HP: Forced to Become a Top Student at Hogwarts

It's very nice to watch, but I hope to add more emotional scenes between the heroine and Draco. Because I am an old SP, please add more physical contact between them, and more ambiguity and temptation [sneaky laugh] [snear laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The setting of the plot is really awesome. I can't find any book on Tomato that suits my taste like this. The character setting of the heroine is very interesting. I feel like I have to put myself into it! In fact, I think Esther's character is very common in our daily lives. When she traveled to that world, she didn't want to interfere with the plot at first because she was afraid of the uncontrollable butterfly effect and she had been escaping. As an outsider, she may not want to interfere more or less, so she has been avoiding the problem, but she will face it one day. This is the most vivid side of Esther to me - Draco Malfoy's character design is also very well done! Draco in the original book is not that likable, but the author has portrayed an "other side" of Draco. In the original book, I think Draco is not completely bad, and he is not completely good, but he actually has his own side, but his original family has too much influence on him. Of course, in the process of getting along with Esther, he also discovered his arrogant side~ Another thing I like even more is the character of Theodore Nott. He does not often appear in the original work. He is described as the male protagonist in almost all the fanfic derivative works of HP that I have read. However, this book almost seems to me to see the real Theodore Nott. He is cold and distant, but he also pursues what he wants in his heart - especially the time turner. You can feel that he is in a state of paranoia, but he has amazing insight and thinking ability. The character of the heroine's father is also very well portrayed, and the plot is also very powerful. Come on!

A very treasured novel. The heroine has a well-rounded character and the plot is very natural. It is much better than the mindless tomato novel about a snake farm and female competition. It is a sweet cookie and the writing style is warm.

Super pretty! I have basically read all the HP articles on Tomato, and this one is definitely in my top 3! The original character design has not collapsed, the heroine seems to be there from the beginning, the whole book is very harmonious, and there is nothing that is easily outrageous. Very logical! ! ! Very nice! ! !

It's really good. This book was written in my heart. Then when I first read the introduction, I didn't see the last paragraph. Draco said that it was a bit regretful that there was no male protagonist. But then the more I read, the more I felt that the relationship between the heroine and Draco was so sweet and something was wrong. But I didn't doubt that it was Su Moye later. I read the introduction again and realized that I didn't see the last paragraph [face covering]. But I really like this book and highly recommend it.

It's a very good book, very novel. I've read a lot of HP fanfiction CPs including Xiaolong, Professor, etc., But they basically came with their goals before time travel, and they protected the male protagonist in various ways. This feeling is very similar to Draco's relationship, which is a natural and happy enemy in reality, haha,

The writing is so great that it doesn't feel OOC at all. The character of the heroine is really amazing. She has the ability and brains, and she also uses her strength to fight. I really love this kind and a little bit cunning character [admiration], especially the daily scenes with Xiaolong in the back are so sweet that I faint! ! ! Who knows if my aunt laughs at me all the time [laughs]

This book made me go back and read Harry Potter again. It was very interesting. It stirred my imagination and allowed me to immerse myself in the magical world of Hogwarts again. And Xiaolong, he is really cute here, with the handsome face in the movie

I feel that this book is actually quite well written. What I don't like is that when the competition was held, Furong and the others also came over. Then the heroine pretended to compare her beauty with others, and then his brother praised the heroine for being prettier than others, including later the heroine also joked that she was not as beautiful as Furong. I don't understand why she had to compare with others [shocked]. I repeatedly highlighted this aspect of her appearance twice to compare with others. It just felt a bit... But the rest of the writing was very good.

Very well written! A very nice fanfic, or my favorite! When I first saw that the CP was Malfoy, I was scared because many Malfoy and Snape fans are very irrational. Because they like Snape, Malfoy exaggeratedly beautified them and made the protagonist team very bad! I want to say that everyone is imperfect, and it is difficult to define good guys and bad guys, but it is precisely this imperfection that constitutes the perfect novel! People who really like Harry Potter should not apply the fan circle's tactics to the wizarding world. Attacking each other and over-beautifying and worsening are a kind of blasphemy to their favorite characters! Many authors who write fan fiction like to intentionally or unintentionally suppress the protagonist group and improve their own shortcomings, but this author did not narrate it in a light-hearted and pleasant way. I like it very much!

I finished reading it in one day. It is very interesting. I like the character of the heroine very much, and the interaction with Xiaolong is also very interesting. So the author must not stop updating it! I've been short of books recently and can't read any novels. The quality of this book is very good and you can read it with confidence. The author's writing style is also very good.

This is the second book I have read about Draco's HP on Tomato. Xiao Long is the kind of spoiled young master. You can tell from his wand that he is not a bad person. Because the family is warm and loving. I think the writing is really good. First they were happy about their enemies, then the heroine took control of them, and then they firmly chose each other and were forced to grow up together. In the end, it was not the sweetest, but it was very heartwarming. I have read this book for a long time. The most important thing is that it is finished. It is not like other books that have been discontinued and are hateful. I want to give it five stars! ! !

