What Should I Do If I Pick up a Demon Witch While Walking Down the Mountain?

It's very good. The author's portrayal of the two characters is very delicate. It feels like you are in love without knowing it. I look forward to the plot after knowing the identity. In addition, the love affair between the male protagonist and the master can also be written (watery plot, ah bah), and the love between the male and female protagonists is hidden.

Top-notch, top-notch daily sweet article about cultivating immortals. It's very good. It's been a long time since I've seen a daily article that suits my taste. The writing style is really good. When I read it, I can feel the painting. Two words, top-notch. No, brother, why did it end two days after I finished my review? The wedding was not held, and the hole was not filled. It shouldn't be, it shouldn't be [crying] I really hope that the story of the protagonist can continue to be written.

After reading Chapter 50, although many of the settings of the fairy tale are wrong, such as the one where the two transformed gods are not killed by the golden elixir and the foundation building, although the male protagonist is inexplicably time-traveled and has low emotional intelligence, and although the two people meet and fall in love, it is an old cliché here, but I really like it. I like this kind of ignorant boy and girl traveling together and falling in love, which is perfectly in line with my preferences. And the more I read, the more I can feel that the author's writing style is improving. It's very comfortable to watch, and there are no bad jokes or offensive words. I am looking forward to the following content. This book is like cultivating immortals and martial arts. When I read it, I was reminded of the feeling in many other books. Hey, I feel a bit pity, what a pity. The author still needs to grow a lot. In fact, the story and setting were originally very good, but unfortunately, Xianxia was not well written, with too many bugs and too few combat and experience scenes. It's a pity about the romance. Lu Yun and Bai Zhi are so smooth. Without the ups and downs of their relationship, it always feels like it's not that deep. Lu Yun is okay, but Miss Bai Zhi is a pity. It would have been great to have a heroine with two strong characters and her own characteristics, but now Miss Yun is too much like a little girl, which is a pity. In fact, to be honest, I feel that the share distribution is wrong. I should write more about the immortal love between Hua Qingru and He Xiaoyuan, a pure sword heart but all eyes are on her, Mu Xiaoyun and Zhang Yisheng, happy enemies are interesting, Jiang Shangqing and Luo Qiancheng female generals and scholars. These four pairs of CPs are all very good. There is no need for the male and female protagonists to take up so much space. But to be honest, this girl Liu Qingqing is really a pity. It took me a long time to realize that for girls, there are also boys who cannot love her, and I really feel sorry for her. She is the one who wants to get out the most, and I don't want to see her trapped in it and unable to extricate herself. Knowing destiny, knowing destiny, and being able to figure it out is the best. On another note, I really envy the author and your female deskmate. I am really envious and jealous. It would be great if I also had that warm memory.

The plot of the whole book is really comfortable, the protagonist is not as brainless as others, and the emotional description is also very rich. Although I may not be able to become a god with this book, if I continue writing like this, this will undoubtedly be a good online article. I just hope that the author can write 5,000 words a day. The best thing to say is that as long as I don't die, I will write more until I die [Like][Like][Like]

Quite outstanding. Sure enough? Xiao Tianwen is the best in any genre, but it falls behind when it comes to singles. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is admirable, and it is the kind of youthful love that I most expect to see. The heroine's character is very lovable, her emotions are as clean as a piece of white paper, and she lives up to her name. As a demon witch, she always wants to be kissed and hugged. It is indeed a fantasy novel. It is based on the battle between the decent demon sect. Although the routine is old, it is interesting and enjoyable to watch. There is a lot of new ideas in giving up the genius event to seek medicine for the heroine, not only new ideas, but also heart. This kind of fairy love is the most attractive. There are typos, but not many. Flaws do not cover up strengths. Not enough. 9.3 Is my lowest score for the quality of this book.

It's really good, the content is rich and colorful. [Learned]

Very good, no bloody scenes, plain and sweet mixed with it

In countless myths and stories, the long lifespans of immortals and gods tell us the simplest truth: cherish the people in front of you. The biggest highlight of this book lies in the plots of the supporting characters besides the protagonist. The one that impressed me the most is that the two pairs of immortals are different from each other. If I were the author, I would definitely write about the protagonist ascending to immortality but not ascending, and using his great supernatural powers to give those couples a long-lasting love. But this is both a highlight and a shortcoming, because the descriptions of the other couples' relationships are too good [face covering]. In contrast, the protagonist's experience is a bit dull, and the heroine's character is a bit thin, seeming to take over the spotlight. As for the plot, although it ends in a rather hasty situation, it is still satisfactory. Overall, it is a good article worth reading. I have to mention that the separation between life and death is the most touching. The love between the two pairs of supporting characters is really touching and touching.

