Dreaming About Dark Souls in the Pokémon World

The background setting is good, and there is no plot where the protagonist invents new things and new attributes and makes the natives stupid. The energy radiation setting is quite novel, and the author will correct the mistakes. It's just that the updates are unstable, and a chapter of 1k-2k is very discouraging. It would be good if you can stably write 3-4k words a day. The pacing is also a bit slow. I hope the plot pace can be sped up. If there is no high school league or anything like that, it would be nice to be able to complete the college entrance examination plot in around 200 chapters. I don't know whether the author intends to write about the travel style (referring to early admission and not taking the college entrance examination, traveling and then returning to college) or the academic style (referring to entering college directly after the college entrance examination summer vacation). The academics are a little tired of seeing it, it's just about joining the school team and killing randomly and then playing in the college league. I hope this kind of plot can be written in a more novel way Oh, by the way, there is also the issue of cheats. I have never played Dark Souls. I don't mind if you write it. Don't give too much increase to PM. If it is too outrageous, you might as well write the system. I came to see PM, not to see Dark Souls. I hope it can reduce the presence of Goldfinger. I don't want to cover the content of Goldfinger in one or two chapters. I think you wrote the plot of Goldfinger very well without writing about it.

The future is promising. Pokémon energy can radiate into the human body to strengthen it and affect a person's personality, which is refreshing. The plot is not toxic at the moment, the growth is a little slow, and it is relatively calm and not passionate enough (personal feeling)

It's very good. I didn't skip a chapter from the beginning to the last. The rhythm is very good. It's not rushed or slow. It's good now. I wrote it at this speed after I graduated from college and added some secret realms. It was basically 7.8 Hundred, so there is no need to rush to speed up or suddenly collect a bunch of Pokémon, and then the battle power suddenly surges. I feel that the last few chapters are a little bit about to collapse. The King of Insects set the stage too early, and there is no cover-up. Don't write after contacting me or be more subtle. It's a bit embarrassing. It's too straightforward, but it's much better. At least the outline setting is very new. This is definitely ahead. Come on [code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold]

The setting is very interesting, the emotions and details are well depicted, and the author also provided pictures. There are some places where it's a little bit toxic, but overall it's pretty good. I also want to ask who the heroine is, hoping it won't be ambiguous.

It looks great. Come on! I hope the author will include the Vulcan Moth [Sending my heart]

It's so real, the emotions are portrayed very delicately, and it's beautiful. Why doesn't anyone else?

The writing is very good, it would be better if there is no female protagonist, so good luck to the author!

Will the protagonist have Dark Souls weapons and armor? @Why is there still high energy ahead?

Not bad, not bad. I like the setting of Pokémon Radiation very much, and the descriptions are well-founded and the interactions are good. It's just that the game is a bit incomprehensible, so a shorter length would be OK.

The content is novel and beautiful It looks good, the story is novel, and it blends Pokémon and Dark Souls well. The protagonist is reincarnated into a parallel world, and the AI, tasks, and shops of the original system are changed to a training space explored in the dream world of the Dark Souls. It won't be too invincible and cool, but the author sometimes likes pigeon writing.

Come on, it's a novel idea

Good! Battles are also a must!

It's a pity that there is just a little less He is actually alive again!

I just discovered that I can rate myself (=^▽^=)

The setting of Sunny Day can be changed. Grass-type elves such as Sakura Treasure and Sunflower Seed can also learn Sunny Day by leveling up.

I can only say it's beautiful, but I don't know why no one

I finished reading it in one night. It's okay but the author is a bit short and weak. Please hurry up and update [please update]

Very pretty [laughs] The characters are drawn very delicately

The setting of radiation is very novel, come on

Very good. The plot itself is good and the shaping of the main characters is also ok.

The plot is good and the setting is also very good. It was not added without reason.