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In all kinds of classic Long Aotian's quotations, I did not read ignorance, arrogance and domineering, but saw Emperor Fan's clear mind and noble character, and of course, his low quality. I love such wonderful protagonists!

After watching it, the subject matter is novel and unique, and I love the character of Long Aotian. As the protagonist, he has a straightforward personality and a strong heart; he is not pretentious (what is a cry bag (๑•̌.•̑๑)? ˀ̣Don't get involved, I am Long Aotian!); He has captured many younger brothers with his strength. The plot is full of humorous moments, which allowed me to deeply understand the unique charm of "Long Aotian Heart Sutra" [laughing and crying] What impressed me deeply were the scenes about Ji Ji, which made people feel distressed and at the same time felt sorry for the cute and brave Ji Yun (she really poked me [crying]); and the dreamy boy Shen Xing, the supporting characters are also very good haha. Why give it five stars and not pay in installments? Even though I was sleepy in the early morning, my brain still wanted to read it, and I relied on my willpower to write a book review. How can I allow someone to read such a beautiful article? [Laughing] Come and read it for me!

I really, really love reading this novel! The author is so talented! It's super funny and can often make me laugh to death [crying with laughter] The plot is also very attractive, and I can't help but read it for a person who can't stand my temper. I think one of the things I like about this novel is that the supporting characters are also very three-dimensional, whether it is the description of details or the portrayal of the plot. Among them, the one who impressed me the most is the super astringent! After seeing the back, he actually feels like a yandere for love! Ahhhhh, who knows how super touching!!! The author is great, can you add a little scene for him later! There is also the scene where Brother Fan later recruits a group of younger brothers. I actually saw the feeling of a group image. I don't know if the author had this idea. Anyway, I will always be impressed by this feeling of prosperity! Looking forward to the following plot! [Send heart]

Super beautiful, Aotian poked my xp, secretly knocked out Brother Fan, took Brother Fan away, and rua put Brother Fan back

It's super, super good-looking, but I looked at the catalog and why do they all start with Long Aotian? It made me laugh so hard. Hahahaha. The author's writing style is really humorous [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I love it so much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's good to read. Our Mortal Emperor has a very upright outlook on life [crying] I know why so many of his younger brothers and mothers are fans of him. His personality is so charming. I really like him. The author has novel ideas and is very silly. I like this book very much. Our Mortal Emperor is the real man, the real Long Aotian, so handsome [Sending my heart] Finally [I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want an extra, I want Extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra, I want extra [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]]

I didn't expect it to be so funny before I clicked in. Hahahahahaha Brother Fan is so cute. Help, the plot is compact and humorous. I like pretending to be weak. This is the first time I am interested in green tea, but there are too few updates. It can be seen from these days' chapters that the author most likely has no outline, and the plot is no longer compact and slightly awkward and weak. It's a pity.

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong novels. Both the attacking and receiving characters are super stable, okay? Moreover, there are many profound understandings about time travel and rebirth in it. It is not like some no-brainer time-traveling books or system articles that do not even explain why the protagonist time-travels. They just make the protagonist treat you and me, and force sweet pets. The two protagonists have their own colors and opinions. The supporting characters, whether they are the boss, the pain of youth, or the younger brother-in-law, are all very distinct, as if they really existed. They have their own ideas. They are no longer just a few cold lines in the novel, but people living in another world.

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, ahhhhh. Although Brother Fan plays the role of the protagonist Long Aotian, he has a very upright outlook. I just went through time travel and knew the plot, so I wanted to take him with me. He also has brains and IQ. I like it so much. My brother currently doesn't have many roles behind the scenes and doesn't have much to explain, but he also helped the protagonist a lot. After the college entrance examination, I finally have time to finish the ending. This period of time is actually over. It ends well. Except that Shen Xiaoran's original experience was very sad. But the ending is still very good, a happy ending. Although the interstellar world is a bit unfinished, it doesn't hurt. In the end, the protagonists return to the world of cultivation in the new era.

This book is extraordinary, and the author is extraordinary. This book is a collection of several years of online writing, and brings together several genres of themes (interstellar, abo, cultivating immortals, Long Aotian, boss, campus, system, time travel...) Into one. It is rigorous but also funny, funny but not lacking in emotion. The story line is complete, the pitfalls are filled in, and the ending is smooth. In summary, this author 🐮 approves, and this book is also very 🐮, very, very, very, very, very worth reading.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh After reading it, it is a good book. Throughout, Long Aotian and his little brother Shen are happily together. Throw flowers, bless In addition, the author's later essay on "gaze" was very well written. "The protagonist is the object being stared at, and this time and space exists from the perspective of observing him." A world can have many perspectives, but there can only be one gazed subject in the time and space of one perspective. The plot ends, the gaze disappears, and the subject is free. (The original words of the original text made my little eyes light up. The author opened up the pattern)

Five-star praise! So pretty! This novel is my favorite! The protagonist Shou's character is very unpretentious, and the protagonist Gong is a sesame glutinous rice dumpling. Attacking is fun, receiving is even more fun! Shou is a Long Aotian and a straight man. He still regards him as a good brother, and he is not interested in all the hints from him. The comedy effect is quite good! Summary: This is a novel with a funny style, daily nonsense (currently there is no particularly evil and rewritten villain) and sweet (currently there is no tendency to abuse dogs) Come on! The author is very optimistic about you!

