Evil Thoughts Bodhi

Reversal, reversal and reversal, the author has great imagination and his writing style is also very playful. If you calm down and watch it, you will find it very interesting. I have been reading this book during the May Day holiday. I am convinced. You, the author, are doing a lot of harm to me😭🤞You have ruined my Taoist heart. Bull devil's. Why does it have to end suddenly, force the ending, and not fill in the holes? Then why did I finish reading so many chapters? I'm convinced. Waste of time.

After finishing it late at night, I will give a pertinent review for everyone's reference. I hope the author will consider it. Chapter One: "The Rotten Flesh Buddha" is a god. The language is incisive and mysterious. The plot is compact, with ups and downs, and the characters have rounded character arcs, leaving foreshadowing. The second chapter "The Creepy Bride" reads worse than the first chapter. The introduction of Yang Yuqin is a bit abrupt. It would be much better if the previous chapter left some foreshadowing. There is also this whirling world, that is, the modern world. The various characters and "systems" in it also appear particularly abrupt. It feels disconnected from the first chapter, and it even feels like it was not written by the same person. There are also the characters of Yang and Red Lady. The Red Lady was portrayed in the previous article as a woman who values ​​friendship and is full of mystery. In this chapter, she becomes a bit unclear and indecisive. Yang is the same, and she is really unlikable. Some of her pictures even look a bit like a female video. The alternating story writing method is fine if used once or twice, but it becomes a bit messy if used too much. The last few chapters felt a bit confusing, but the characters felt much better. In short, the author wrote very well! It surpasses most Tomato novels. I hope the author will continue to work hard and pursue quality rather than quantity. Come on!

I like the author so much. It's rare for him to use a short story to metaphorize the plot in an online article. Although it should be a very common writing technique, it is really rare in online articles. And unlike the kind of populism that is prominent, the so-called "Chinese gods and gods" are just to exalt themselves by belittling the gods of other places. I particularly like the battle between Shiva and the four mythical beasts in it. This kind of mythological chaos needs to be placed in an equal environment to make it interesting. When I wrote it myself, I also followed this method. There are also realm settings that have been adapted from religious settings in reality into their own books, such as Sword Chan and Night-covering Blood Knife. These are relatively classic examples. It can be seen that they have realistic prototypes and that the author has put a lot of thought into writing, rather than the crappy realm settings that appear to be original and innovative. It really made me hate it at the beginning. It really made new readers, and it was even rare to write a lot of inner monologues of the protagonist in some places. The common problem is that he lacks a direct description of a protagonist's psychology and his changes and growth. For example, when you go to kill people, you have that kind of psychological change, and you also have to doubt your future appearance from time to time. In addition, I quite agree with this book. It is the kind of conjecture in which the protagonist comes back from the future, teaches his skills, and then becomes his future self. But in fact, it doesn't matter, because I really love this book, and I hope the author can finish it and update it when I wake up from sleep! ! ! ! ! !

It feels good, I hope it doesn't get better in the future [blowing kiss]

It's not easy to see novels of this level on Tomato, a platform where cool articles are popular. The update is too slow. The author's writing style is really good. A novel can be both funny and sad. It made my eyes light up.

This book brings back the pleasure I had when I was watching Douluo Dalu in junior high school. I read it every day. I really like it. I hope the author will keep writing. Those who say bad things will comment after reading them. If you don't understand anything, you still pretend to know everything. If you don't like it, you can go away. Don't be disgusting here.

This is a great foreshadowing. It is different from the ordinary cultivation of immortals. I feel that the author is taking a very new path of cultivating immortals. As I watched it, I took myself into it and felt the desperate pain of the protagonist. That kind of helplessness really infected me. I hope the author can stick to it! ! !

It currently deserves five stars. The subject matter is novel. Although the routines are old, the most important thing in the book about cultivating immortals is cultivation, and novelty in cultivation is truly novel. After reading the first part, it is still a good story. The second article showed its ugly face at the beginning. It is a systematic article. I can only say sorry for the system article. The system is the most rubbish.

