What Should I Do After Picking Up a Demoness on the Mountain?

It's very good. The author's portrayal of the two characters is very delicate. It feels like you are in love without knowing it. I look forward to the plot after knowing the identity. In addition, the love affair between the male protagonist and the master can also be written (watery plot, ah bah), and the love between the male and female protagonists is hidden.

Top-notch, top-notch daily sweet article about cultivating immortals. It's very good. It's been a long time since I've seen a daily article that suits my taste. The writing style is really good. When I read it, I can feel the painting. Two words, top-notch. No, brother, why did it end two days after I finished my review? The wedding was not held, and the hole was not filled. It shouldn't be, it shouldn't be 😢 I really hope that the story of the protagonist can continue to be written.

After reading Chapter 50, although many of the settings of the fairy tale are wrong, such as the one where the two transformed gods are not killed by the golden elixir and the foundation building, although the male protagonist is inexplicably time-traveled and has low emotional intelligence, and although the two people meet and fall in love, it is an old cliché here, but I really like it. I like this kind of ignorant boy and girl traveling together and falling in love, which is perfectly in line with my preferences. And the more I read, the more I can feel that the author's writing style is improving. It's very comfortable to watch, and there are no bad jokes or offensive words. I am looking forward to the following content. This book is like cultivating immortals and martial arts. When I read it, I was reminded of the feeling in many other books. Hey, I feel a bit pity, what a pity. The author still needs to grow a lot. In fact, the story and setting were originally very good, but unfortunately, Xianxia was not well written, with too many bugs and too few combat and experience scenes. It's a pity about the romance. Lu Yun and Bai Zhi are so smooth. Without the ups and downs of their relationship, it always feels like it's not that deep. Lu Yun is okay, but Miss Bai Zhi is a pity. It would have been great to have a heroine with two strong characters and her own characteristics, but now Miss Yun is too much like a little girl, which is a pity. In fact, to be honest, I feel that the share distribution is wrong. I should write more about the immortal love between Hua Qingru and He Xiaoyuan, a pure sword heart but all eyes are on her, Mu Xiaoyun and Zhang Yisheng, happy enemies are interesting, Jiang Shangqing and Luo Qiancheng female generals and scholars. These four pairs of CPs are all very good. There is no need for the male and female protagonists to take up so much space. But to be honest, this girl Liu Qingqing is really a pity. It took me a long time to realize that for girls, there are also boys who cannot love her, and I really feel sorry for her. She is the one who wants to get out the most, and I don't want to see her trapped in it and unable to extricate herself. Knowing destiny, knowing destiny, and being able to figure it out is the best. On another note, I really envy the author and your female deskmate. I am really envious and jealous. It would be great if I also had that warm memory.

Quite outstanding. Sure enough? Xiao Tianwen is the best in any genre, but it falls behind when it comes to singles. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is admirable, and it is the kind of youthful love that I most expect to see. The heroine's character is very lovable, her emotions are as clean as a piece of white paper, and she lives up to her name. As a demon witch, she always wants to be kissed and hugged. It is indeed a fantasy novel. It is based on the battle between the decent demon sect. Although the routine is old, it is interesting and enjoyable to watch. There is a lot of new ideas in giving up the genius event to seek medicine for the heroine, not only new ideas, but also heart. This kind of fairy love is the most attractive. There are typos, but not many. Flaws do not cover up strengths. Not enough. 9.3 Is my lowest score for the quality of this book.

The plot of the whole book is really comfortable, the protagonist is not as brainless as others, and the emotional description is also very rich. Although I may not be able to become a god with this book, if I continue writing like this, this will undoubtedly be a good online article. I just hope that the author can write 5,000 words a day. The best thing to say is that as long as I don't die, I will write more until I die 👍👍👍

It's really good, the content is rich and colorful. [Learned]

Very good, no bloody scenes, plain and sweet mixed with it

In countless fairy tales, the long lifespans of gods and immortals tell us the simplest truth, cherish the people in front of you. The biggest highlight of this book is the plot of the supporting characters in addition to the protagonist. The one that impressed me the most is that the two pairs of immortals are different from each other. If I were the author, I would definitely write about the protagonist ascending to immortality but not ascending, and using great supernatural powers to give those couples a long-lasting love. But this is both a highlight and a shortcoming, because the descriptions of the other couples' relationships are too good. In contrast, the protagonist's experience is a bit dull, and the heroine's character is a bit thin, seeming to take over the spotlight. As for the plot, although it ends in a relatively hasty situation, it is still satisfactory. Overall, it is a good article worth reading. I still have to mention that the separation between life and death is the most touching. The love between the two pairs of supporting characters is really touching and touching.

Wc, this book is really sweet. It is one of the rare books that made me giggle after reading "Hall Master Su". I really like the heroine's character. The sudden straight shots are really simple and hard to guard against. The male protagonist also knows his own feelings, there is no pulling, he expresses his feelings directly, which is really comfortable to watch. Are there many "truths" in the book? Quite heartbreaking. The male protagonist also teaches the female protagonist how to behave. Anyway, I am personally very satisfied with this book, but wow, there are too many typos [scrolls].

So far the writing is very good, a very warm and heart-warming article about immortality. The writing is good, the pace is slow, and it looks very comfortable. After watching too much, it's a good idea to come here to cleanse your soul. There is a small flaw that may be regarded as the memory of the male protagonist's past life. He is obviously a modern person, but his social experience is not as good as that of the locals. If there is any foreshadowing, let's talk about it separately. If there is no foreshadowing, it feels like it would be better to just write about the local people. I can say that my cleverness and understanding of some things that I didn't have when I was a child are the result of reading and reading taught by my elders. (Of course, this problem is actually not very big and does not affect the perception) In summary, five-star praise. It looks good, I love watching it, not much to say, 5 stars.