The Sword of Eternal Life, the Immortal in the Red Dust, the Dew in the Mountains and the Faraway World

The writing is good, the story flows smoothly, and the typo problem has been improved recently. By the way, where is the author's home? I have something to send to you. I'll wait online. It's very urgent.

Chen Yuan said he would give him a five-star rating [note]

Stop the knife, brother, [crying] I just came to have fun, why are you giving me the knife? My heart hurts so much [Crying] Do you really need a knife to live forever? Wuwuwuwu, please return my Liu Xun and my steamed buns with fillings. Xiao Heizi also traveled through time? [What] Can you please stop using a sense of humor to knife me? [Crying] Zundu can't stand it anymore

This book is the only one I haven't skipped reading. It has a strong sense of immersion. The knives in it are very immersive. It has the right amount of laughter and restores my mood. It is a masterpiece [top post]

Fortunately, you didn't write down Liu Xun, otherwise I would send you a courier📦. This book became boring after more than a hundred chapters, and the story became more and more cliché? Ready to abandon the book.

I couldn't see anything, but I saw the knife! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

It is different from other immortality novels. The protagonist cultivates on his own instead of adding points to the system. There is also "No Knife" [smile]. Also, I feel that the female character here does not meet a beautiful woman, but because she is a beauty, the protagonist will take the initiative to meet her.

Haha, the little knife is ridiculous😎 (Although there are many knives, the book is still good to read [laughs crookedly]) Quasi-sweet article, really

Even if you live forever, you will live forever, and if you live forever, you will also live alone. The endless joys, sorrows and sorrows of the world have become more transparent. But at the end of the day, how many people around you will watch with you?

I just read it for a while, and the author's writing style is relatively sophisticated🤔🤔I think you can read it, I enjoyed it😋

It's not that the 8.0 Rating is too low. The books I've read all have at least a 9.3 Rating. The plot is exciting, with a lot of foreshadowing and filling in the pits. You have to be careful when watching it, but it's not too profound. Others say it has too many knives. I think it's okay, but it's not very knives either. Besides, the writing is pretty good, with a 9.0 Rating. There are no brainless moments in the characterization. The protagonist also has brains and is not a stupid young man. Then as for the realm, um... I can say that it was fine in the past. After leaving the mainland, I felt that the realm rose a bit quickly. Although there were opportunities and help from others, it was like the help that gave birth to the Human Emperor. But it makes sense when you think about it. Having the memory of your own big ghost matches the combat power it gives birth to. Overall, it is a good book with no poisonous points, except of course what others have mentioned about knives (but I don't feel it, maybe I read too much about knives [thinking][thinking]) The author is very kind, and don't stop updating! ! ! Never! ! !

Hahahaha, it's so sweet and so funny, I became a reading master hahahaha! Gouwei Town, Zuixianzhai, I saw them all hahahaha!

You can't have both knives and fun! Author! !

(The author was tied up in a dark small room) Bang! The sudden light turned on made his eyes very uncomfortable, "You... What are you going to do?" "Author, this is not a novel. I will not tell you the reason for the direct kidnapping~" An unknown figure wearing an exoskeleton and an alloy helmet walked in. His voice could not distinguish between male and female. The author swallowed. "But it's a small thing. I believe you can do it." The man said casually, then took out his mobile phone and said, "I want you to update it quickly." "Is that it?" The author asked cautiously, and the man nodded. The former just breathed a sigh of relief, but heard the devil's voice again, "But!" The helmeted man walked towards the author, "In order to prevent you from escaping, you need to eat this thing." After saying that, he took out a ball in his hand at some point, "Well! I don't want it!" "It's not up to you." [Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh]

By the end, I really admire the author's ability. My literary level is not high, so I can't feel there are any big problems in the novel, except that the foreshadowing is sometimes too long, which makes it difficult to remember the foreshadowing when I see the reference later. Other aspects are indeed very good, especially for the change of scenes. The montage technique used in many places blends the past and the present, giving a strong sense of substitution; and the use of blank space in many places avoids too cumbersome storylines, and does not completely look at the whole story from a God's perspective. The omitted character experiences are appropriately omitted, brushed over in one stroke, and appropriately detailed, leaving the reader with plenty of room for imagination, and it is rarely top-heavy. Secondly, I admire the author's emotional involvement. Every character is lifelike, and there is always emotional foreshadowing before each knife, which makes the knife look vivid and tear-jerking. The ending is handled very carefully with the reader's emotions in mind. Forget it, it is useless to say more. I suggest you just read the novel. I give this five-star review.

Everything in the world comes and goes in its own time.

Brother, give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. Give me one more episode. Just one episode. Please, I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore.

I have read half of this book, and it feels like I have only sketched out the outline, and there are too many details that have not been engraved. If I can rewrite the book later, it will become a rare and good book for Tomato.

Although this article is a long-lasting article, it was done when it was time to take action. He raised his sword for several years and only swung it for the injustice in his heart. The protagonist valued love and justice but could see through people's hearts. Later, the protagonist's life was not smooth sailing. The so-called half life was just a chess piece for his brothers. The ups and downs made it difficult for me to calm down!

The plot is novel and not boring, the world view is extremely grand, and each realm is unique (such as exploring the sun, etc.) And the realms are all novel. It's a bit rough in the early stage, but then it takes off in the later stage. It's a different kind of longevity story, with more foreshadowing in the early stage, but the plot in the middle and later stages is very distinctive, interesting, and very interesting to watch (✪▽✪) I finished reading it and it will remain on my bookshelf forever.

Very good book. I stayed up until midnight and read the latest chapter. Well... It's quite sweet. Why is such a beautiful book rated so low? Fight with all five stars, brothers! ! !

I have no talent, I only know that my writing has won my heart

"As the colors of the flowers gradually fade away, this life is in vain, as the rain keeps falling." "He takes action in the wind and clouds, comes out of the world in danger, stays away from the world, hides in the mountains and dews..." "But he was never absent."

Overall good, just a bit sharp [eating melon]

I've been short of books for too long, and I finally read something good.

I love knives hahahahahahahaha! ! !

It took me a few days to read it all! Do you know your sin? ? The early stage is okay and has a lot of stories. I hope the author can continue from beginning to end and create more brilliance in the future! Come on, come on, come on!

How should I put it, overall I feel that it is a battle between humanity and heaven. Brother Chen is the spokesperson of humanity and wants to challenge a series of heavenly authorities. Achieve the guiding significance of "opening up new ideas and striving to become a new youth"

This book is better than most of the ones I have read. The character of this book is different from other protagonists I have read. He did not write with a kind attitude all the time, but he went through a period of darkness and developed a good and evil attitude. This was also because I was confused at the time. With a deep understanding of the definition of lying, good people will also lie. Even good people can become bad. It will also turn black. The setting of this book about raising swords is also very attractive to me. I have been raising swords for more than several years. Today is the first time to shine. Kill all the monsters! All evils retreat! Come on, author!

There is no knife, the plot is very sweet and very interesting [cool][cool][cool][cry] Chen Yuan finally stopped being stunned. Mo Zheng felt uncomfortable looking at him like that. Chen Zu was going dark, which is understandable. Mo Zheng felt like he had been robbed of his body, but luckily he is back. Great cheers for the author. The third volume was too long and the viewing experience was a bit poor. I started skipping through the fourth volume. Generally speaking, there are highlights and failures.