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How can I put it, I quite like the subject matter. In the early stage, the heroine may have had too many psychological activities, which made her seem childish and too entangled. I thought about it later and got better. First give me four stars to encourage you. Then give me some suggestions without any malicious intent. You can reduce some psychological activities and describe more characters' expressions and movements. It's basically the female protagonist's perspective, so there's a limit to what can be written. You can switch between the male protagonist's, female supporting actor's, and passerby's perspectives. I think there should be quite a few male protagonists, so the scope is not small. I'm afraid it won't work just from the female protagonist's perspective. And some questions I have. Damn, are there multiple male protagonists? Does the male protagonist abide by male virtues? Neither mental cheating nor physical cheating is acceptable! Will he abuse the heroine? I'm a female protagonist, I hope I won't be tortured. That Jiang Wenci looks unreliable, doesn't he have a mouth? The heroine always gets misunderstood! This setting is quite interesting. A passerby transforms into Bai Yueguang. I hope you can keep writing! I think Bai Yueguang should have a beautiful appearance and an excellent inside. I hope the heroine can become the real Bai Yueguang.

I think it's well written! The heartthrob of ordinary people has gradually become more and more ordinary. Although the writing style may feel a bit immature, the details feel well handled and very real, haha! I just like real heartthrobs! It is not like other so-called novels in which the heroine is always abused in reality. The heroine is also a little girl. From the joy of being confessed to the hesitation and entanglement to escape, her reactions are quite normal. Later, when she wants to be more free and easy, she is afraid of hurting others and being afraid of others hurting herself. It is also very real. The more psychological activities may be just more writing. People can have five thoughts per second, but it may seem like a lot when written, but in fact it is not abrupt at all, but feels very real!

I hope you won't abuse the heroine, and that the man's body and mind will be clean. Please give the author a [love]

Families, don't be fooled by the title and cover of this book, it's actually really beautiful! I have always liked the heroine's character, and the author's writing style is also very good. I just feel bad if I can make the heroine's life better.

Very pretty! I just hope that the heroine's best friend will not turn bad in the future, and I also hope that the heroine will not be controlled by the plot [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's very interesting, but the chapters are a bit short. Lu Ze's part is the one where the heroine really starts to talk. The process is very good, but it's a pity that she met a controlling mother. Now it's Lu Yun. Things should develop like the heroine's, but there is someone on the school sweetheart's side. Xu Ruanruan wants to be a demon, but she is afraid that the senior student from Tsinghua University will also have a female demon. It is better to be less female. I hope that the heroine will become more and more powerful, wandering in the forest, either not touching a leaf, taking the kidneys but not the heart, or all men are under the skirt, I want it I'm shocked. It's been so long since I've seen a female protagonist change into a male character, and it gives me a weird feeling [face covering]

It's so beautiful and praiseworthy. The author continues to maintain that he likes the heroine to be a scumbag. Can I ask, will the heroine fall in love with a certain male protagonist? Wuwuwuwu [crying], I don't want to see the heroine fall in love with someone else, the heroine is so beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It looks good. I hope I don't abuse the heroine.

Why do you want to give the heroine a plot where her DNA is male?

Well, first of all, I would like to say that some sisters may not be able to stand it when they see the threat to the system. I will say it here just this time. It is quite interesting to watch the heroine get rid of the plot later. I really like the plot after getting rid of it [crying] It feels so good to have no scruples.

The author's writing is excellent and very realistic. The psychology of the heroine is also very realistic, especially the previous relationship between the male and female protagonists was really full of sexual tension. Love it so much

I like it very much, cheers for the author

There are so many handsome guys in it, mine, mine, everything is mine, why hasn't the author updated it yet?

It is not a traditional heartthrob novel. When you think the heroine is a heartthrob, she cannot develop with the person of your heart. When you think the heroine can only match the original male and female protagonists, she has opened up a new track for herself. The author works hard to write more exciting stories.

It's really super beautiful. I've seen this book several times, but I didn't click on it. I couldn't hold back my curiosity and clicked on it today. I found out that it's a treasure trove of books. The heroine is a heart-throb. She also has a vest. It's beautiful. ❤️

It's very beautiful. I really like this type. It would be nice if the heroine's life is not in danger when she is with other men. Some of the descriptions are very good! Very explosive! Be literate! Love it!

So far it's not bad, keep up the good work [sending heartfelt wishes]

The author is still improving. Although he hasn't updated for a long time, I can see that his reading time is increasing day by day! Why do you only look at other people's things and don't care about your own babies? You have also published a new book. When will you finish updating both of them? No planning at all! But! ! ! ! I believe the author will work hard! The female protagonist is very cute, and the male protagonists are also good in their own ways. I just feel that the author has read too many abuse articles, and sometimes he doesn't know that he is abusing women. It gets better later. Let me just say, how could a mother treat her daughter like this? Keep up the good work!

I like it, I hope I don't abuse the heroine [Sending my heart]

It's beautiful, but why are the ratings so low? ? I think most of them are five stars. Why is it only 6.6? In short, it is very beautiful! ! ! Big cheers for the author!

It looks good! There are just too few updates. I hope the author can update more [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Very nice, I really like this type of article

NB, ah, this world, I am speechless

Help, help, the subject matter is so novel, I really like it. Come and see, this heartthrob has a really clear mind.

Very well written, I love the character of the heroine

The characters are described in detail and the plot is well laid out. I like the heroine [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses], but there is one thing that is not enough. Please update soon [shy]

I'm very curious about the next plot

Heartthrob, love at first sight

Why did the heroine suddenly become a man? ? ?

Maybe at the beginning, there will be a little more mental activity, but it doesn't matter. Later it gets better and better. People change slowly and cannot happen overnight. I think it's quite interesting.