Fantasy: the Invincible Holy Son, the Master of Lying Down

After reading 40 chapters, I still defended the original heroine, and the other heroines didn't have a single line, saying that they were inappropriate lickers. But when something happened, I still defended her every day. Every time I met the original heroine and the new heroine, there was no news at all. Does the author still want to keep the original heroine? I remember at the beginning I said there were a few women who liked the villain protagonist, but now I don't see any of them. My opinion is just to change the way of being a dog licker.

No need to look at licking dogs

What are you writing about? Press our intelligence to the ground and rub it

The writing is very messy, there is no clear main line, and the main character is a bit short. It's so confusing. After reading more than fifty chapters, I still don't know what it is about [vomit][vomit][vomit] One star in the sky!

Not so good [face covering] This kind of novel should be a cool type, or a behind-the-scenes manipulation type, but as a result, you can just come here and press the villain to the ground and rub it [face covering] It doesn't feel good at all. It's obviously a messed up protagonist. [Vomit] The protagonist is written on the villain's skin [you read carefully] Author, you have to remember that in villain-type novels, the villain's life experience is invincible, even if he is not invincible They are also the top group of people in the mainland, but it turns out that you, any powerful person, can hold down the villain's hammer without even a protector behind him, oh no, some wait until they are about to die before being called out by the villain, otherwise they will not come out [face covering] Some of the broken systems are the same as none, normal. Originally, the novel should not go anywhere, and the plot will not go anywhere, but you just have a hand in everything, not good, really not good [vomit] To sum up: write the protagonist in the guise of a bad villain

From the first chapter to Chapter 62, and seeing all the negative reviews in the comment section, I actually want to say that in my personal opinion, this book is not excellent, but it is not that bad either. Maybe everyone thinks that its disadvantage is that it is not white enough or cool enough. This is indeed a shortcoming. It can be seen that the author's writing style is relatively ancient, and it is obviously different from the current popular style. However, if you look carefully, you can see that the author is adjusting his own style and writing method. The author likes to dig holes, and I thought it was a big hole or that the author had forgotten it, but he found that the recent chapters have been gradually filled in. Although the filling is not deep, the logic is reasonable. But I think the biggest problem with this book is the antagonist. Scenes with few people seem to be okay, but scenes with many people immediately expose the author's shortcomings. The characters are more obvious in facial makeup, and the antagonist scenes are basically carried out in a single line. Multi-character interactions will sometimes ignore one or more characters. Although there are corrections later, it can be seen that it is not very natural. In terms of plot, I can only say that it is quite satisfactory. The general logic makes sense. There are not many evil points, but there are not many outstanding points. When it should be ups and downs, it seems peaceful. In addition, the protagonist's golden finger is obviously very bad, and it is understandable that he does not appear many times, but the performance is too little, and the descriptions are relatively tasteless, so this may be something that readers find bad? Well, I originally wanted to give it three stars, but based on the principle of more encouragement, I added one star. I hope the author can update it stably so that the quality can be even better in the future. Come on!

Isn't it normal for the sick fiancée to have never met the protagonist and not admit it? He also used this incident as an excuse to hurt the protagonist. The writing is very unreasonable

I can't stand it anymore. The writing is really bad. The tags are also randomly added. When you click on them, you can see that they are nothing but "grievances" and "grievances".

Actually, I just have a question, is the other soul in the heroine's body the heroine from the original future plot (that is, the plot with the original male protagonist)? So this is a lot of fun, did you teach your past self how to avoid lightning?

How should I put it... The protagonist feels like he has no character. He said he would lie down and actually run around. Even if his father comes over and beeps, he will not find a place to squat? Even if there is a system, you can still run around and cause trouble. To put it bluntly, this system is fundamentally inappropriate.

I really don't understand what the article is about. It's just a headline.

The title of the book is about the villain, but in the end the villain wants to lie down. The protagonist provokes the villain in various ways. Why should this villain, who is not a villain, be called a villain? It was really frustrating to watch, so I personally don't recommend watching 😵‍💫😵‍💫"Selling Dog Meat at the Head of a Sheep"

I'm really speechless. What does writing a villain have to do with the original heroine? She's always been helping the heroine. Why don't you write traditional fantasy? Don't write villains and make them look bad [vomit]

Expensive protagonists, usually the protagonists presented in this way are actually very strong, but the author writes a f. W. He is good at showing off and loves to pretend, so the Holy Son can't be killed even if he dances in front of him for a long time, so don't write any invincible stories.

It started off well, but what the hell is that thing at the end, and then it gets stabbed by an inexplicable fiancée, and you have to lie down? You stopped lying down and started licking, right? A cold male god, right? Guard silently, right? Really sick. . .

Not good, especially when you see the same old thing from the back

I saw Chapter 47. The protagonist is just a bastard. The treasure chest cannot be opened and the lottery cannot be drawn. I don't know what I am thinking? And I feel like a fun person

Why do you rubbish fish for six hours a day? Damn it, sleep for 12 hours and not receive anything. Is this a normal human brain circuit? Even though it is a fishing system, you really have to kill him, right?

Poison does not qualify as lying flat. The so-called lying flat should mean having absolute strength and not participating in all disputes. You only need to wait until the end to deal a devastating blow to the opponent. Or you can stay out of the whole process and have a lot of shit in just a few chapters. You abandon the original heroine and replace her with someone else, which is useless.

It's not good-looking at all, especially in the twenty-something chapters, when someone stabbed someone and they still didn't take revenge. Is this a villain story? It's a bit like a Madonna. I personally don't think it's good-looking. Once I see it, I don't want to read it. It feels like a licking dog. It doesn't react when someone pokes it. I almost vomited when I saw it [awkward laugh]

Nothing is written clearly, what the hell, I read it in a daze. The realm is blurred. The lower boundary is blurred. The upper boundary is even vaguer, everything is vague, even the system is vague, and there is no sense of mystery. It feels like it is describing a person. Hey, this person is still vague, and the others are also vague. What is writing a novel if nothing is revealed? It feels like everyone in the novel is hidden. I have never seen a novel written like this.

What kind of rubbish novel, the main character is the villain, the Son, who has a high status, but in the end, he does everything by himself, and has no character of the villain at all. Anyone can hurt the protagonist

I went straight into the trap and read chapters 20 to 22. It really convinced me to quit.

I really don't understand you, what you wrote, and what does it have to do with the title?

What the hell is this? I can't understand it at all. A system villain is using it, and the decent heroine is also using it. What is this? I've read so many books, and you are the worst.

Don't comment too much on perverts

What did you write? The logic is confusing! East and west! No main line

I actually finished reading the first chapter.

Anyway, after watching Thirty-Five and Poison again, you and he are almost like the Holy Mother, and they are also villains.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Twenty One. You could have been more decisive, but this is the result. It doesn't fit with your character.