Pokemon: A Reborn Ash Sets Out from Hoenn

This book is very well written. I enjoy reading it. I hope you can continue to work hard and update it.

This book is probably one of the genres that I have read quite well. There are winners and losers, and you can conquer the previous Pokémon. I read a book before and said that there is a Bi Diao. You don't need to conquer the big king swallow, so I don't want to read it. Some write about being invincible. There is a system, but you don't need to write about being too invincible. You have that super evolution. Okay, and remember when you write this sentence, what about conquering Ryokaza? Even if you conquer it, you can't conquer it now because you have just started writing it. You also want to conquer Raikou Suicune. You have to write that there is a species. This is better. There is another thing that I don't know if it is right or not. Is Z-type coming out too early? , Because this super evolution is relatively recent, and it is easy to find. You don't have to defeat anyone to get it. The Z-style is not good. According to the animation, he will get it by defeating whoever he defeats. Because some people must ask, what kind of trick is this? This is a personal opinion. In fact, Xiaozhi's Pokémon are quite powerful, but they have not evolved. , Blastoise, Bulbasaur, Crocodile... In the end, I just can't write it like this. The team was originally determined during the game, but Latias and Latio were replaced midway. I saw a comment saying that this can be changed midway? It's not necessary to confirm the team before the game. I don't know if you have read this book. That's it. This book is quite good.

The writing is quite good. All the mythical beasts and quasi-gods have been reorganized. It is better than other time-travel stories where Ash narrates the plot and collects the elves. It is as good as the original work (I hope there will be more female protagonists).

It seems to be very good now. The logical thinking and writing are very good. Although this is a harem novel, there is not much about the emotional part between Zhi and the heroine. There can be back and forth later, and Zhi does not often use the Pokémon and mythical beasts he traveled with before. Basically, he uses the ones collected locally. My evaluation ends here. This book feels good about itself and can reach the excellent level, but I don't want the author to end it when it is almost finished, so the readers will be very sad. At least this book is really good 👍👍👍[heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt]

As a new Xiaozhi book, it can be said to be very good. There could be more plots where Xiaozhi interacts with the heroines

Very good, the content is very substantial, so much that I feel it is a bit redundant. The acquisition of props and mythical beasts does not seem so rigid, and it still restores the character of the characters in the play. Sure enough, I still can't stand harem stories. If Xiaozhi is still a straight man, and he doesn't understand the heroine's feelings, and the heroine reflects it, I think it's acceptable. After all, it's a reverse. Otherwise, if you write like this, Xiaozhi will appear to be a scumbag, and your world view is not polygamy.

The plot is good. It starts from the Hoenn region to avoid writing the plot of the first part in a large space. Second, the narrative style is very immersive like animation. Third, the details should be appropriate. Some daily routines are passed over in one stroke. Fourth, the emotional scenes are very good, with real multiple female protagonists. Fifth, the combat power has not collapsed. The system's auxiliary function is very strong, and there is no random beast. I hope Tomato will publish more good books like this in the future.

OK OK, this book is very in line with my taste. I try to include all the heroines of all generations. Such small print is very nice.

Super good, Xiaoxia, Xiaoyao, Xiaoguang become Xiaozhi's girlfriends, Mei, Touko, Serena and Lillie can also become Xiaozhi's girlfriends in the future. 🙂👍

Five stars first. I feel good after reading the beginning. Come on, author. I'm going to take the exam first. I'll read it after the exam. It should be fatter [full] [full] [full] Well, I just finished reading the chapter of Hoenn. It feels very good. Come on, author. I hope I can see Sinnoh before school starts in September. And Lila, I actually feel quite sorry. At that time, Lila still liked Ash. Of course, it was just my personal perception. Author, you can write whatever you want. Just don't be a eunuch anyway. I can't live without you 😢 😢 😘 😘