Fine, I'll Come Clean: I've Been Hiding Tentacles in the Cyber World

If you want to watch the upgrade stream all the time, you can quit. The first part is very well done. How good the first part is. But in the second part, the heroine was trapped and died in the Ark so many times and she still hasn't made any progress. Logically speaking, the heroine has such a strong willpower, but she doesn't become more determined in the later part. She doesn't react to her own situation, let alone try to get out of the predicament. Instead, even her consciousness is lost in it. The sudden reduction of intelligence here is probably to pave the way for the man in the back to save her and then enter the emotional line.

Can you delete the emotional line? I feel like this emotional line is really a bit of a failure. The main reason is that there is no sense of CP at all, and there is not enough foreshadowing to describe the emotions. Later, when I see the description of CP, I feel physically uncomfortable. . . What a pity, the setting is obviously very good (PS is a bit similar to the cyber game novel)

Hmm... I feel a little aggrieved, can I say that? (Honest Bajiao)

The writing is very good. I finished reading it in about two days. It is very exciting and has endless aftertaste... I really like this book. The logic is also very clear. It attracts readers' interest in reading and leaves unlimited space for their imagination! It's great. Next time I open a book like this, I will read it again.

It's very interesting and not very long, so you can read it slowly. After reading this book, I think the best thing is that the pace is very good. It is fast-paced but it does not make me confused. It ends when it should end. Some places are a little wordy, but this is also a fault that I have to pick. For example, I described the appearance of the male protagonist at the beginning, and in the middle I also wrote about being fragile and pitiful, which made a deep impression on me. I also remember the female protagonist, who was always beautiful and beautiful, which was quite repetitive. Also, the writing of the final battle was a bit complicated. The heroine went into the tunnel to meet Xiao. Many battle descriptions were too detailed. After reading it, I didn't know who was going to do what. In fact, at the beginning, I felt that it was very dangerous to have a male protagonist in this kind of novel. Not only would one's secrets be exposed, but the love line was not well written and the male and female protagonists took too long to play opposite each other, which would affect the perception. Facts have proved that the author's writing ability is the last word. You cannot be biased just because of the overall level of 🍅. But based on the actual situation, Yinyin's story line has no continuation. After experiencing so many things, she still hopes that someone can accompany her as she grows old (although I think Abyss can also accompany her). Very nice, recommended😘

This setting is very interesting. The heroine is very capable, but it feels very frustrating. Then there's this garbage world, where persecution is everywhere. I can't bear to see the Kraken. It makes me want to turn into an aberration and destroy the whole world. And I didn't understand what the main plot was about. The tadpole is looking for its father? It's really disgusting. Can all these enablers and experimenters go [sad]?

It's really beautiful, Abyss and Abyss are so cute together all the time! The heroine has multiple identities, but I feel like she is still kind. She can endure the pain of having her blood taken. She has died many times in the tests of the Ark organization!

Beautiful! When I saw the serialization, I thought I was cheating, but I was horrified to find out at the end that the main text has been completed! Happy! It's just that the extra chapter is not finished yet. The plot is exciting, and Yin Yin is also super calm and smart. The only thing is that the cyberpunk feel is not very strong. Although it is indeed high-tech, the extreme gap between rich and poor is not big. But it still looks good.

It's beautiful and well written. There aren't many female videos of this type.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking