Expelled from the College and Signed a Contract of Betrayal by My Mother

The shortcoming of this book is that it is too confusing at the beginning, the ability system is not clear, and the protagonist's personality is withdrawn, which does not attract readers. However, after reading the book, you can see the protagonist's personality charm and novel ability system, and you can see that the author has put a lot of thought into it. Come on, author

The purpose of this evaluation is to hope that the author will not be a mess. There are still many, many things that have not been written. More advanced academies, between continents, and maybe outside the territory? But now the written score of this book is really bad [face covering], I don't know why. I have been reading books for eight years. This book is quite good and very attractive. Although there are no people, at least I gave away my tomato balance as a gift. Good luck to the author.

Very good keep up the good work

The writing is quite good, but it is a bit evasive. The advantage is that some places are easy to write about, and there is a lot of room for improvement, and you can make timely additions. The disadvantage is that readers cannot understand or understand, and the reading is confused, which affects the perception. There is also the matter of foreshadowing, which can be buried a little deeper. If it is too superficial, it will feel like it is stuck in the neck. I know I can't breathe but I can't. Overall, there is a lot of room for improvement, but the writing style is very good and I like it. I hope the results of this book will get better and better.

Super pretty

It's pretty good. I get angry when I see the yellow shit button.

Recommended to take a look, very good What happened to the knife?

It's very good, but most of the whole story is about playing competitions, starting with the academy competition, then the national competition, and then the world competition. This competition is about to reach the finale. I'm not saying that it's not good, you should also write some other plots. Author, although there are a few other plots missing in the middle, but it is true that some of the competitions you played are too long. I am just giving a few suggestions. I have given it 5 stars. If you don't like it, don't comment 😊😊

After reading dozens of chapters, I really liked the character and style of the protagonist, so I continued reading.

The author has written this book very beautifully, the protagonist is very individual, and the content is also very beautiful and attractive. The disadvantage is that the author has updated too few chapters. He always misses the key moments when he sees them. I hope the author will update more chapters every day.

I hope the author can explain the realm aspect later, and there will be no problem with the content.

Code quickly! Can you rush like a star? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I just watched a little bit and wanted to give it a five-star review. This author is good, his writing does not treat readers as idiots: I lay out the scene, and you, the reader, are responsible for understanding it; I don't explain the meaning of the scene through narration, and I don't use poor writing. . Respect the reader's intelligence. . It is completely different from the "dog-licking" narration style of countless online articles!

In fact, I feel it's close to five stars, and four stars is even less. The author updates three chapters a day, which is good, so I'll give it five stars.

Let's talk about it as a cool story. The protagonist is hunted down and faked dead n times, and his allies are killed one after another. If it's not a cool story, it's quite irritating. Maybe there are fewer people who rated it low because they rated it low. The author keeps updating, come on! Disappointed, although it is written as an ending, it is actually tj+lw.

It looks great, why the low rating? It ended hastily, a little regretful

Let me give you five stars first.

What's going on? It's not a holiday during the National Day, so it's not updated anymore.

Except that the knife was a bit off guard, everything else was fine. Please give it a good review. I hope it doesn't end badly.

It's a very interesting and refreshing novel. That's why the rating is so low.

The subject matter of the book is very good and the content is very good

It's very novel, the content and writing are good. The author updates both books three times a day. Young people are so fierce.

Really beautiful, no tricks

Good pig's trotters have a good personality and must avenge themselves, and they are not holy mothers.

Why haven't you written anything?

OK, very good, thank you very much

It's indeed possible, but it's a bit stiff. The expression could be more natural. The first part is almost the same as running water and it gradually gets better later. I believe the author is also improving. Come on, Saonian.

Very good, keep up the good work

There really isn't much to write about about the competition [Like]

I still quite like this style, and it doesn't feel particularly brainless.