Create a Wonder in Another World, Starting from the God-Level Tavern

Except for the fact that the content of the title is a bit low, this book is simply unbeatable. The world view is innovative and novel, the interpretation of the realm even has a bit of science fiction, and the memes and explanation of the profession of architect are amazing. Starting from Chapter 145, I don't know whether the author is too obsessed with the development of the world view, or simply thinking about the word count, and the result is that the development of the setting is too long and boring. The rhythm is very fragmented, and often in the middle of a story, a whole chapter suddenly becomes a pure setting. It feels like watching Douluo 3 many years ago. It is thousands of words in one go. I hope the author can control it a little.

What a wonderful book! Boundless planes, infinite possibilities! In the long river of time and space, legends will also lose their anchor point and decline... Everyone is looking for the direction of their growth, hoping to achieve the crown! The world view of this book is particularly shocking! Highly recommended! ! !

I will write bit by bit. As a reader who has been immersed in the world of online literature for many years, extensive reading has made me pay more attention to logical self-consistency, writing style, and your structure and overall sense of rhythm. Your book is well written, and it has its own ideas. I suggest you watch "Tiangong". There are some good things in it. Especially the ending, which allows people to distinguish the ancient tripod, leaves a deep impression on the audience. It feels a bit in line with your idea of ​​the Great Wall. There are also 12 upgrade levels for you to build buildings of 12 genres. I hope every move you make will be beyond my expectations. Bring me (reader) different surprises. You cannot look directly at God, cannot describe it, cannot understand it. Suddenly I was reminded of "I Am God" and I hope you will be better. Cthulhu is a concept put forward by a modern American novel: chaos, disorder, and pollution. Are there gods of rationality, stability, and moderation that are incompatible with the Three Pillar Gods? Deductive method, this reminds me of mystery again. It always interprets other people's genres, but lacks its own core architectural settings, which makes my eyes shine. The addition of games has increased the diversity and interest of the content, and there is more content to write about. This requires controlling the general rhythm. To conceive what exactly do you want to express? And it's better to write well and don't break off in the middle.

Well, the content is very good and very novel, and it has a new idea of ​​lord's writing. But I feel like it's appropriate to add some description of the contributions of the subjects. Throughout the book, I only see the protagonist protecting them, but the specific contributions are not reflected. It makes people feel that even without the subjects, the impact will not be great. Especially during the 51st wave trial of the Zerg, they were just slaves who had just bought them a few days ago. There was no such deep affection. It was just that the leader was injured, so he went to fight himself regardless of the danger.

It seems to be an old-fashioned structure, but in fact the world view is very strict and unique, and it has a very novel architect system. It also has elements of scientific research and creation. The writing is good, not brainless and cool. According to the current update, there will be big secrets in the world in the future, which is exciting. The estimated score should be above 9.6.

The worldview is grand and rich, but the reading experience is not very good, because the author's biggest shortcoming is that it is short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short! Later appendix is ​​too lengthy

The various settings and world frameworks of the author are indeed quite huge, and can be counted among the settings in the entire Tomato. Although they refer to the settings of many games, if they really don't refer to them, it is simply not a setting that one person can write. If one person can write it, he is a god, so it is excusable. Moreover, the content of the article is not bad, and the IQ is not too low. I just feel that it occasionally goes off topic. Overall, it is a pretty good article, and it has received 5 stars😊 There are very few books that I can finish reading, and I am waiting for the author to update, but one thing I have to say is that the author is really good, really tnd good 😂

A very creative book. Compared with other inexplicable lord stories, this book has a more complete world view, a unique extraordinary system, and rich professional forms. In the main plot, the relationship between the various organizations is relatively reasonable, the relationship between the characters is not obtrusive, and the protagonist's improvement method is unique. It is not a boring upgrade by fighting monsters, but downplays the plot of the protagonist as an architect in combat, and puts more emphasis on exploration and creation. However, the author's writing style needs to be improved, the narrative structure is a bit messy, and there are many loopholes in the logic.

It's quite interesting. Various elements are spliced ​​together, but it doesn't look so abrupt. All the elements are included in my own setting. It feels pretty good. I finished watching it all night yesterday.

