Beng San: a Not-So-Good Story

I looked at the comments section and asked if I wanted a female protagonist. In fact, I am quite concerned about it because I was studying in Fallou before. As for what is the place like in Fallo? I think everyone who has seen it knows. Wherever it comes from, there is always something wrong with it. Many female protagonists have harems, and of course I am no exception [face covering] [face covering] But what I want to say is what if the author has not thought about how to write a female protagonist? Or if you don't know how to write about a female protagonist, don't write about it. Because I have read too many books like this. The previous ones were well written, but the sudden addition of a female protagonist felt too abrupt, and then it was scrapped because I couldn't grasp it well. I still hope that the author can write in the longer term. After all, there are many Honkai Impact books on my bookshelf. [Pause face] [Pause face] If you haven't thought about it well, or you don't know how to write about a female protagonist, then don't write it. There is nothing wrong with being single.

The writing is not brilliant, but it gave me an inexplicable sense of daily life. I like this feeling very much. There is a slight sense of crisis in the warmth. The protagonist's mental state is also very beautiful. I like this kind of weird temperament. Overall it's good, just missing one star would make you proud ([laughter]

Writing about the pre-collapse civilization period, well... This is a very good work, five stars for it

When I looked at the first few pictures, I forgot that this was a Honkai Impact III novel. I thought I was just reading a campus novel. I was so numb [face covering] that I didn't remember that this was a Honkai Impact novel until I saw the title of the book. [Face covering] In an instant... [Face covering] The book is highly recommended, fun and interesting

Hiss, how should I put it? The author obviously updated it in such a short time, but wrote a lot, and the progress was extremely slow, but it should also be a special pre-civilization daily style, but the main line is indeed very slow, but overall it is still good

I saw it when it was about 450,000 words, and I have been following it for a long time. I thought it was the same as the title of Ellie, but it has a happy ending. Although the writing is not very good, most of it is dialogue. But no ooc! No ooc! No ooc! After three brushes, Civilization is now cool, but Civilization is finished in a sloppy way.

If the author wants the heroine to have a wave of Xier Σ (|||▽||| )

The heroine wants Alicia

If there is a female protagonist, I hope it is Sakura or Aponya [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

Tomorrow is August 12th, the first anniversary of Alicia's death. Come and say with me: I will always love Alicia!

I watched the extra episode first and confessed to everyone. Male: No more talking Female: Unintentional: Ellie's attitude is to love everyone (equivalent to a joke), Sakura does not have that idea, v2v chatted for a while and chose to continue doing scientific research. After the protagonist left, he suddenly realized what had just happened (equivalent to no success), Gracie (? Capture, FBI!) Possible? : Hua was very nervous and said she wanted to think about it, (probably she preferred to refuse?) Pado blushed and said she was not ready (it seemed like she had a good impression) Success: Aponya was a little surprised at first. From the later description, it seems that the relationship between the two people is not just the love between a man and a woman, but more like a spiritual resonance. Eden is the most classic one, and you can intuitively feel the ambiguity of the atmosphere. After all, the love you have with Eden is very Eden (as mellow as fine wine). Snake has a very strong personality, so after being confessed and having a crush on him, he went straight to the base (should I say he is worthy of being a doctor?)

That being said, the writing is okay, but there is one problem: the plot is really too light. As of now, there is nothing memorable about it. I think the author can describe some larger scenes appropriately, such as fighting big BOOS with other people, or "for the good of the world, use XX on him". Appropriate passion will make this book more interesting. I look forward to your next work.

The author of this book is in a very unstable mental state. No, it should be said that he is mentally unstable but still mentally stable. Very good!

The plot is pretty good, but it would be better if the protagonist wasn't too clever. And the protagonist is brooding all the time. Emm, it's hard to say anything. But the plot and stuff are really good.

The story is more daily, (mainly because the author himself said he would not write about the aftermath of the battle) It's just that modern civilization feels very sloppy. But it is undeniable that the main plot and characters of the previous civilization are very restored, and the protagonist's own abilities are not overly strong and the overall balance is very good.

Not bad, at least so far there haven't been any big problems [Like][Like][Like]

Okay, okay, at least the outline is similar to the plot of the previous civilization, and it also includes many of the author's wild and imaginative comments, so it's no problem for daily reading. You ask me why I watch it every day? I eat a lot of knives, I think eating knives is a daily routine

It's good to watch, but I want to explain one point in the introduction here, that is, there is no heroine. This "no heroine" means that there is no heroine in the main text, and the heroine is in the extra volume, but you can read it normally with peace of mind.

Intimate tips from Miss Pink Fairy ♪ This book is really good to read

One of the few Beng San daily fandoms, very interesting to watch

It is a very good Honkai Impact novel that does not use a lot of pen and ink to describe sad stories, but gives us a hint of joy (those "positive, healthy, sunny" stories can be left to MiHoYo, and the author will turn this imperfect story into what we expect [blowing kiss])

The writing is very good, but there are too many jokes [Thinking] The main character's mental state is a bit problematic, I hope he can become normal after learning the rules [I understand] It is highly recommended for those who want to watch the pre-collapse civilization. It is recommended to skip or ignore the meme-related content and the content related to the genre, so that you will have a better look and feel. There are fewer jokes, and the protagonist has matured a lot, but it makes people more or less sad [crying] Finally, I hope the author can bring a good ending to this not-so-beautiful world [almost crying]

The cover is Ellie, and the heroine...

It's pretty good, at least it's much better than the partially collapsed salmon.

The scriptures are great. (Give the new book a full review)

Have you commented yet? Let me comment again. Maybe I am still too impetuous. After reading the author's book, I feel that there is still room for digging deeper. The author's off-line writing style can be written well. I remember seeing it at the starting point. It's pretty good. I'm glad I didn't miss it.

We are finally civilized. I have been waiting here for so long and it is worth it.

Wow, what does the author say about this book? Remarkable. There are places where you are moved and shed tears, and the emotions are sincere, but the description and conditioning are a little unclear. Thanks to the author for allowing me to come across such a book when I was at the saddest time of review. I finally got through it with the thought of reading the ending comfortably after the exam. I was really emotional after reading it all the way through. I hope the protagonist and his friends can live a better life in the future! Hope he can find his purpose! Fight for all the bad things in the world!

I feel pretty good about it so far, and it's considered mid-range among the three Honkai Impact comics. But I would like to ask the author if this book has a female protagonist. (If anything, I hope it's Eden)

Come on author, it's really beautiful