Hey, hey! What kind of weird admission notice is this!
And what kind of weird world is this!
Why is there a weird pattern on my hand!
Other people go to school, flip through a book, and know everything. They don't even have to guess on exams to get the answers right.
And me? I take on traitors with my girlfriend, kick exotic beasts, and I'm using nothing but thin air!
My underling says, "Boss, please, let me bow down to you!"
My roommate says, "Man, I'll only ever be impressed by you!"
The principal says, "Student, you can graduate! Go out there and wreak havoc..."
"Ahem! Go out there and become a useful member of society!"
The plot at the beginning is quite interesting, but the writing style is still a bit immature. I give you 10 points for encouragement and keep up the good work!
There are still some plots that are a bit baffling, but the start is still very good.