Cultivation of Immortality Just to Get Rich

It's well written and interesting, but I can't explain it. It's different from the previous Ganger.

The score of 7.9 For this book is low. First, the overall layout of the book is complete, well-organized, rich and compact, and has no major pitfalls. Second, the protagonist Li Xiaoluo has a relatively full-bodied image, and characters such as Cheng Xue, Xiaoxian, and the old man also appear to have their own personalities and are more vivid. Third, in the description of the "Japanese", it is relatively objective, showing both historical hatred and peaceful use. This kind of tolerance is rare. Of course, there are many shortcomings. Fantasy themes are easy to develop, borrowing from each other, and there are fewer restrictions, so there are many similar works and it is not easy to stand out. The author has some shortcomings in this work. After two-thirds of the work, the work seems restless and rough, with frequent mistakes and omissions. Although the end part is considered, it is ultimately regrettable because of its thinness! I think the author has understanding, ideas, and literary talent. He will revise it well and summarize it carefully. Your more mature masterpiece will definitely be worth looking forward to!

Very good and worth appreciating! Please go ahead and look up to the author.

Very nice looking

The content is exciting and worth watching!

I really want this kind of life

It's wonderful, but it's a bit lacking and not satisfying.

I just finished reading this novel today. It's well written. It's one of the few cultivation novels I've read that left me with unfinished thoughts after I finished it! Overall it's pretty good, but the description of the protagonist's martial arts is too mythical! In the cultivation novels from more than ten years ago, a master in the foundation building stage and the golden elixir stage who was in his twenties was not as miraculous as you described. With such a low level, he could fly into the sky and escape the earth and become omnipotent! Then how do you describe it when it comes to the state of transformation, refining, integrating, overcoming tribulations, and the Mahayana? This may be the reason why your novel has so few fans and reviews! I was originally going to give you a five-star rating, but now I'm giving you a four-star rating. I hope you will continue to work hard and write high-level cultivation novels!

It is quite modern, both Israel and Palestine have come out. The main thing is that the male protagonist has three correct views, does not bully the weak, and has his own moral bottom line. This is worth appreciating.

The best novel I've read recently, keep it up!

This book is well written, and the content is quite substantial. By chance, I saved my ancestor, and from then on I reached the peak of my life. It is worth reading.

Clear thinking, very good

It's not bad. The author is a bit of an angry young man, so he writes well.

Well, not bad, the plot is smooth and the killing is decisive. The ending is pretty good, at least I like it.

A good book, worth reading.

Very well written. Without further ado, please continue to work hard on your creation.

This book is the most serious one I have read among the cultivation novels. I like it very much.

Very good! Worth a look!

It's really well written, but a little short.

Warigood, Warigood!

It's pretty good, give it five stars

I really dare to write! That's why I'm giving it five stars.

Not bad, but the update speed is slow! [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Killing decisively will relieve your anger. I hope you will stop thinking in the same old way and come up with ways to rule the whole people of China and practice cultivation!

A very nice book, I like it very much

A rare good book! Worth a visit. Please update faster.

The content is very rich and the writing is also good. I dare to write and explode, so I must give it a thumbs up 👍 but the ending is a bit hasty! It won't happen next time [cool]

Well written and very creative, keep up the good work and look forward to you!

The book is very layered and the character descriptions are good.

Simple and neat, no procrastination, this is great for cultivating immortality!