It's great. The first volume was amazing. The second volume may have changed too much and I'm really not used to it. I hope the author will be more inclined to the dark immortality style. The system is indeed a bit unsuitable for the style created in the first volume. Waiting for the third volume Well, well, after writing three volumes, the author has already started to go crazy, right? OK, keep up the good work.

First of all, this is not a newbie but an old one. The first few chapters are awesome and the style is unique. It is definitely not just an 8-point novel. I read a book before, the protagonist Zhao Yi, with a rating of 9.6, And more than 300,000 people read it. However, there were often typos and wrong sentences, and the plot was not promoted well, and many parts were brainless. There is a clear gap between this book and that one. This book has been read by at least 500,000 people on Tomato, and a rating of around 9.3 Is considered normal.

First of all, I don't understand why it only has a score of 6.5. The writing skills are absolutely passable, surpassing most of Tomato's books. But one thing is quite fatal, mainly the humorous things that appear during the fighting. This is a bit out of place in the dark background. Personally, I hope that the fighting process will be cooler. It can be felt that the author wanted to incorporate lightness and comedy into it. Maybe he wanted to imitate and borrow the writing methods of some books or movies? But I think it's quite difficult to do this and needs polishing. Is what the author said below correct? [Thinking] [Laughs]

I don't understand why no one has read such a vivid novel with flesh and blood, life and death, emotions and meanings, exciting twists and turns, and a vivid background story? It feels like a heavy-mouthed and perverted Hong Kong drama from the 1990s. It is very interesting. Many of the plots made me laugh out loud. I hope the author can keep writing!

The writing is excellent and the plot design has ups and downs. The first two volumes are all about abusing the main character, and the first volume is basically abusing the main character all the time, which can easily dissuade Shuangwen readers. There are some witty and humorous plots interspersed in the second volume, which is also a sign of restraint before promotion. At present, it is not a purely dark text, nor is it a purely sadistic text. It is more like describing the cruelty of the world of cultivating immortals from the perspective of ordinary little people. Constantly struggling in a muddy world, exploring my mind, seeking truth and seeking me. Except for the supporting characters, the other supporting characters are also written with flesh and blood. Several branch lines have been opened. If the author can hold on to his writing skills, I hope it can evolve into a group drama in the future.

The story is a bit bizarre but very true, and the ending is awkward, but it is still worth reading. I can't help but think of us in reality, with all the ups and downs, and when you get better, something bad will always happen, breaking the illusion of a better life. Heaven and earth are unkind and regard all things as stupid dogs. You don't lack the courage to start over, but you are afraid that bad luck will come and give you a more bleak ending. If the ending is that the protagonist successfully stands at the top of the world after many hardships and creates a happy ending, it may give readers some courage to face the present. Of course, it can't be too ideal. In reality, there are not so many good endings with a beginning and an end. The stories in the novel can be mirrored in reality. Human nature cannot stand the test, and natural disasters and man-made disasters are bad for everyone. Finally, I hope all readers and authors will never give up no matter how difficult it is, just keep working hard and you will eventually gain something. May we all be who we want to be and do what we want to do.

The content is quite in-depth, the characters have vivid emotions, and the transitions are the most awesome in novels I have ever seen. Why is it not popular!! Maybe the only shortcoming is that there is too little comedy. Really, none of the characters have a good ending, which feels a bit unreasonable. Maybe the original intention was to put the only good ending at the end? However, the way of writing that prepares for the greater frustration later is a bit stomach-ache (especially the protagonist), so most readers have difficulty in being involved, and they may resist being involved. Although I am used to reading novels from God's perspective, sometimes I find it difficult to cope with the tragedies this time. Human nature is to hope to move forward and to accumulate experience and turn it into strength. However, the world of this article is too cruel. It would be more perfect if the author could add some tender endings to the many tragedies~ (I still like this novel very much, it is not conventional)

A good book will never be buried. From the first chapter [crying] [crying] [crying] to the end, the plot and the cruelty of reality are so heart-wrenching to watch, but this is also the charm of this book. The author's writing style is very good, woo hoo ~ the only regret is that Yang Yuqin, the urban immortal cultivator ended without coding, sigh, what a pity [cry] [cry] [cry]

The writing is actually very good, and the writing style is also good. In today's environment where cool articles are written casually and there are as many systems as dogs, the author's book seems to be very high-quality and innovative, and the author is really strong. However, the low traffic volume makes the author irresponsible for this book. As written earlier It is very beautiful, has a lot of foreshadowing, and the world view is also very grand, which makes people look forward to it when it unfolds slowly. Unfortunately, there is no traffic, so the author does not have high expectations for this book, resulting in a rushed ending, and even the ending is obviously perfunctory. It is a pity for a masterpiece and a pity for Qiu Zhengchu. . .