Wc, this book is really sweet. It is one of the rare books that made me giggle after reading "Hall Master Su". I really like the heroine's character. The sudden straight shots are really simple and hard to guard against. The male protagonist also knows his own feelings, there is no pulling, he expresses his feelings directly, which is really comfortable to watch. Are there many "truths" in the book? Quite heartbreaking. The male protagonist also teaches the female protagonist how to behave. Anyway, I am personally very satisfied with this book, but wow, there are too many typos [scrolls].

This is one of the few books that can attract me to read the entire book without skipping a chapter. This book contains sweet love, the youthful youth of a girl, the helplessness of immortals and others, the peace and tranquility of the years, the difficulty of letting go of people and ghosts taking different paths, and even the deepest obsession. This kind of brisk and written language makes me feel like someone is slowly telling a story. Maybe it's because I like this kind of daily writing, or it's probably because the author's writing style is good. In short, this book is really amazing for me, an entry-level reader. Finally, I hope the author can write more excellent works. As long as you can't roll to death, roll to death (ง •̀_•́)ง

Ber is a great book ( ~ ￣ ³ ￣ ) ~ The pace is slow, and the heroine feels a bit nurturing Most importantly, there is a paragraph that writes: Osmanthus cake is the immortal bond between two people. This should be what the author wants to express, right? The only sword is Chen Che and the ghost. Although there are only a few chapters, the sentence "Don't you want to say something to me? I may never hear it again." I really can't hold back that kind of plain tone [I'm about to cry]. They are obviously in love, but they can't stay together for the rest of their lives. I still feel overwhelmed after reading it [crying] Finally, give the author a love [love] I really like this book by the author (˘ ³ ˘ ) [Love]

A very good book, very sweet, without any knives. The emotional lines of both the protagonist and the supporting characters are very well designed, and each supporting character has his own story. There is a young master of an immortal sect who elopes with a mortal woman, a young junior sister from a sect who likes her elder brother, a young casual cultivator who pursues the elder sister of a major immortal sect, and a young genius doctor who goes to Beijing alone to seek the mystery of his life experience. Although the content is short, the characters are described in sufficient detail, and the psychological activities and characterizations are also good. If it is regarded as a book about cultivating immortals, its realm will become blurred and its combat power will collapse in the later stages. There are also word count reasons, which resulted in some more detailed details and characters not being written out later. Generally speaking, if you read it as a sweet article, it is definitely okay. Plus it is the author's new work and it is already very good.

So far the writing is very good, a very warm and heart-warming article about immortality. The writing is good, the pace is slow, and it looks very comfortable. After watching too much, it's a good idea to come here to cleanse your soul. There is a small flaw that may be regarded as the memory of the male protagonist's past life. He is obviously a modern person, but his social experience is not as good as that of the locals. If there is any foreshadowing, let's talk about it. If there is no foreshadowing, I think it would be better to just write about the local people. I can say that my cleverness and understanding of some things that I didn't have when I was a child are the result of reading and reading taught by my elders. (Of course, this problem is actually not that big and does not affect the look and feel) Summary, five-star praise. It looks good, I love watching it, not much to say, 5 stars.

This book is still very good. The writing in the early and middle stages is very delicate and beautiful, and the rhythm is also very good. However, in the later stage, maybe because the author said that the data is too bad, the writing is inevitably a bit hasty. If this book follows the rhythm of the early stage, I think it will be no problem to write about 700 chapters. Understand the author, overall, it is a good book [Read carefully]

The face is full of dog food. There is not much fighting in this book. People like the male and female protagonists can be said to be perfect lovers. The years are full of peace and quiet. Even the youthful relationship in the early days is condensed with the meaningfulness of time. There is a kind of beauty of prose. However, some plots and characters seem to be written in parallel. This arrangement is a bit deliberate. Some people may find it boring, but I love reading this now. There is no fixed method for writing, and the fittest is cherished. While I was reading it, I was thinking, why is it so sweet? It was so sweet that I gradually forgot about the title. Everything unfolded to reveal an idealized harmony. The heroine was set as a demon witch. I thought it would be a bit yandere, but it turned out to be soft and waxy. It was too gentle when I met people. This way of writing avoided a lot of conflicts, but in fact it also brought the article into a dead end. Of course, as a short story, this is enough. At least my reading experience for these few hours was deeply satisfied.

Although the plot is not that ups and downs, it is very leisurely, comfortable and relaxing to read. However, there is a small problem that the author does not control time very well. One hour (two hours) and one stick of incense (30 minutes) are quite long. He Xiaoyuan really makes me cry to death [crying] Why is the wedding in a dream? Feeling a little bit different

Advantages: The characters are clearly portrayed, the story plot is complete, the emotions are complete, it is more attractive, the writing is very good, and it does not look like a new author Disadvantages: Although I prefer romance, the description of the fighting needs to be improved. The longevity charm in the middle can be given to Drunkard Mo earlier, which is safer, but it is not given to the old man watching the stars until the end, which is slightly inappropriate. In summary, the quality is high. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is still half the ceiling for this type of book. To be honest, I'm not saying that the author's combat writing is not good. I always feel that the protagonist's combat ability is erratic. It's not obvious. Even if he is a genius, it doesn't feel that obvious. Maybe it's because he has played too many high-end games. Don't stop updating, you must keep updating. From now on, my three free gifts every day will be yours.

