Something Doesn't Seem Right About These Pokémon

Great... Great, great, great... Very, very, very great... Very, very, very great... Extremely, extremely great... Also, I still can't figure out the novel with two male protagonists. I want to read "Legendary Love" and "Forbidden Love". But someone is too cowardly and doesn't know how to protect Xiaoye. Finally: 1. It is best for the Pokémon in Xiaoye's hand to reach its final evolved form as soon as possible. 2. Except for Kodak, Xiaoye's Pokémon don't know any characteristics until now. It's better to be more clear about it. 3. The characters of Xiaoye and someone (forgot their names) are actually incomplete, but there aren't many chapters. It can be based on: things you like... Things you hate (fear)... Personality contrast... Character characteristics (mainly personality and appearance)... Ability characteristics (such as waveguide superpowers) 4. I think the past of the protagonist Xiaoye is best linked to the mythical beast, not too ordinary, but not too lofty (for example, the son of the Creator God is too unnatural). It is best to arrange ability characteristics based on life experience (preferably original)

It's very well written. The section about Praying for Rain allows readers to feel the atmosphere very well, and the relationship with the other male protagonist has also made small progress. Jill's description of Kodak's feelings is also very good, making it understandable and not annoying (os: Please write the Chengdu chapter, I really want to see the plot about the three holy beasts)

Nice! Save the manuscript quickly! ! [Code hold]

It looks good, I like it. Has the protagonist CP appeared, or is it the person named Kitazawa?

There are very few Pokémon with two male protagonists. This one is one of the best I've seen. It's very beautiful [smile]

The writing is very nice. Comparing the plot before and after, you can clearly see the growth of Xiaoye and the deepening of the bond between him and Pokémon. Some small interactions with Kitazawa Sho and the change of mentality also transitioned very naturally. As of now, I smell the atmosphere of conspiracy and knives. Please! Don't torture me [I'm about to cry]

It's not enough. I finished it in one go. The author would like to work on the coding.

I like it so much, it's so beautiful. Thank you for the author. It's okay to update slowly, but don't be a eunuch! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's really pretty

It's good to watch, and the plot is exciting. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

So... This book will only have a little over a hundred chapters?

Dual male protagonist Pokémon, 5 stars for encouragement [Like]

Favorite one It's really wonderful [sending heart] [admiration] [admiration] [blowing kiss]

Super pretty, a little sparse but that's okay! The author is more important [love]

It draws on the main line and adds a lot of its own plots. The story is logical and very beautiful! ! !

It's very nice, but can I ask the author to update it faster? It's best not to stop, otherwise the recommendation and search for Yangshizi will be downgraded for you! ! ! ! ! ! What really affects the number of readers is that this novel is still on the rise. Generally, authors stop updating based on fans and it won't be long, or they really don't plan to update. Anyway, please give it a boost, author.

It looks great, I like it very much, cheers up

Wuhu is so beautiful

I think it looks good

The author's writing is really getting more and more interesting~

The book that has been on the bookshelf for a long time is still back [Admiration] It's a shame I didn't move it out [Shy]

It's not enough. I like this book the most, but it's not enough.

Good looking, highly recommended, cheers to the author! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

It is recommended to code more words

Give yourself a five-star review [Start][Start]

Love the author, love the two male protagonists, love Pokémon, love everything about this book! ! !

(* ॑꒳ ॑*) It's so beautiful, I support it

Very nice, but the number of pages is a bit short

I feel like the author's way of narrating is amazing The protagonist is also so cute Come on, author!

I personally feel good about it and have a strong sense of immersion. But the most important thing is that there are too few and not enough to read. I hope the author will update more.