After the consciousness of the world came into being and all things were formed, the civil war among the gods and the catastrophe of the universe occurred, causing the war to fall on the fate of the earth. The confrontation between darkness and light will plunge the earth into a countdown to crisis...
Reader comments
Well, I just gave it a try and it didn't last long. Let me talk about the benefits of this book first🎇
1. It can be seen from the first ten chapters alone that the author has great aspirations and has built a great world view, which is quite good [eating melon]
2. The number of words in each chapter written by the author is really high🎆. On average, each chapter in the first volume has 3000~4000 words🎑. This is really a lot [note]
3. The author portrays the characters quite well✨, it's not bad, and the plot is also pretty good✨✨
✨Let's talk about the shortcomings....ლ(｀∀´ლ)✨
1. The author's paragraphing of the first 50 chapters is really bad. At first glance, they are all densely packed with words🎂. I can't read them. I can't read them at all.
2. Judging from the author's writing style, there are quite a lot of inner monologues. It feels similar to the female videos from 2017 to 2016. There are quite a lot of inner monologues, which seems a bit awkward✨
3. Um... Second grade two? Anyway, I look like a middle grader, especially with those inner monologues🎈
Anyway, that's it. It's better to change the previous paragraphs🎇, they are too dense, especially the first three golden pictures🎉. I only saw three pictures to see if they are attractive. Finally, I wish the author will get better as he writes✨✨
Therefore, mastering the logic in novels helps to use appropriate logical forms to express and demonstrate ideas logically, making the novel's center clear, rigorous in structure, and persuasive.
Overall, it's pretty good. You can tell that the author's composition is great. However, since this is the first time I've written a novel, some details haven't been handled well and it's still a bit immature. However, the ability to write novels is not something that can be achieved overnight. If you can handle the details and some structural aspects well, the novels will get better and better [laughs]
I hope everyone's comments are honest. It's normal to have good times and bad times.
If you like it, you can leave a comment and tell me, Crab, I will update it carefully
Author, I feel a lot gained every time I read your content. I like you very much. I hope you can continue to work hard! Author, I have read every piece of your content carefully and I really like you💕.
Very nice, no objections will be entertained. [Cool][Cool][Cool]
The author has endless creativity, the multi-protagonist plot is impressive, and the fighting plot is particularly exciting. The book has a dreamlike magical feel, which is fascinating and unique. I recommend it as a good book [like][like][like]
Come and occupy a space first. When more people come to watch, I can still gain an old fan. My writing is not bad, so keep up the good work.
Generally speaking, it's okay. Although the pace is slow, you can code a lot of words this way. The author should continue to work hard and don't be a eunuch. I will suffocate to death [almost cry].
I knock, this is ready for modernization.
The beginning is a bit like the beginning of a fairy tale, king and queen, this is my favorite tone, I am a fan!
The pace is a bit slow in the early stages, but it gets more and more exciting as it goes on. I look forward to the follow-up.
There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the atmosphere is well created. The plot is flowing, but it feels a bit niche. Please give me a good review to encourage me.
It has a unique approach, the imagination is unconstrained, the characters are flesh-and-blood, and the plot is remarkable. It is quite interesting and worth watching.
I quite like reading this kind of Western-themed novel. The plot is very novel, but it is relatively short. The author should increase production quickly.
It's a subject that interests me
Start this power system, 🐮!
I saw the latest in one go, but it was a bit short... Update soon!
It feels pretty good. If I can put more effort into coding, I think more people will read it. I believe this novel will be popular, so I will start with the tongs Liu Ming.
Come on, author, update more every day. I have always liked this kind of fantasy novel. Thank you for making this dream come true for me.
The author is still very cute, hahaha. I recommend more fighting scenes, it will be much more exciting. [Eat melon]
Come on author
The story has a bit of a Devil's Law flavor, but in the first picture I suddenly remembered Crowrido. I really missed it. Tears
I finished reading it and it was pretty good. I read the first chapter twice and felt that the author has great literary talent and I benefited a lot from it.
The author's imagination is quite rich. He can think more about daily life chapters to liven up the atmosphere. This can also make the overall plot more interesting.
Yes, the plot is quite good. The fights are exciting. I have to wait for the update [crying]. I look forward to the next plot.
The story structure described by the author is very grand and has a sense of déjà vu, but I still prefer a little bit of classical European elements in the story. This is the first time I have seen cows in this type of book
The plot of the story is good, the character setting is also very exciting, and the author's writing style is delicate and smooth. It is a good novel.
When I watched Togepi, I thought of Tokepi. The Western fantasy elements in the story are used very maturely and reasonably. The story is a lot more enjoyable, and my childhood must be encouraged. Pockby
The plot is exciting, compact and not procrastinating, and the characters have distinct personalities.
Keep up the good work, I hope the author can work hard to code the words, otherwise it will not be read enough and it will not be a eunuch.
Hey, have you dug up a treasure? This book didn't look good at first, but it's getting more and more interesting. I've fallen into the trap. Come on.
What a cute animal! I like furry little cuties the most. This one is so cute even though it is big. I like it! The characters are also interesting and full of life.