It's rare to see a novel like this that is not very fast-paced and not very draggy. The content described by the author is also very detailed, the protagonist's character is also very distinct, and the characterization of various supporting characters is also very vivid. It is a novel worth reading carefully. The author does not express the love story of the male and female protagonists through very straightforward descriptions, but hides it in various details, which is very realistic. After reading the entire novel, you will feel regretful that it is over, but perhaps this is also the best ending. Great praise! ! ! !

It's pretty good to watch, and the story is overall relaxing. However, some sentences are not very smooth to read. I don't know if it's a software problem, or because I was writing so fast that I didn't pay attention. However, the flaws are not concealed. I feel it would be better if the setting that the male protagonist has time travel is removed.

It's as plain as water, not like some noisy Internet articles, but a bit like martial arts novels. But this article mainly focuses on love. The characterization is good, but perhaps due to length issues, some non-main characters are drawn a little hastily. Rarely good article It's not about the plot. The plot is closer to martial arts

When reading in the middle, a kind of cologne feeling came over me. Each supporting character has his own life. Have your own ideas. The direction of character creation is already very good. I hope I can continue writing and become a great master.

I always believe that a good emotional description does not necessarily require a good writing style. Sometimes simplicity and sincerity can make people empathize more. The stories in the article include happiness, separation, sadness, and joy. Not every story is happy, just like life is never smooth sailing. This is a very good story book about love, very good.

It's very good. It's a slow-paced sweet story with some cultivation of immortality in the middle. I've read a lot of books. This is one of the few books I've read that has a good grasp of the rhythm of love and cultivation. The only shortcoming is that the wedding in the dream should be more detailed, or there should be a grander wedding at the end, and the reconciliation of the relationship between good and evil is brought up. The pace of the latter part is very fast. Overall, this book is very good.

When I first read the synopsis, I thought it was about forbidden love and disputes between the protagonists and villains. But upon closer inspection, I discovered that it was about two ignorant people discovering the path to love. The heroine: has a cold personality but not indifferent, is ignorant about love but is also brave and persevering. She grows and gains love through constant getting along with each other, accepting and taking the initiative to give. He is a charismatic character. The male protagonist: Gentle and kind, he is a warm-hearted man, but he also knows how to act appropriately and values ​​his feelings very much.

Please encourage me with the five-star reviews. The single heroine is pretty good, there is no ambiguity. The male and female protagonists have always been together and grown up together. This is great. The male and female protagonists are willing to help others. The perfect male and female protagonists are not as good as pornographic jokes. They are just too bland. Without practice, their strength will increase like drinking water.

There's not so much fighting and killing, the male and female protagonists have more daily routines, I like it very much! Sweet article, the male and female protagonists have no swords, the supporting characters are well portrayed, Liu Qingqing is quite regretful, the supporting characters in the article are different from immortals, and the stories of humans and ghosts have different paths are very good, but the ending is a bit rushed, otherwise it would definitely be five stars

It is a book that I like very much. There are not so many worldly battles. The feelings in the book are pure and beautiful. The relationship between Lu Yun and Bai Zhi is very touching. It is a very good daily-oriented novel. It is basically sword-free. I hope everyone can meet their own Lu Yun and Bai Zhi [Blowing Kiss]

I have read half of it, or rather listened to the book. The writing, writing, characterization, and daily life are all very well written. Five-star praise. Especially the shaping of the heroine and the change in the relationship between the two of them. The writing is very good. It makes me feel very comfortable watching it. There are so many bullshit things. Although the female protagonist is a demon, she is not the type to do all the bad things. She is stupid and stupid. The male protagonist is also well written. There is no poisonous point, at least I don't see any poisonous point. The single heroine is a sweet and fantasy dog food novel. After evaluation, five-star praise! After reading the comments, the negative comments all said that the male protagonist did not recognize that the female protagonist came from the Demon Cult at the beginning. Personally, I think it was a minor problem. There was also the background of the training system, or the protagonist's combat power, which was not well designed. Then I looked at it again, and I found that there are indeed these problems, but they are minor problems. I still give you a five-star praise.

Cultivation is sweet and gives me a new feeling. Come on, author

It's a very good story. As a sweet novel, this book is very good and has enough sweetness. As a fairy tale, it's still a little less interesting, but it's still very good. Five-star praise [send heart][send heart][send heart] After reading other comments, Bird Food is too short and affects the rating. I feel like I haven't finished reading it [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]