I really like the protagonist written by the author. I like to see him create a new genre of profession and see him establish his own territory (I actually don't like reading lord stories, but it turns out that it's not that I don't like it, but that I don't see anything I like). The protagonist's profession is also very novel, and he is a genius architect. The author's world view is also very grand, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story line. Some people say that there is a live broadcast in the early stage and they don't want to watch it, but the author has written very little, and at most he has only written the first ten or twenty chapters, and basically nothing about the rest. Anyway, I think it is quite interesting, so cheers, author [send heartfelt][send heartfelt][send heartfelt]

The overall article is okay, the subject matter is good, and the ideas are also okay. The author has many ideas, which is a plus point, but many times they are just superficial and disappear after a certain level. I am not sure whether the author wants to make a big move or simply forgot. He comes up with ideas as soon as he comes up with them. You should pay attention to this, otherwise it is easy to get confused. Finally, regarding the live broadcast, I clearly tell you that only the protagonist has a live broadcast in the first phase, but not in the follow-up. Then we can probably understand it as the direction of attracting agents. School belles, villains, rich second generation and other poisonous points can be accepted. I think this new poisonous point should also be acceptable (at least the author has written it well and conceived the content well, not an assembly line poisonous point).

This is a well-written novel with an extremely complete setting. From the perspective of the perfect setting, this book is novel enough. The protagonist generally takes the lucky and cautious path of a scientific research lord. Although there were times when I was impulsive and irrational. Judging from the fact that the author obviously knew that this was a stain but still let the protagonist's spirit go forward, and let go of goodwill to accept a teacher. This is a willful guy who wants to suit his own needs without caring much about the risk to his readers. The cautious and kind-hearted nature naturally attracts those of us who are in a similar state of mind, but on the contrary, it is a bit poisonous to these friends who are not cold. ——Maybe you can use this to observe your own good and evil tendencies? [Think]

Really, I think it's very interesting. Maybe it's because I haven't seen similar backgrounds, so I can't imagine the subsequent development. So I'm really looking forward to his subsequent plots.

The author is like a genius, his writing is good, his world view is ok, his system is unique and charming, maybe adding some descriptions of daily life will make it more realistic and immersive. Wouldn't it be better to add a heroine to occasionally slow down the pace of the writing? (Personal opinion) I hope the author will work hard. It's pretty good so far [Like]

It's really beautiful! ! ! In addition, the author would like to reply, is there a female protagonist? This is important to me.

The writing style and plot are both average and above average for online novels. Although it seems a bit bland in the early stage, when you look at the later stage, you will feel that the author's writing is not bad, but the author is too procrastinating when writing. It often takes several chapters to explain one thing clearly. In addition, the author often updates randomly. Do you believe that updating every two or three days can actually be regarded as a time when the author is more diligent? ! ! Moreover, the chapters updated by the author are short and concise, which are not enough to read👀. Therefore, if you want to read this book, you must be prepared to follow the updates for a long time and the author often disconnects from time to time.

It is one of the best Global Lords stories I have ever read. The world view is huge and it depends on the author whether he can control it. So far, there are no major problems. I look forward to the follow-up and hope the author can control such a huge world view.

As of the current update on May 3, the overall performance is quite unexpectedly above the standard. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into constructing such a worldview, and made many expressions in a logical and orderly manner. But it also leads to a certain threshold for reading, but just do what you like and don't worry too much about outside gossip. Just like another author's Knight Trilogy, as long as you calm down and carefully polish your fantasy world, readers will definitely pay for it. Come on, come on [I learned it]

Not bad. The power system and plot are both very good. Each virtual match takes up 5 chapters, which is a waste of time. I can't understand it. I've written 700 chapters and added a card system from scratch. The plot is discontinuous and has a sense of fragmentation

5 Points. The more you write, the better the book is. It can be seen that the author is reflecting on himself. I think that with such a big world view in this book, the author can write like this, which I have never seen in Tomato. The growth of a small character does not seem to be mainstream in Tomato, but I have read more than 1,000 hours and read countless new books. This is the only one. One by one, I have read more than 400 chapters and I am still curious about his huge and reasonable world view and every little story in this book. I don't really like the refreshing articles about Zhanshen that only include a few heroic characters, so I leave this comment and hope that the author can fill in some big holes. Don't be discouraged and keep writing!