I'm really crying, I'm really crying, this Mrs. Wen Ye is so fucking beautiful, I really want to cry. This is the first time I have loved a HP fanfic like this so much. I really don't think Xiaolong is OOC. I think if Xiaolong fell in love, it would be like this! This novel really amazed me from the first chapter. It almost made me think that the author was writing about her Hogwarts diary. It was really good. I want to recommend this book to the whole world, it's so awesome [crying] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss]

The author's writing style is very good, the characters all have their original personalities, and they feel so friendly. I really love Xiaolong and hope that he and the heroine will become a successful couple as soon as possible [shy][shy][shy]

Many of the full text are written from other perspectives that cannot be seen in the original movie. The writing is very good and the character descriptions are really full. Both the good guys and the bad guys are well described. The plot is also compact. Don't be fooled into rejecting the article because of the acting skills of the heroine in the first few pictures. The most important thing is that the heroine is not perfect. The heroine grows up step by step, and the mutual support with the hero is each other's light in those dark and difficult days. The changes are really great. I hope the author can also update some of the ordinary daily life of the heroine and the hero.

Awesome [Like] I have read more than a dozen Harry Potter fanfics, and this is my favorite one! The heroine did not intervene in the plot from a God's perspective from the beginning, but ensured that the butterfly effect was not particularly large, changed many difficult feelings, respected the original work, and prevented regrets and regrets. I just want to say that the happy and mischievous twins are still there, the heart-warming Chinese girl no longer has to look at her Muggle husband's face in memory of her beloved, the cold snake king has let him go, and the distressed platinum young master can always be himself and stay with his lover for a long time, and... It's not that other fanfics didn't change the endings of these people, but this book is the only one that really made me feel like I was reading a Harry Potter fanfic, rather than a "fanfic" that arbitrarily changes the characters' personalities, plots, and even worldviews under the guise of HP. It can be said that the characters in this book are as consistent as possible with the original work, which is what I love most! Moreover, the relationship with the young master was not a good one at the beginning. The two were at odds with each other and neither would let the other [laughs] I won't spoil too much (I really can't control myself [crying]), but it's really good to watch! Everyone go and see it! [Blowing kiss]

He is very good at shaping characters. I have only watched the first movie in the Harry Potter series and have only a little understanding of this magical world. What surprised me about this book is that the characters' language is very emotional and not abrupt, and the foreshadowing is not easy to detect. It can be seen that the author has a good foundation in writing. Otherwise, this kind of book will be easily rejected by fans of the original book or movies. One more thing, Esther and Decorah had a good fight. The letter Decorah wrote in the extra chapter was so sincere, I really liked it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Like it very much! To be honest, I have always liked the two snakes. I had no impression of Hufflepuff before! However, after reading this article, I completely changed my mind. The little 🦡 badger is so cute! I checked the original book again. During the Battle of Hogwarts, the number of students left by Hufflepuff was second only to Gryffindor. Rowling also specifically explained that staying in Gryffindor is both brave and showing off! It was a carefully considered choice for Hufflepuff to stay. Even if you know it will be a bad result, you will not look back! The little badger who is doing everything but eating melon is so cute! The author writes so well! I hope that we can continue to produce food. Nott Theodore is so lonely. I hope that we will give him another chance! Great support.

It's great, the heroine is so cute too Then the overall rhythm is also very slow, which does not violate the original look of the book. The plot is very reasonable , I'm really looking forward to the heroine's next scene with Draco. Great

It's okay, relatively bland. But I felt a little frustrated watching it. The protagonist's character is too gentle. I feel like she is the kind of character who takes a step back to see the world, so she only fights back when she can't stand it anymore.

This is the first time I have posted a long review on Tomato. I have read the entire book without skipping a chapter, which is very rare for me. As a senior Ham fan, I would like to say that it is really beautiful! ! ! I didn't really like reading HP fanfics in the past because it was too different from the original work. It was OOC to the point that I couldn't accept it, and bugs were everywhere. But the characters in this book are full-bodied and there aren't too many OOC and bugs. The writing style is somewhat similar to the original work. It feels like I'm reading a Harry Potter with a different ending. The style of "Slow Water" really struck a chord with me, and it's very similar to the way it was narrated in the original work. It makes up for a lot of my regrets. Dumbledore, Lupin, Sirius, Fred... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not abrupt either. The underground love really pokes me in the face. I was so excited that I felt dizzy. It was so cool! The writing is delicate, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the description of the heroine's growth and psychology is also superb! It broke my prejudice against HP fanfics. I think I will start reading some other fanfics. Fans who have the same idea as me can also read this book. The writing style is really similar to the original!

This book is so well written that it completely satisfied my regrets about the Harry Potter books. It's sad, the characters are all well-rounded, and Draco Malfoy at the end basically doesn't deviate from the original plot. The emotional scene with the heroine was also written just right. The author is really great, but it's a pity that it's not enough. I hope the author will publish a second book about their married life. The author really describes the characters, plot, plot, etc. Very well, so I won't spoil it too much here. If you read the original text yourself, you will feel that it is really good and very attractive to you. Unfortunately, it is not enough.

