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It's a good read. Some of the characters in it, such as Kuroko, are very unique and it's fun to interact with the protagonist. Moreover, I feel that the speed of the protagonist's ascension is relatively normal. After reading so many Xuan Guan Cultivation, I feel that there is nothing interesting to read. I really kept reading this book, and I kept seeing the latest [laughing and crying] recommendation!

The actual rating of this book should be above 9.5! Reason: 1. The protagonist's psychological depiction and character characterization are very detailed. 2. The scenes are unfolded bit by bit, with appropriate rhythm and reasonable logic. 3. Various foreshadowings, echoing back and forth, are amazing! It was okay in the front, but completely collapsed after I changed the map. Why!

It is a very good novel about cultivating immortals. The setting of the environment for cultivating immortals is reasonable and universal, the characters have outstanding personalities, their growth is reasonable, the plot is twists and turns, it is highly readable, and the writing is concise and vivid.

The quality of this book can be compared to the so-called Tomato Book. The unreasonable things in the front have corresponding plots, such as why the elders of the outer sect targeted him for no reason. As for the disciples of the outer sect who targeted him, it was actually weakness and the original sin. The only novel that doesn't skip chapters.

In recent years, this is the only fairy tale that I can read at night, so it's not too much to give it 5 stars. It's just that the protagonist's cultivation is slow to improve, but in other places, he is a genius who practices physical training, elixirs, talismans, formations, and weapon refining.

Fascinating, clear ideas, beautiful writing, and correct views.

In recent years, there is a rare work comparable to "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". The plot is compact, the writing style is acceptable, and there are few long-winded sentences. Life is full of life, and people have thousands of faces. I hope the author can create different characters more vividly!

This book is good, fascinating and memorable.

The angle description is concise. The plot is fascinating The writing is okay. I have a certain writing skills, and the plot is excellent among fantasy novels of cultivation. It is currently one of the three books that I can read. The other two are A Mortal's Story of Immortality and Immortality from the Sixth Divine Fire, but the update is a bit slow. Do you have any good article recommendations?

Well written, readers can't stop reading

This book has strong logic, many plots are well-founded, and the ideas are clear. That's why the title of the subsequent chapter is no longer seven words, and the author still doesn't stick to it.

The article is fluent, ups and downs, well-conceived, and can be enjoyed by both refined and popular people!

It's super, super exciting. I love reading this kind of thoughtful and all-around immortality novel [laughs][laughs]

The plot is reasonable and compact, and is in line with real life. It feels a bit nonsensical and funny, but it is natural and not exaggerated. The main character is a small character who is forced into desperation by a few spiritual stones from the beginning. Through his own wisdom, he slowly grows up and encounters noble people and bad people. Unlike some immortal novels where he is always being hunted and killed, he encounters no good people. The alchemy and talisman formation is also very reasonable. The whole story is in line with the characteristics of human nature. I look forward to continuing to work hard in the future and not to be unfinished.

It's well written. The ideas are clear and the progress is reasonable. It's fun to read. Come on, update soon.

I have just listened to and read about 40 chapters. Overall, it is good. The rhythm is okay (I personally like the slow pace). The protagonist's portrayal is consistent with his age setting... But there are indeed some logical loopholes, such as how the protagonist can practice without spiritual roots (he is on the second or third level of Qi training, but even the hidden spiritual roots need to be activated but he has not collected enough activation drugs yet), how can he still worry about being full when he is hungry when he can make charms and earn spiritual stones, and the supporting characters must also have enough IQ... But overall, so far, the flaws are not concealed, and I have been following it. I hope the author can pay attention to the details and gain a lot of points. Best wishes! So far, there are very few or almost no modern vocabulary and units of measurement, which is a good point! There are too many plots to lower one's wits, and no attention is paid to details. In the dungeon, the senior sister who rescues a passerby is not grateful, but impatient. She asks for a lot of second-level talismans, and the protagonist just gives them to her? Also, I'm only twelve or thirteen years old, so it's too early to be less ambiguous. Deduct half a star from the review. A large amount of fourth-level rare elixirs and fourth-level elixirs are exchanged for the second-level elixirs that only improve the cultivation level from the late stage of Qi training to the mid-stage of foundation building. Even if you sell the fourth level and buy the second level, you can collect a lot! Poison poison poison

Compared with other mortals cultivating immortals, this involves an additional process of character growth and transformation. They are not bold and careful, smart and cunning, or awesome and coaxing right away. The five elements spiritual roots are uneven. This is a common phenomenon of mixed spiritual roots. This is the real mortal.

It looks good, the author's writing is good, and the protagonist is also very likable, both silly and smart. I haven't found anything very toxic yet. Go to the homepage! Recommended! Rush the duck!

It's really good, but there are some loopholes in some places and it's not very rigorous, but I can understand the author's meaning. If you don't go too serious, it won't affect the viewing. Overall, I'm quite satisfied with the storytelling.

This book is very coherent and compelling.

The storyline is rigorous and the voice acting is smooth. Good!

Haha, hahahaha! This old routine, the same old routine. Met a woman. It means they are good people. Reason tells him that he is a good person. Enter Xuanmen. It feels like everyone is a good person. The story of cultivating immortality by loving each other. The world of immortality described by the author. Harmony, unity and friendship, love for each other. There was no fighting or killing. There is only worldliness. There is unity in the workplace and there are no lies between people. There is only instinctive kindness between people. Well

Well written, the plot is coherent and eloquent

The book is very good, the content is compact and the structure is reasonable! The protagonist has pure views, the characters around him are also in line with normal cognition, and the opponents' IQs are online and consistent with their respective identities. It's really worth watching! I hope the author will continue to work hard and dedicate a wonderful book to readers!

Heard Chapter 418. A very traditional fairy tale novel. It has elements of traditional immortality novels, and the plot is relatively coherent and reasonable. Slowly growing up in the weak, semi-shuangwen. You can read it when you are short of books. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

It's still good, but the only drawback is that Xu Fengnian suddenly appears All of a sudden, Xiao Fengnian was really confused. Ah ah ah ah ah [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

The plot of Gou Dao's upgrading, which involves digging for clues and carefully calculating in the early stage when resources are scarce, is good to watch. It will not be mindless and invincible from the beginning. The overall framework is rigorous, but there are some unfilled pitfalls. It is not the kind of mindless and exciting story that skips levels to defeat enemies at the beginning. Although it is not very smooth, the overall plot advancement is reasonable.

This book is indeed very good. It surpasses other types of mortals. It is not cliche. It vividly and vividly describes the difficulties of small people cultivating immortals. The shortcoming is that it is too slow. It takes 302 chapters to build the foundation of the protagonist. This book is very good. After the foundation is established, the pace speeds up, gets better and better, and the world view becomes grander. Please update it quickly, looking forward to it ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ

The plot is exciting and compact. The pig's feet characters are full and vivid. Less nonsense and no verbosity. Updates are slow and there are few heroines. It becomes more and more verbose, the rhythm becomes slower and slower, and there is more and more nonsense.

The plot concept is very similar to (Fan... Xiu...), But the details are delicate, and the plot, internal thoughts, and logical connections are normal. There are invincible system articles everywhere, but this book is much more normal, full of little characters' growth experiences!