Juvenile*************

Very good, author, come on! Missing some punctuation marks, overall pretty good

It's a bit of a soliloquy, and the writing format isn't quite right, but it's still fluent, and it's a unique shounen song fanfic. Except for Golden Finger, it is more reasonable. Unlike other novels, which are overly obscene, the master, beauty, and inheritance do not come out of thin air. I can bear to read this book. It's very good. Come on, author [smile]

Come on, this is a good book but I can't get enough of it! Maotie