This book is very nice and tells a series of stories that happened between the two of them. It also tells about the change in their minds because of this story, from children to adults, a change in mental maturity. It also tells about the two of them going through adversity together, and also tells the love story from Hutch, Patch and Slytherin, and They tell the story of love in a vivid way, although it is a bit different from today's fast food love, but they highlight the sweetness of their love, and describe the psychology of one person's secret love for another person very vividly. It also tells the story of the female protagonist's inability to fall in love with the male protagonist and her determination to save the world, while the male protagonist is also willing to accompany the female protagonist.

First of all, it's very beautiful. I rarely see fanfics that fit the character of Xiaolong so well, and the existence of the female protagonist is not OOC at all. It really suits my taste, and you can really feel and follow the emotional fluctuations of the male and female protagonists, and you will feel naive because they clearly don't care but they arrogantly say they don't care, but it is undeniable that the love in youth is so childish and precious. It's a pity that when the heroine confessed that she loved her so much when she was drunk, she shouted "Long Live Straight Ball", and she was frightened for them when they fought against the fan toad at Malfoy Manor. After that, she felt sad and distressed about their situation and their love for each other. Even though I know the ending is good, I still feel so distressed. Just like knowing that the ending of HP is not so perfect but I still finished watching it, maybe it's like life will never be perfect but it is imperfection that creates perfection. In short, this article is really beautiful, as beautiful as a universe explosion (at least in my mind, don't blame me) Finally, I hope the author will update more. It's really not enough.

I like it, the emotional line is delicate, and it seems to really accompany the growth of the protagonist. At the same time, it does not describe in a long way how much the protagonist loves each other. Their love makes them brave and gives them a space to relax and breathe when they encounter difficulties, and then continue to work hard to overcome difficulties (இдஇ). Anyway, I really like this article٩( 'ω' )و

This book is really great and makes up for a lot of regrets. The heroine and Draco went from being at odds at the beginning of school to becoming companions for each other in the end. The journey was bumpy and bumpy, but it was also very sweet. Some of the descriptions of the environment in the book also fit the situation at that time. The characters are well drawn. I like this passage in the book: We are two parallel lines with no intersection. You flow to your stars, and I run to my sea. But unfortunately, I like you and you like me. So we ran hard, seized every possibility, and came together before the next intersection where we completely parted ways.

Wow, this book is really super good. Even though it is a fanfic, the author's integration is very appropriate. Esther and Draco really have a good and sweet relationship. It would be surprising to everyone that they were happy enemies at first sight and eventually turned into lovers. Esther is Draco's salvation. Even though the Malfoy family defected to Voldemort, everyone still stayed with him when they were alienated. I shed tears. In the finale, everyone was safe and the couple became a couple. Hey, who is as curious as me about the follow-up of Wood and Donna? I hope the author will produce another great work

The author's writing is not bad, and the young master and the heroine's baby are also very friendly. However, when reading, you may feel that it is not friendly to the protagonist group including Gryffindor, and the characters are a bit biased. The lion's house baby and the station's protagonist group should be cautious, but the young master and the heroine's baby are really sweet. I stayed up late to watch it, and I think the author is very malicious towards Harry. Many plots are narrated from the heroine's omniscient perspective, and the heroine's abilities are shaped by the incomprehensible behavior of people around her. I think this is a good method, but it may not be acceptable to people who like Gryffindor and Harry. Moreover, the characters in it are more or less deviated from the original characters. In other words, it means a bit of ugliness. It may be because the author likes Hufflepuff and admires the badgers very much, which leads to comments such as "I really want to kill Harry" and "I have always hated lions. They have always been reckless and stubborn. Only such a protagonist will cause sacrifices to those around them." If you treat it as an independent novel that has nothing to do with the original work, then it is very interesting. , Sisters who don't mind can join, the heroine and the young master are very sweet, and the author's writing is also good. I'm not qualified to criticize other people's work. The author is indeed great. I just give my opinion, just like the author said. If you don't like it, quit. I just finished this book. Anyway, the author is very good. It is really not easy to sort out all the logical lines and insert the plot of the heroine, including the dealings between Draco and the decent ones. It is very powerful👍🏻But it is not very friendly to Gryffindor and Harry hahahaha

The young couple is really, really good at each other! ! ! ! It's really beautiful. The key is that everyone is shocked to know that the two of them are in love. I almost laughed out loud. Harry also thought it was a love drug. Of course, he also wished them happiness forever🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉[laughing]

This book is really good. The male and female protagonists have their own opinions and don't talk about conflicts. It's a little sweet, but it doesn't focus on love. Both of them have some careers in their hearts. The sweetest thing is that after going through a series of experiences, they still firmly choose each other [smirk] [smile]