The White Dragon Mixed in the Pokémon World

The subject matter is very good, and the plot is okay. The plausibility of the plot is questionable, but I still listened to it chapter by chapter. Overall, it is a pretty good daily novel. The subject matter makes it relaxing but also has some exciting or interesting parts. But the disadvantage is that the writing style is really unsatisfactory. The most important thing is that you don't even describe the appearance of the protagonist clearly at the beginning. At most, he has white hair and red eyes, which makes it difficult to associate with some scenes of the plot. Although this is a common problem in some books, others at least have pictures for reference. Secondly, there is little foreshadowing in the whole text, and some important scenes are not well described, such as the part where Squirtle and his trainer meet. If there is more foreshadowing of their experiences, the scenes when they meet are described in more detail, and the atmosphere (environment, actions, expressions, etc.) Is exaggerated. Ultimately, the readers can empathize or feel happy with the plots they see during the travels, making them the cornerstone of the protagonist's epiphany or growth. Well, I think this will make the book a level higher. The character creation aspect is quite clear. Later, you must remember to write down the past experiences and stories of the protagonists getting along side by side.

Wow, this book is so good. Author, update soon! If you don't update, I'll steal your toilet in the middle of the night! ! !

Oh my God! ! ! ! What kind of magic is this! ! ! [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] You have completely conquered my motherly heart, okay? ? ! ! ! Is it possible for the author to give them a double-male cP? ? ? ? [Shy][shy]

5 Stars. It's so beautifully written. It's a story about the white dragon Evis and the owl Nightshade coming to the Pokémon world together, and then destroying the same outsiders who "contaminated" the Dark Demons. The story is constantly funny. This is a super exciting Pokémon fic, no flaws.

It's very beautiful, I hope the author can continue to work hard, come on! Author, why don't you change the cover to a white dragon? Come on, come on,

Yes, yes, I see hope in this book becoming a big hit. Nowadays, there are few books on Tomato with the main character being Pokémon, and who can resist a white-haired, red-eyed Shota! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Cool][Cool][Admiration][Admiration]

From the beginning of reading this book, I only read about 50 chapters, and I lost interest in reading it. Today I had nothing to do and I took a dive and read it, but I found it very interesting. In the blink of an eye, the book was over, which made me feel a little disappointed. Overall, this book is very good, but the last few chapters seem a bit sloppy, many issues are not explained or explained, and the protagonist seems to have many life experiences and origins that are not clear. This protagonist (Evis, White Dragon) should be created by the author, right? But after entering the world of Pokémon, I feel really harmonious. At present, I feel that the author's writing ability is really good [Like] I wish the author this novel will be very popular🔥I also hope that the author can publish a sequel or some new works. (The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment)

Great author, come on! ! ! (ง ˙O˙)ว☆☆☆☆☆

I found another good book [Chigua]

As long as this book becomes popular, I will become a senior figure! ! !

Lord Bai is the eternal god! ! ! Grab Master Bai's feet and gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, gnaw, Start gnawing gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw, grab the little face and kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss.

No one commented? This book [like]

Alicia's intimate tip, Shiroma Shota is super super super super super super super super cute♪

It is a very novel book, but the ending is indeed not perfect. The ending is a bit rushed. Although it is normal for the plot to return to the main line in the later stage, I still like the warm and happy daily life in the front (because it feels a bit boring later), but it does not affect this. This is a good book, and it is worth reading if you are interested.

Woo! After reading a novel for so long, this is the first time I see someone with the same surname as me. It seems that I, Otani Nomei, have not declined [laughter]

I just like reading this kind of Pokémon article

It's really nice, I really like Xiaobai~(˘ ³˘)♡ Come on author٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It's so beautiful, the main character is so cute, I really want to think about it... Ahem, the writing is very good, but if you say it's slow in updating, one chapter a day, say it's fast, one chapter a day, and I don't seem to have the right to say it's slow in updating. I've been waiting for five months [laughter] (The most important thing is that everyone gives five stars, so I can't be unsociable)

A very nice novel. It can be seen that the author has an interesting soul and a vivid pen.

Very good. Can the author write an article about Ivis' blackening?

Very cool, but can anyone draw a picture of what the main character looks like?

It's good to read, a typical daily article, group favorite setting·, and a pair of CP readers are even more interesting.

Ah, so cute! ! Xiaobaibai! ! I'm your dog! ! ! ! O(*≧▽≦)ツ ~ ┴┴

No need to say anything, it just looks good

Hehe... So soft and soft in vain [admiration] exceeds [admiration]

So little, so little, Mr. Xiaobai is so cute, I can't help but give it up (((( I just got back from vacation and it's all over, my Lord Bai is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Nice! Who would refuse a white-haired young lady [crazy]

Author, your book is very beautiful, keep it up!

It's really good, especially Mr. Bai, she's so cute. After all, who can resist a little shota with white hair and red eyes? Transformation

Very good. I want to read about Xiaobai and Rayquaza. Hehe ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ✧ I'm looking forward to this book. It's really great! ✧