Elf: Feng Ri Fen Yuan Becomes the Strongest Champion

This book is very well written. I enjoy reading it. I hope you can continue to work hard and update it.

This book is probably one of the genres that I have read quite well. There are winners and losers, and you can conquer the previous Pokémon. I read a book before and said that there is a Bi Diao. You don't need to conquer the big king swallow, so I don't want to read it. Some write about being invincible. There is a system, but you don't need to write about being too invincible. You have that super evolution. Okay, and remember when you write this sentence, what about conquering Ryokaza? Even if you conquer it, you can't conquer it now because you have just started writing it. You also want to conquer Raikou Suicune. You have to write that there is a species. This is better. There is another thing that I don't know if it is right or not. Is Z-type coming out too early? , Because this super evolution is relatively recent, and it is easy to find. You don't have to defeat anyone to get it. The Z-style is not good. According to the animation, he will get it by defeating whoever he defeats. Because some people must ask, what kind of trick is this? This is a personal opinion. In fact, Xiaozhi's Pokémon are quite powerful, but they have not evolved. , Blastoise, Bulbasaur, Crocodile... In the end, I just can't write it like this. The team was originally determined during the game, but Latias and Latio were replaced midway. I saw a comment saying that this can be changed midway? It's not necessary to confirm the team before the game. I don't know if you have read this book. That's it. This book is quite good.

The writing is quite good. All the mythical beasts and quasi-gods have been reorganized. It is better than other time-travel stories where Ash narrates the plot and collects the elves. It is as good as the original work (I hope there will be more female protagonists).

As a new Xiaozhi book, it can be said to be very good. There could be more plots where Xiaozhi interacts with the heroines

It seems to be very good now. The logical thinking and writing are very good. Although this is a harem novel, there is not much about the emotional part between Zhi and the heroine. There can be back and forth later, and Zhi does not often use the Pokémon and mythical beasts he traveled with before. Basically, he uses the ones collected locally. My evaluation ends here. This book feels good about itself and can reach the excellent level, but I don't want the author to end it when it is almost finished, so the readers will be very sad. At least this book is really good [like][like][like][heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt]

Very good, the content is very substantial, so much that I feel it is a bit redundant. The acquisition of props and mythical beasts does not seem so rigid, and it still restores the character of the characters in the play. Sure enough, I still can't stand harem stories. If Xiaozhi is still a straight man, and he doesn't understand the heroine's feelings, and the heroine reflects it, I think it's acceptable. After all, it's a reverse. Otherwise, if you write like this, Xiaozhi will appear to be a scumbag, and your world view is not polygamy.

The plot is good. It starts from the Hoenn region to avoid writing the plot of the first part in a large space. Second, the narrative style is very immersive like animation. Third, the details should be appropriate. Some daily routines are passed over in one stroke. Fourth, the emotional scenes are very good, with real multiple female protagonists. Fifth, the combat power has not collapsed. The system's auxiliary function is very strong, and there is no random beast. I hope Tomato will publish more good books like this in the future.

OK OK, this book is very in line with my taste. I try to include all the heroines of all generations. Such small print is very nice.

Five stars first. I feel good after reading the beginning. Come on, author. I'm going to take the exam first. I'll read it after the exam. It should be fatter [full] [full] [full] Well, I just finished reading the chapter of Hoenn. It feels very good. Come on, author. I hope I can see Sinnoh before school starts in September. And Lila, I actually feel quite sorry. At that time, Lila still liked Ash. Of course, it was just my personal perception. Author, you can write whatever you want. Just don't be a eunuch anyway. I can't live without you [crying] [crying] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Super good, Xiaoxia, Xiaoyao, Xiaoguang become Xiaozhi's girlfriends, Mei, Touko, Serena and Lillie can also become Xiaozhi's girlfriends in the future. [Smile][like]

The author's ideas are very good, there are no poisonous points, but the writing is a bit like a running account, and there is no sense of experience. Some actions or expressions can be written in more detail. I think it will be better this way.

I've read so many Pokémon fanfics, and yours is still pretty good, keep up the good work!

Let's just say, just check it out, you won't be disappointed! ! ! I have always listened, so I read less. I have already listened to Hezhong, and I usually don't comment. You can really watch it!

It's great. I finally saw Xiaozhi collect the mythical beast. It's very similar to the scene where I saw the fight against Dakto. Is it almost time to reach Sinnoh?

You are too modest. I think you wrote the emotional drama very well. I think your writing is relatively good. It doesn't feel like a foil. The characters are more prominent. It really feels like a real person.

