I'm a Goblin, Surviving in Another World

He has turned into a goblin and still has human nature, which is a bit poisonous if he doesn't eat people. You still have to eat the egoism of those zombie king novels. Hey, when I saw an injured person, I didn't even drink the broth given to me. If I continue to look at it, I will be a holy mother. Abandoned

How do you say it's a bit poisonous? I can't understand his profession and switching back and forth. To be honest, it's a big problem, but I can still understand it. . . But I don't like it. Overall, I can give it five stars and hope for next time. . . Can I write something more rigorous?

I can give nine points for creativity, but only six points for writing level. It gives me a headache.

Not bad, but the writing level is below the passing line.

The author writes very well