The most important thing for a team is cooperation and tacit understanding. Working alone will definitely not last long. This is one of the main purposes of special training.
Well, I just gave it a try and it didn't last long. Let me talk about the benefits of this book first🎇 1. It can be seen from the first ten chapters alone that the author has great aspirations and has built a great world view, which is quite good [eating melon] 2. The number of words in each chapter written by the author is really high🎆. On average, each chapter in the first volume has 3000~4000 words🎑. This is really a lot [note] 3. The author portrays the characters quite well✨, it's not bad, and the plot is also pretty good✨✨ ✨Let's talk about the shortcomings....ლ(｀∀´ლ)✨ 1. The author's paragraphing of the first 50 chapters is really bad. At first glance, they are all densely packed with words🎂. I can't read them. I can't read them at all. 2. Judging from the author's writing style, there are quite a lot of inner monologues. It feels similar to the female videos from 2017 to 2016. There are quite a lot of inner monologues, which seems a bit awkward✨ 3. Um... Second grade two? Anyway, I look like a middle grader, especially with those inner monologues🎈 Anyway, that's it. It's better to change the previous paragraphs🎇, they are too dense, especially the first three golden pictures🎉. I only saw three pictures to see if they are attractive. Finally, I wish the author will get better as he writes✨✨
Therefore, mastering the logic in novels helps to use appropriate logical forms to express and demonstrate ideas logically, making the novel's center clear, rigorous in structure, and persuasive.
Overall, it's pretty good. You can tell that the author's composition is great. However, since this is the first time I've written a novel, some details haven't been handled well and it's still a bit immature. However, the ability to write novels is not something that can be achieved overnight. If you can handle the details and some structural aspects well, the novels will get better and better [laughs]
I hope everyone's comments are honest. It's normal to have good times and bad times. If you like it, you can leave a comment and tell me, Crab, I will update it carefully
Author, I feel a lot gained every time I read your content. I like you very much. I hope you can continue to work hard! Author, I have read every piece of your content carefully and I really like you💕.
Very nice, no objections will be entertained. [Cool][Cool][Cool]
The author has endless creativity, the multi-protagonist plot is impressive, and the fighting plot is particularly exciting. The book has a dreamlike magical feel, which is fascinating and unique. I recommend it as a good book [like][like][like]
Come and occupy a space first. When more people come to watch, I can still gain an old fan. My writing is not bad, so keep up the good work.
Generally speaking, it's okay. Although the pace is slow, you can code a lot of words this way. The author should continue to work hard and don't be a eunuch. I will suffocate to death [almost cry]. I knock, this is ready for modernization.
The beginning is a bit like the beginning of a fairy tale, king and queen, this is my favorite tone, I am a fan!
The pace is a bit slow in the early stages, but it gets more and more exciting as it goes on. I look forward to the follow-up.
There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the atmosphere is well created. The plot is flowing, but it feels a bit niche. Please give me a good review to encourage me.
It has a unique approach, the imagination is unconstrained, the characters are flesh-and-blood, and the plot is remarkable. It is quite interesting and worth watching.
I quite like reading this kind of Western-themed novel. The plot is very novel, but it is relatively short. The author should increase production quickly.
It's a subject that interests me Start this power system, 🐮! I saw the latest in one go, but it was a bit short... Update soon!
It feels pretty good. If I can put more effort into coding, I think more people will read it. I believe this novel will be popular, so I will start with the tongs Liu Ming.
Come on, author, update more every day. I have always liked this kind of fantasy novel. Thank you for making this dream come true for me.
The author is still very cute, hahaha. I recommend more fighting scenes, it will be much more exciting. [Eat melon] Come on author
The story has a bit of a Devil's Law flavor, but in the first picture I suddenly remembered Crowrido. I really missed it. Tears
I finished reading it and it was pretty good. I read the first chapter twice and felt that the author has great literary talent and I benefited a lot from it.
The author's imagination is quite rich. He can think more about daily life chapters to liven up the atmosphere. This can also make the overall plot more interesting.
Yes, the plot is quite good. The fights are exciting. I have to wait for the update [crying]. I look forward to the next plot.
The story structure described by the author is very grand and has a sense of déjà vu, but I still prefer a little bit of classical European elements in the story. This is the first time I have seen cows in this type of book
The plot of the story is good, the character setting is also very exciting, and the author's writing style is delicate and smooth. It is a good novel.
When I watched Togepi, I thought of Tokepi. The Western fantasy elements in the story are used very maturely and reasonably. The story is a lot more enjoyable, and my childhood must be encouraged. Pockby
The plot is exciting, compact and not procrastinating, and the characters have distinct personalities.
Keep up the good work, I hope the author can work hard to code the words, otherwise it will not be read enough and it will not be a eunuch.
Hey, have you dug up a treasure? This book didn't look good at first, but it's getting more and more interesting. I've fallen into the trap. Come on.
What a cute animal! I like furry little cuties the most. This one is so cute even though it is big. I like it! The characters are also interesting and full of life.
The most important thing for a team is cooperation and tacit understanding. Working alone will definitely not last long. This is one of the main purposes of special training.