The Warrior's Summit and Alaya's Guardian

There are many typos and omissions; the person's pronoun changes frequently in the front (it gets better in the back); the plot develops quickly, making it difficult to understand; the introduction does not indicate important information and worldview, but only writes the introduction to the first volume.

The protagonist and Alaya are tools that they use when they are useful and throw away when they are no longer useful! He also protects human beings and has nothing to do with the protagonist. He works for nothing and his wife is just gone. What a waste!

Monsters and Ultraman are responsible for fighting. What are the elves used for? Whether it's cooking or scraping, any fighter can be used to replace it, but I prefer to use an elf.

6. Why was Kurumi Tokisaki not killed by the protagonist? There was so much foreshadowing, I thought sanctions would finally come. There was still a chance of not killing the other elves. Kurumi Tokisaki was so ink when I saw that he would include Mio Takamiya as a guardian in the future. Don't be kidding. That thing is not even human in nature. How many people did it kill indirectly? Just take that thing out and shoot it 300 times according to the criminal law. In ancient times, it was the treatment of being quartered.

The writing is okay, but the plot develops a bit too fast and I can't react very quickly. 😏

The way you write it feels weird. It's first person and then second person, and then in the middle there are some flashbacks and some big plots that come out of nowhere without any foreshadowing.