I like this setting so much, hahahaha, the plot is too tight to make me laugh, and the twist in the back is also very interesting, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, sec, can you, madam, do a spin-off, I want to watch more than 1,000 episodes of Huang Yueguang Tongzi and Fan Di.

Beautiful, really beautiful. How to say it? Sometimes it's really embarrassing, but! I just think it's pretty cute. The "fierce" big brother and his "delicate" little brother are so nice! [Laughing out loud]

The plot is online and the protagonist is online. It has to have settings, it has to be funny, it has to be funny, and it is generally a very enjoyable book. The only flaw I feel is that in the last twenty chapters, I feel that the whole style has changed a bit. When I read the previous article, it was a lighthearted and humorous little sweet article, but the last part felt like It's a little bit inexplicable. I feel that it's not worthy of the previous plot. Maybe I prefer the kind of sweet and refreshing novels, hahahahaha. Of course, it may also be that I didn't quite get the feeling that the author wanted to write. It's just that this plot development gives people an extraordinary feeling. The book is a good book, very interesting, and very funny. It is a true love story between two people. One star is deducted at the end. Also, I don't know if this book is not too focused on the love of a young couple. Personally, I feel that the emotional line is a bit lacking, but overall it is not obtrusive! It's also very natural and natural. Of course, it would be nice if there were more emotional lines. The development of the main line takes up quite a lot of space (if this book focuses on developing plot and comedy, just pretend I didn't say this). I recommend it.

It's good-looking and very funny. I hope Shen Fan can really beat him up. I hope there will be more. Alas, can the author write more? Not enough [blowing kiss] I didn't know I could read for so long [awkward laughter] Rated 9.2 Yeah [blowing kiss]

The subject matter is novel and the characters are interesting. The author has really captured the essence of Long Aotian's refreshing writings over the years. The taste is very authentic [Like] [Like] [Like] Long Aotian is very cute and has a very positive outlook. The content is sweet throughout [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Hao Kan, the characters of Brother Fan and Shen Qingran are really in line with my taste. I've seen too many domineering and ruthless types ಥ_ಥQingran is like a resentful little daughter-in-lawರ_ರIt's really fun (╹◡╹)

I really cried to death, wow, wow, wow, wow, only when I really watched it did I know how beautiful it is! ! ! ! Show them all to me. I'm begging you. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. 1. The characters are vivid and cute, but there is real love (I cried to death) 2. Keep watching. I don't know what I'm watching, but the amazing thing is that I keep watching. 3. The plot is really ups and downs and full of surprises, HE hehehe 4. The author's writing style is great, nothing can be said, really nothing can be said (this is a compliment) 5. It's the emotional line. I can't see it clearly, but! ! ! (Uh... It's just a but!!!...) (It's not surprising, but... It's a but!!!) 6. Finally, really, only when you see it yourself can you know how beautiful it is. I feel that the two-part business has been qualitatively sublimated (words cannot express it at all!!!) (Here I secretly confess that the author is really good at writing [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]]

I read it once a long time ago. After I changed my account, I suddenly remembered that I had this book. But I didn't expect that the name had been changed. I still searched for a long time before I found it... It used to be called "Long Aotian is Coveted by His Younger Brother"? ? Can't remember clearly... The first and middle parts are very relaxed and funny, but the sudden twist in the back leads to a very large and deep world view, which is well received. The characterization is very good and each character has a distinct personality

This book is more beautiful than I imagined, it turns out to be pure love! ♫(/^_^)/♫The author has created it very well. Everyone is unique and everyone has their own story (^-^)👍It is just the right sweet text. It fills in the pitfalls and is very logical. It is not just a sweet pet. Other characters also have their own stories! The bad guy in my impression is not a bad guy, just like Shen Xing, I thought he was the kind of vicious big brother, but he turned out to be a cute "little brother" hahaha, he really became the younger brother's younger brother

