dare to publish the pictures in this book, just to let us understand the meaning of life [smile] [smile] [smile], as we all know, the earth is a ball! ! !

Damn, why are there so few? I finished reading it so quickly. This book is well written. It feels refreshing and comfortable to read. It's just that the author's composition is a bit complicated [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] (personal opinion)

I've read Chapter 79 so far, so I'll leave a comment first. This book is really good-looking. The golden finger given to the protagonist is very strong. It is comfortable to watch the thief. Moreover, it is not the kind of strength that will cause the plot to collapse. It gives people a feeling that the potential is very strong. The combat power is very strong now and will be even stronger in the future. The character of the protagonist is also okay, not a virgin, not a mindless cruelty. When the protagonist does things that are centered on himself, his friends will also benefit appropriately. He is not the kind of character who would rather not give a single copper coin to others. At the same time, I am not the kind of person who likes to be a dragster. Giving useful information to friends is bought by friends, and giving benefits to friends is also for the benefit of myself in the future. Giving equipment to friends with whom I have a good relationship is also because the equipment is not used by my profession (main), and that friend has also helped the protagonist, so it is not a poisonous point. There are no outrageous plots found so far (for example, in some novels, the first green high-quality equipment in the server can be sold for millions of real money). The author's language style is relatively humorous, and he drives off from time to time. There are no excessive jokes. There are some two-dimensional things in the article. The overall look is relaxed and cheerful. Overall, the current level (79 chapters) is considered to be the best among the Tomato novels I have read. If I stay at this level from now on, my grades shouldn't be bad. Come on, author! !

So far, I think it's very nice. I personally think it's a little more lighthearted and funny, and the book's composition is complex, which brings more humor without affecting the plot experience. I used to like online game articles, but gradually found them boring. This kind of book is not bad, and it's worth reading. This author knows how to be cool with men [smile]

It's okay, slightly toxic, you can read it when you're bored... Another reminder: Monk Wen

There is no obvious poisonous point, it feels okay, five-star support

This book has a good style, humor and a good plot

The structure is relatively clear, and the development of the plot is okay. Judging from the direction of the book, it should probably be the harem. The most important thing is that the author will put pictures at the end of each chapter [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]. One suggestion is that before Huaxin, Pets should write less about simulating human nature, such as the meaning of the protagonist, such as the scene where the protagonist and Xiao Zhongli Miao, the poisonous girl, eat and enter the Xingbu, and the dragon lizard rolls his eyes when the protagonist enters the Xingbu. It is very inconsistent.

It is worth appreciating. This novel is one of the best among the novels I have read, and some of the jokes the author uses in the book are very interesting and humorous. This book is worth reading. I hope the author will work hard and update faster.

It looks good, it doesn't look boring, and there's no big problem with the logic.

The first chapter looks good, but the last updated chapter (Invasion of Reality) is not well written and does not suit my taste. There are many poisonous points at this stage. I wonder if the author is not good at writing about integrating reality. But for the excitement up front, it deserves 5 stars.

Recently, I like to watch online games, but to be honest, they are just for fast food, because the general online games are too stereotyped and boring for characters from the same village and foreign characters, and pay too much attention to numerical values. To put it bluntly, they just want to see the feeling of getting stronger quickly. If the author does not work hard on the world view and the shaping of the surrounding characters, it will not be long-term at all. Okay, the above mentioned are other stories, but this one really appeals to my taste. The protagonist's crookedness is standard, but the degree of control is relatively good, and it doesn't make me feel greasy or deliberate. The proportion of female characters is slightly higher, but it's okay. The descriptions of summoned beasts and other players are also very good so far. In fact, I don't really like movies with too many interactions, because other people's writing is bad, and it's difficult to write well, and it can easily make people feel contrived. I like this one very much so far, and as I said, it's exactly what I like. If I have any suggestions, it is actually not necessary to make all the summoned beasts humanoid, and the harem does not need to be particularly large. If there are too many people, the charm of the characters will decrease, the excitement will be weakened, and readers with certain tastes will be more likely to be disgusted. My favorite online game article at the moment

Very good, the plot is very good, at least the sixth book I have read in three years feels great, but there are some old-fashioned suggestions to be more innovative and create a world view. After all, a huge world view is better, but it depends on the author.