The author is great, it's very comfortable to read, and the content is very rich. The book is very reasonable and joyful. I hope there won't be any conspiracy behind it. Keep up the fun and love for Pokémon.

Although a lot of plots are watered down, it is still very interesting to watch, especially the plots of conquering the mythical beasts and the championship. The author is great. Keep up the good work and keep paying attention.

It's a pretty good pure and refreshing novel. It's quite acceptable. I hope that when I write about the Eight Masters, I still use the original text and use less mythical beasts when fighting with others. To be honest, it's quite uncomfortable to watch. After all, there are multiple female protagonists, so Serena is relatively behind. If you look at Ash in this way, I feel that the character is quite different from the original. Tomato has only a few fics now, and this one is purely refreshing. Now I basically read Teacher Lu at the starting point. It's pretty good. , I hope the author won't finish the story, and I feel that the protagonist can't be too strong. I have seen more than 400 chapters so far, and they are basically pushed all the way. I hope there will be a more intense battle.

I have almost read the updated chapter. First of all, this book is undoubtedly a very good fan novel. The plot is very consistent with the original work, and it also adds a lot of things that are missing in the original work and makes up for a lot of regrets. However, one thing that is not good is that there is too little interaction with the various heroines. Let's take Xiaoxia as an example, although it starts directly from Fengyuan. Yes, but according to the timeline, it has been at least three or four years now, but there have been very few interactive condolences during this period, not to mention that now I just like it, and moreover I am attracted to Xiaozhi's temperament and personality. This attraction is indeed long-lasting, but this kind of feeling is more like longing for a perfect man, but don't forget that longing is just longing, if you meet a person People who accompany each other all the time and help each other when they are in trouble are easily broken when they appear, just like celebrities. Since Pokémon is written into a novel, it must be more in line with the real emotions of reality. Companionship is always an indispensable part, so I suggest that there must be a plot in the future where the relationship with the heroines is sublimated. , For example, Xiaozhi has an accident, disappears, etc. Otherwise, it would be too fake after accepting hundreds of pictures of the heroine, and the relationship will definitely fade. As a reader, the thinking must be closer to reality, so after accepting it, it is like completing tasks with an NPC. The author has controlled other places very well. The only thing is that the relationship with the heroines must be slowly sublimated.

This is quite nice. Except for the part about being too crystallized, the main reason is that I only watch anime and don't know much about this part, so it looks weird. But you didn't write much at the end, so it's quite comfortable to watch.

It probably revolves around the plot. Dreams come true. Generally speaking, I mainly write about the plot. It also covers the author's own thoughts, but I feel it is a little less. It is also quite good-looking. There are many shortcomings, but I am too lazy to mention them. Since Pokémon lost Xiaozhi, my childhood has completely ended. I hope I can continue writing after the journey is completed. Write to the horizon. Come on, author [Love][Love]

The writing is really good. After this book is completed, the story of the protagonist traveling through the main god space will be completed. With the world of Pokémon as the backing, it will develop very quickly. Now Xiaozhi has the power of Viridian, the power of waveguide and super powers, and he is also a strong person in the main god space.

A very good Pokémon article, the characterization of the characters and the Pokémon's personality are perfect. However, there are too many typos, and even if readers say it, they won't correct it. I hope the author can work harder. I have been reading your Pokémon articles for a long time.

It's really beautiful. The result and process are exactly as I thought. It's a dream come true. But I still can't accept the relationship between Pokémon and humans. Maybe I'm a more traditional and old-fashioned person. Seeing this kind of scene gives me goosebumps.

I have been reading this book for a long time. It was written very passionately before the update, which made up for a lot of regrets. After the update, it has already reached a more daily plot, but it is also very interesting. However, it is a pity to end it hastily due to some reasons. Counting the emotional points, I will give it five stars [I almost cry]

The front part is pretty good, but there are too few scenes with Pikachu and Eevee in the back. In addition, with Hoopa, Pokémon can no longer be taken around casually, and it doesn't feel like traveling in the Pokémon world. It affects the world view. It's not bad. If you like more female protagonists, you can check it out [Chigua]

I haven't read such a good Pokémon novel in a long time.

It's so good. This is the best one among all the Pokémon fanfics I've ever read. I hope the author doesn't finish it badly. Thank you [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The author of this book has a very rich imagination and builds a fantastic and unique world. The ups and downs of the plot are exciting, and the writing is delicate and contagious, allowing readers to be completely immersed in it. It is a rare masterpiece.

I think it is worth reading for Pokémon fans. I hope the author will continue to reveal more plots in the Galar region after Alola. Come on, author!