Looks good [like][like][like][like][like][like][like] I've never seen Long Aotian take it seriously. It's a bit interesting. The laughter is so dense that it makes my stomach hurt from laughing. (Hahaha, I won't drink water while reading anymore. What should I do if it electrocutes me? What I feel is a little problematic is the subject matter. Maybe it's my misunderstanding. This worldview feels a little vague. At first, I thought it was simply Long Aotian traveling to the ABO world, and then I thought it was modern. It turned out to be 3131 years ago. What's the future? ! ! The feeling is much smaller later. Then there is the game "Arrival". Regarding PVP and PVE, I thought it was an online game (the kind of novel where you used to wear a helmet to enter a different world), and I haven't written much about it since. Later in the story, a Zerg appeared. Did I miss it in the book? TAT, this world view becomes more and more confusing as I read it. I hope the author will take care of it [love][love][love] Then there is the ending of those supporting characters. Can the author make a side story to let them live well? Apart from these two, there are no problems. It's great. It looks good. [Like] [Like] [Like] I hope you can give me a copy of "Long Aotian Heart Sutra" (condensed version) And if the author is a big one, you really don't know how to choose a title. If you didn't know how to get it, I wouldn't have clicked in at all [makes a face] It's really conspicuous when placed in my colorful bookshelf. I didn't expect it to look so good. (I just gave up on another novel with a few chapters left, and started reading this one from the beginning [smiles] [love]

It's a very good book. I read it without sleeping or eating for 24 hours a day. Do you know how good it is? Oh no... You don't care, you don't care, you don't even bother to click on the first chapter (crying), the story of the two people is really touching, and there is a lot of insights in the comedy. The Three Views of the Mortal Emperor are particularly correct. It is the first time for me to type so many words, because it is so beautiful that I am at a loss for words. There are also everyone, Ji Ji, Ji Yuan, Ji Yun, Shen Xing, Ye Yan, the principal, An Si, Brother Qingqing (Yamou), Bai Xiaobai, Xiao System, 101, Gu Chengyu, and the two villains (I don't deserve to have a name here and I took so many knives (hate [I almost cried])). Everyone's image is very good, very three-dimensional, there are so many big jokes, a knife and a smile are interspersed, making me laugh and cry. Savings version: good looking. If you don't read it, you will regret it for life. [Praise]

It's so beautiful. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo It feels like they are all real people, that's what a good book is like It would be better if there is a side story 🥺🥺🥺 I beg the author to make a side story. I really want to watch it. By the way, several of the author's articles are very good. Oh my god, he is so talented.

What a great looking rat! The typical image of Long Aotian described above made me think that the author is a man [face covering] The scene gradually gets better later on. It is so beautiful, humorous and funny without losing the plot, and seriousness is revealed in the abstract. It is called serious abstraction! Hahahaha, Long Aotian is funny and cute, and Shen Qingran is also great. Destroying the world of the novel so that Shen Xiaoran will no longer be watched makes my blood boil! In the end, returning to the Xiuxian Continent gave them the best ending [][]It's really hard to let go.

The three views are correct, the writing is excellent, and the content directly touched my heart. I loved this book so much that I got up in the middle of the night to write a review. Long Aotian's character is very cute, his views are really upright, and he is a very gentle person at heart. The career line is relatively strong. It is not about falling in love from beginning to end. It is sweet when it should be sweet and narrate when it is time to narrate. The development of the story line is very interesting, very imaginative and unexpected, but it makes sense when you think about it carefully. This kind of non-industrial saccharin is really rare in tomatoes (the fierce girl sheds tears) Shen Ranran's journey of saving herself is really heartbreaking. He has experienced all the pain, the hardships that were imposed on him and trampled on his personality and dignity, but he still hopes to see himself look different. There is never any accident. It is he who planted the good karma and saved himself. All in all, it's well worth a read and I hope the author can continue to produce such high-quality works.

I really like this one [laughs]. Long Aotian is super cute, baby, you are a righteous and brave Long Aotian. Long Aotian talks very funny, and what he likes to do most is to recruit younger brothers and conquer the world. There are often many quotes from Long Aotian. Every time I see Long Aotian talking, I really want to laugh. I usually relax and watch it and it's fun. Oh, by the way, the great Long Aotian, your little brother here hopes that you will no longer miss your face like a knife and an axe, and your body as strong as a bullfrog. Your bun face is really cute.ヾ(´∀｀．ヾ)

Don't be misled by the title of the book. This article is really good. It's lighthearted and funny in the early stage. You can imagine the way Long Aotian (Shen Fan) looks at people taller than him with his bun face. Hahaha, it's so cute and contrasting. His character also really poked me. He's kind, upright, and neurotic. [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] Later on, I was really shocked that Shen Xiaoran was the landlord! ! ! Xiaoran is so miserable [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] and more! Shen Qingran and Shen Fan are so pure in love and so cute! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] I like it so much!

It is really good-looking, but the ending is too sudden and too fast. There is a feeling that the author will inherit hundreds of millions of wealth after writing this book. However, the ending is complete, but it just feels like it is a bit too little. Hey

It's very beautiful and a quite novel angle. Long Aotian's three views described by the author are very upright. In fact, he is just a middle school boy who was bullied in his early years and later had adventures and success. (-^^-) The description is really funny, and there are relatively few words about love. The subsequent reversal was a bit unexpected, I didn't expect it to be like this, and I felt so sorry for Shen Xiaoran. He couldn't resist his fate and was bullied again and again. Fortunately, he took him out of this bad world ヾ(^▽^*))) After reading it, I still feel that it is still unfinished. I feel like I can still write, but it is over. I like it.