The Plot Is Always Falling Apart

It's so good, but the update is a bit slow. I really want to stand next to him and watch him write. Every small world, I will shed a few tears in the end. It's really sad. I always hope that the author will write a small world where they can meet again and grow old together. The plot is not bad, the love, family and friendship, I really envy DaDa. Update quickly [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flying Kiss] [Flowing Kiss]

I'm not very good at writing book reviews, so I just write them casually (I read the one written by The First World) I prefer characters from the main perspective, especially after I saw Su Zhu's character expression, I liked this character even more. [Love] As for Su Zhu, he lives a free and happy life. It's not easy to describe personality. But I think Su Zhu has a very free feeling. During the time when he was treated as a little pet, he did not hold back or say anything. At most, he would compromise a little bit (really just a little bit). He would have his own little temper, his unwillingness to give in, and not feel restricted. This unfettered feeling mainly comes from the entire background, which does not say who is going to be conquered from the beginning (I actually think the setting of conquering is quite nonsensical, is the conquering useless in the small world?), So naturally it does not have the kind of flattery that wants others to like it. In many cases, Su Zhu's choices follow his own heart, because he has never forced himself to accept something. Secondly, the subject matter is also very exciting, which is different from those bad stand-in memes on the street. I quite like watching Shura Field and stuff like that. And if you look at the introduction, the story behind it is also pretty good. There are also some funny points interspersed in the middle of the narrative that are also good. In fact, in the first world, I think there is only one strange place, that is when Su Zhu was hurt. I think at least at that time there should be a natural feeling of dislike, right? It will disappear slowly later. I think he is awesome in the plot. No one can give him a thumbs up after being hurt. Su Zhu is too strong, and his mental abilities are beyond the reach of ordinary people like me. Okay, last but not least, I wish the author great success, good food, good fun, and good sleep. Make a wish and open another book.

After reading it, I really like it. I love Su Zhu (Xu Chenan). In fact, Fu was so angry at first! I cursed him, but he finally started to change, otherwise his wife should run away! It is really good to read. Thank you to the author. I am very happy to meet the author and An An!!! I hope the author and An An are happy! See you in the next book.

The story is relatively smooth to read overall, and the author's writing style is not a novice. Sometimes I will suddenly read a few beautifully written sentences, and I will feel very surprised at that time. I didn't read many chapters at first, thinking I would read it quickly. But then I looked through the table of contents and found out that the author has a lot of words in each chapter, which was a bit surprising. I like the story of the Mountain Festival the most, but the author doesn't write much space on each plane. It's a pity that it's gone after reading it, because I really look forward to seeing a more detailed narration of the story of the Miao Village. Overall, this book brought me surprises, but I still felt a little pity about the characters in the book, which I always felt were a bit too thin.

It's very interesting, but the four worlds of Su Zhu (Xu Chenan) are too miserable, and I feel sorry for him. He is very casual and free-spirited, and will not do things that go against his true feelings because of some power. I really love his character (⑉°з°)-♡

I really love the character of the protagonist! ! This is the first time I see this kind of character. He is very funny and lively, like a little sun! You never know what he will do next? Highly recommended, super beautiful! ! ! I skipped the first volume and read it last. I have to sigh: everything was planned in advance.

The young man is high-spirited, the young man is as bright as the sun, the young man is gentle as the moon Their future and their stories are blooming on the sunny road that we cannot see.

My name was Su Zhu and I felt something was wrong from the beginning. Isn't homophony the host? The first world would have been better if it was a little bit more crematorium, just write down the details of how to be tortured. In the last world, my mother called them both An An, and I felt something was wrong again. Later it was mentioned that both of them had An in their names.

People who never forget each other will eventually meet again as strangers. Their story is not over yet, but my fate with them is over, so, Susu, I'm going to read a new story [Love]

Su Zhu, why were the first two worlds so miserable? This weird young man has thought about everyone, why don't he treat himself well [I'm about to cry]

It's so good to watch, but the ending of each world is so sad. Every time I see the ending, I cry so hard that I can't stop crying. I don't know why the rating is so low. I think the writing is so good and the rating should be no less than 9.0.

Finished spreading flowers ∠※Except for the first world which was a bit rough, the others were okay, overall it was still sweet [Blowing Kisses]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! It makes a sharp crackling sound, it's so beautiful! ! ! ! ! In the first world, I almost couldn't stand it. Fortunately, I succeeded in chasing my wife in the end. When Xiaozhu was injured in every world, my heart was broken [crying]

The protagonists are not cliche, the system is cute, and the author has given most of the comments a thumbs up. So, author, if you are considering publishing a new book, let me know when you do.

Looks great. Come on!

Like! ! Come on! !

I saw it before, it was pretty good

It's quite beautiful. Su Zhu really cried. The two worlds in front of me really feel sorry for them and the Miao Village. I only hope that they can be well in the future.

It's nice to watch, but there's always a sad feeling, the main character feels a bit depressed,

I started watching it from the third world, and it was really good.

Woman, you are very interesting, speed up the update, don't play hard to get [star][star]

Although it is a short story, it is really interesting. It feels connected and the ending is not hasty. I cried when I read the second world. Su Zhu is so cute. The same goes for 77. How can I feel like Chong Chong is so fat? [Laughing]

The subject matter is interesting, the content is rich and interesting, but the protagonist's life is too miserable. Overall, it is interesting and highly recommended.

Well written, I feel that Su Zhu has a good attitude towards life

The emotional line is really well written, but it's too sharp. I can't stand seeing the two worlds. It's obviously sweet, why is it so sharp?

I've finished watching A World, looking forward to it!

Sorry 😅. Forget about the stars!

I really, really love it! ! ! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Shadiao, sweet, let you experience a different kind of fast travel article, recommend, recommend, recommend, say important things three times 23-10-27

It looks great, thank you for your hard work [laughs]