The author keeps up the good work, and the writing is very interesting. The protagonist is not as decisive as the Madonna in killing, but also has a sense of humor. He shows true human kindness to his relatives and friends, and is never soft on the enemy. He has clear grudges and a combination of indifference and tenderness like a real person.

It's a good read, I love to read it, and as of the latest chapter, it can be regarded as a must-read book for Tomato. It has exquisite writing, interlocking plots, cruel reality, and a unique and unique evil cultivator novel.

I just saw a cool thing written in front of me. It was a quick foreshadowing. There's nothing sinister about it. There's nothing to say. I want to see blood flowing like a river.

Humorous and literary, the book is interesting and thought-provoking Drive high and go low

To be honest, this author is talented. The ability and imagination to control words are very good. But in this era where everything depends on KPIs, we may have to use some skills to not only write the flavor we want, but also to gather the data to make the work survive. Come on! Good luck! [Praise]

The four stars are all for the first volume. The writing in the first volume is very good, especially the ending battle is written from another perspective through the storyteller's mouth. It is very innovative. It also switches back to the main perspective at the right time. It is a very novel writing method. It is a pity that the second volume has some kind of empress system. It was just added in. It feels very fragmented and the plot begins to be unclear. You can read Volume 1 [Learned]

It's pretty good, but the male protagonist could talk less and write more about his psychological activities. The actions and psychology of the male protagonist at the beginning are a bit innocent and not cunning enough. It's understandable that he was forced out by a mortal. Later, I hope that the male protagonist will be more ruthless and perverted. After all, it doesn't matter whether he is ruthless or not after practicing this skill. The pace does not need to be too tight. You can write more interesting things to highlight the changes in the male protagonist. Do you know that Old Demon Lin transformed into a mortal? It turns out that if you want to cultivate Buddhism, you have to have a similar plot. The male protagonist is not very charming and it is difficult to attract people. (Just a suggestion, thank you) [Please update]

The logic is very good and clear, and some techniques are used wonderfully. For example, the protagonist's deeds are separated from other people's demographics, so that readers can appreciate it from the perspective of listeners and make readers think deeply. In addition, the author is good at using dialogue descriptions to outline emotions. From my perspective, the only flaw is the fighting scenes, which are a bit inappropriate in detail.

In today's world where the flow of time travel and the flow of rebirth are the trend, the ancient flow of fairy tales and fantasy will not be silent. There will always be people who discover it, describe it, and try to change it to adapt to the times. Classics will be passed down forever, and classics will also progress. Support every classic!

The setting is really good, but it is a dark style after all, so there is no need to force it to be funny. The writing skills still need to be honed. It would be great if there were mortal bones, mortals, that kind of writing skills. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Invincible, I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and I have never seen a book with such wonderful writing, such wonderful conception, and such exquisite techniques. It is so detailed. Although it is only a short one million words, it is the essence of the book! It must be given five stars, and everyone must see this masterpiece!

Put aside the author's emotions. The writing style, paragraph structure, and story logic in the book are worth reading. To the author copying what others have said: If this book is your job and the income is not good, then it should be treated as a project and should be stopped. If it is after school, it is recommended to continue to output, readers and audiences are indispensable. Fame is accumulated. Business depends on operations.

It's not too dark, the protagonist is somewhat innocent and has some minor flaws, but it's average compared to other similar stories. The protagonist is not too strong in his pursuit, and does not resort to any means necessary. This point can actually refer to the model worker's determination to pursue immortality. However, it is good that the protagonist is affectionate and righteous, but maybe the portrayal is not complete.