Harry Potter: Forced to Become a Top Student at Hogwarts

It's very nice to watch, but I hope to add more emotional scenes between the heroine and Draco. Because I am an old SP, please add more physical contact between them, and more ambiguity and temptation [sneaky laugh] [snear laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The setting of the plot is really awesome. I can't find any book on Tomato that suits my taste like this. The character setting of the heroine is very interesting. I feel like I have to put myself into it! In fact, I think Esther's character is very common in our daily lives. When she traveled to that world, she didn't want to interfere with the plot at first because she was afraid of the uncontrollable butterfly effect and she had been escaping. As an outsider, she may not want to interfere more or less, so she has been avoiding the problem, but she will face it one day. This is the most vivid side of Esther to me - Draco Malfoy's character design is also very well done! Draco in the original book is not that likable, but the author has portrayed an "other side" of Draco. In the original book, I think Draco is not completely bad, and he is not completely good, but he actually has his own side, but his original family has too much influence on him. Of course, in the process of getting along with Esther, he also discovered his arrogant side~ Another thing I like even more is the character of Theodore Nott. He does not often appear in the original work. He is described as the male protagonist in almost all the fanfic derivative works of HP that I have read. However, this book almost seems to me to see the real Theodore Nott. He is cold and distant, but he also pursues what he wants in his heart - especially the time turner. You can feel that he is in a state of paranoia, but he has amazing insight and thinking ability. The character of the heroine's father is also very well portrayed, and the plot is also very powerful. Come on!

A very treasured novel. The heroine has a well-rounded character and the plot is very natural. It is much better than the mindless tomato novel about a snake farm and female competition. It is a sweet cookie and the writing style is warm.

Super pretty! I have basically read all the HP articles on Tomato, and this one is definitely in my top 3! The original character design has not collapsed, the heroine seems to be there from the beginning, the whole book is very harmonious, and there is nothing that is easily outrageous. Very logical! ! ! Very nice! ! !

It's really good. This book was written in my heart. Then when I first read the introduction, I didn't see the last paragraph. Draco said that it was a bit regretful that there was no male protagonist. But then the more I read, the more I felt that the relationship between the heroine and Draco was so sweet and something was wrong. But I didn't doubt that it was Su Moye later. I read the introduction again and realized that I didn't see the last paragraph [face covering]. But I really like this book and highly recommend it.

It's a very good book, very novel. I've read a lot of HP fanfiction CPs including Xiaolong, Professor, etc., But they basically came with their goals before time travel, and they protected the male protagonist in various ways. This feeling is very similar to Draco's relationship, which is a natural and happy enemy in reality, haha,

The writing is so great that it doesn't feel OOC at all. The character of the heroine is really amazing. She has the ability and brains, and she also uses her strength to fight. I really love this kind and a little bit cunning character [admiration], especially the daily scenes with Xiaolong in the back are so sweet that I faint! ! ! Who knows if my aunt laughs at me all the time [laughs]

I feel that this book is actually quite well written. What I don't like is that when the competition was held, Furong and the others also came over. Then the heroine pretended to compare her beauty with others, and then his brother praised the heroine for being prettier than others, including later the heroine also joked that she was not as beautiful as Furong. I don't understand why she had to compare with others [shocked]. I repeatedly highlighted this aspect of her appearance twice to compare with others. It just felt a bit... But the rest of the writing was very good.

This book made me go back and read Harry Potter again. It was very interesting. It stirred my imagination and allowed me to immerse myself in the magical world of Hogwarts again. And Xiaolong, he is really cute here, with the handsome face in the movie

Very well written! A very nice fanfic, or my favorite! When I first saw that the CP was Malfoy, I was scared because many Malfoy and Snape fans are very irrational. Because they like Snape, Malfoy exaggeratedly beautified them and made the protagonist team very bad! I want to say that everyone is imperfect, and it is difficult to define good guys and bad guys, but it is precisely this imperfection that constitutes the perfect novel! People who really like Harry Potter should not apply the fan circle's tactics to the wizarding world. Attacking each other and over-beautifying and worsening are a kind of blasphemy to their favorite characters! Many authors who write fan fiction like to intentionally or unintentionally suppress the protagonist group and improve their own shortcomings, but this author did not narrate it in a light-hearted and pleasant way. I like it very much!