I have read 300 chapters so far. This book is a good book with a broad world view and multiple genres that I have read so far. You need to be able to endure the boring world view and boring daily life in the early stage. Only when you look at the later stage can you see how beautiful life was in the early stage. The multiple timelines in Tentacles really shocked me. Whether it's the foreshadowing, the turning points, or the miracles that follow, I can read it immersively. I hope the author of the following chapters will write like this. [Send heart][Send heart] tmd, it makes me so happy

Four stars is enough. First of all, let me say that this book has a lot of bad points. It will definitely not exceed 9.5 Or even 9 is a bit difficult. Why? First of all, the writing style is limited, and the underlying logic and thinking are not like those of a veteran. It is more of a novice's book. Then Finally, there are some problems in terms of emotion and rhythm. The first few hundred chapters have already had this problem. I don't know if those who say it's good are bad readers, but this book can only be said to be okay and readable. It's not particularly good, nor is it too bad. You can just read it for yourself. Four stars is already high.

It's actually quite interesting. The author combined the knowledge I know to create a brand new world. For example, various races, various professions, such as King and Hearthstone. In fact, these are found in many novels, but the author combines them well. The author's system and various knowledge are also written very carefully. There is no feeling of ignorance or unreasonable conflict. But this novel is really slow and you have to be very patient to read it. If you don't have the patience, you're like me. I've read nearly 150 chapters and can't stand it any longer… It's not that the novel is bad, it's just that I'm impatient. I still give the author a thumbs up!

It looks good. I have never played any of the games mentioned in the article, but I still enjoy watching it. The male protagonist is very real and has a pure sense of being a scientist. He is a person rather than a label. The description of the female character is also good. It is not written like a doll with a face, breasts, butt, legs and feet. Similarly, the growth route is also very real, and you will not ignore dangers or anything just to pretend. It is reasonable and well-founded without being embarrassing, and the world view is grand. Although it is slower and a bit dull, it is not boring now after reading it for three times. It is worth keeping on the bookshelf for a lifetime. When the book is exhausted, read it.

It took me two days to finish reading the latest chapter. The world view is huge, with a total of 12 levels. It took 1.3 Million words to reach the fourth level. There are too many setting introductions that are a bit watery, but it is acceptable for people like me who like a complete world view and background. In addition, the protagonist is not the strongest but he is not frustrated at all. I like this kind of logical and slow development. There are too many invincible and refreshing novels in Tomato. There are really few such down-to-earth ones. So far, there is no female protagonist. In recent years, themes such as the popular time-travel Lord Survival and so on are all involved.

There are quite few settings for this kind of lord construction and architect profession, and the plot settings are also very exciting, but the pace is a bit slow and there are too few. I hope the author can work hard! [Please update]

It's a very good book. The rhythm and content are interlocking and close. Everyone has their own personality characteristics, but there are too many content elements in The King, right? Lao Tie, can you please reduce the number of king elements? . .

It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into the world view, which is very novel, and the setting of mysterious fantasy and wonder is also very good. Although there are many other things that are shadowed, the writing is basically very good. The outline is generally okay, but it can be seen that the author has just started writing a book, and the idea is very good, but some details are not described well. It's too reasonable, and the pre-live broadcast feels a bit unnecessary. Many people commented that the author was rambling, but it's okay. Basically, it can be seen that it is all foreshadowing and it also serves the main line (many Tomato authors don't know how to foreshadow). Personally, I think the red flags are within the acceptable range. I recommend reading it. I hope the author will update it soon.

The problem is huge. The worldview and system are too big. But I am lucky. There are enough words. Although the various foreshadowing and pitfalls of explaining the worldview and system take up a lot of space, it is enough and worth looking forward to. I am still too optimistic. What I read later is really confusing. What is confusing is not the secrecy of the writing, but many things. I know that the author dug a hole, then left the hole unfilled, and then dug another hole. The second hole was not filled, and then dug another hole. There is very little practical content and story progress. Most of the chapters are just about digging holes. It doesn't matter if you dig holes or not. However, your story only has holes but no story. You can't just dig holes without advancing the story. To advance the story, you want to dig holes in all aspects without blind spots. And the author also likes to dig big holes to fill small holes. Simply put, filling some holes with great difficulty will inevitably lead to another big hole behind. Just looking at the puddles, the progress of the story is really slow.

I listened to the whole thing. It's really wonderful and the design is very grand. But after listening to it for a long time and suddenly reading it, I felt a little uncomfortable. I think this book is suitable for listening slowly and is the best choice for fishing at work.